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madrid3423

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Nov 21, 2017
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Renders are excellent but i do think the script contains some engrish and needs some minor rewrite. Otherwise a very decent start of the game.
 

Pmaria

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Mar 30, 2022
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nice renders but what is the story on this? If the dev needs to get some money he needs a story. And at this point there is no story
 

DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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awesome renders, so lifelike. little confused about Nichole and kendra. Are they sisters and is kendra the exwife of the landlors and thats why she hates nichole? Anyway, good start, and i would love to see this be a harem game, also if its ntr can it be netorare, so we can fuck the landlords wi
 
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hysepReC

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awesome renders, so lifelike. little confused about Nichole and kendra. Are they sisters and is kendra the exwife of the landlors and thats why she hates nichole? Anyway, good start, and i would love to see this be a harem game, also if its ntr can it be netorare, so we can fuck the landlords wi
I don't think they are sisters. Nicole is the MC's stepmother, the dad probably cheated on Kendra with her or something like that.
 
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mastereiswolf

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Oct 8, 2017
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Cool ... i love your renders ... the girls, ladies always wearing sexy outfits, high heels and jewellery ... a wonderful eye catcher.
Keep on your good work !!!!
 
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After a grueling few hours or so, I managed to make an Incest patch, that also improves the grammar and spelling mistakes. I'll put in a list of what I have added. Sadly - I am not a comedian, so expect there to be some cringe.
  • Changed the Dynamic names to add incest
  • Removed unused labels and meaningless choices (Well, all of the choices are kind of meaningless but I removed the ones that actually didn't do anything, such as the choice where MC chooses to jerk off or not, but you don't actually get to jerk off)
  • The doorbell ringing gets looped so I fixed it
  • Added some quotes to make the text just a little more condescending (Indirect implications are sometimes my favorite, lol)
  • Added some wait tags
  • Added some comedy and humor - who doesn't love a funny porn game?
  • Created a "POV" character, so if the name disappears, it's the MC talking.
  • I assumed Bruce was supposed to be the Dad but had to be renamed to Landlord because of stupid Patreon, so I made Bruce the father of the MC and Amanda.
  • It appears that there were 2 N's defined, which caused Nicole's name to show up as "Unknown" instead of "Nicole". I fixed it by transferring all of Nicole's dialogue before she reveals her name to my custom defined "Unknown" character.
  • Some choices were quite useless and jumped to undefined labels. I removed the unused labels.
So, that's what I fixed and added. And the installation? Replace the "scripts.rpa" file with this one. Make sure to backup the original file if anything goes wrong. Happy incest-ing.
 

Kronosis

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Oct 27, 2020
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Pretty good so far. Looks like there will be some really fun interactions for the main protagonist. Beyond the demo, I can't wait for the first official release. Good luck.
 
2.70 star(s) 16 Votes