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KoutaruArts

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Hello everyone! i just wanted to give you guys a little update on the game i was making... i know i went silent without giving any information, but i've been working on the game during my free time and i've finished making the 1st part of it. I actually wanted to make it 1 shot without any parts but i wanted to hear your opinion on the story and the change in character personalities in my game! i've turned Gloria into a sweet ideal Milf instead of her being bitchy in the original game and Linda here is quite naive and horny. The game for now will focus only on Linda and Gloria since they both are like yin yang and were the primary focus even in the legacy game. But ofcourse there will be other side characters sex scenes here and there but they won't add anything major to storyline. I personally believe the dialogues are little bit stretched and looks like a japanese VN since you're playing the game as yourself and not as JOE. i'm not completely satisfied with them since they overexaggerate a lot and once the game is out you guys can give an opinion on it to change or keep it. what i had in mind was completely different game where you can interact with items and travel to the different parts using map or the limousine like the original game, but that was too much work for me to handle all alone atm and instead i decided to make a choice based VN where your decision effect the outcome. I will also be making a mobile version too and i'm aiming to release the game early next week as there are little more dialogues to be added have to rectify any following errors made. I'm Really looking forward on your opinion and suggestion to make this game better and finish what the original devs didn't.

Thanks and light speed!!

PS: i've no idea why i can't upload image quality higher than 10mb. Did F95 change anything related to image or file upload? i even had to compress and make the preview shots iam showing side by side in one big picture instead of a video or individual pics. View attachment 1871287
So far it looking very Awesome, good job(y)(y)
 
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KoutaruArts

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Sorrie guys but Linda character got me and I made another Sketch of her hope ya like it. P.D: got asked if I'm doing a game and nhay I just did a lil fan-art of Linda, I was w8 for a long time a scene with her with no protection but at my knowledge it never came so I been like Why they left the game unfinish why not make a very short ending where you have sex with the character's left to have and a non protected one for Linda and the end.. even if it lack of stuff and story it would be better than abbandon this project we all loved.

Had to Compress it the actual size is 8586x4829 px xD wmmn8cng.jpg

also can someone share me a saved whit Linda scene I mean no gallery but saved state cause gallery in game kinda suck tbh..
 

KoutaruArts

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Sep 3, 2019
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Hello everyone! i just wanted to give you guys a little update on the game i was making... i know i went silent without giving any information, but i've been working on the game during my free time and i've finished making the 1st part of it. I actually wanted to make it 1 shot without any parts but i wanted to hear your opinion on the story and the change in character personalities in my game! i've turned Gloria into a sweet ideal Milf instead of her being bitchy in the original game and Linda here is quite naive and horny. The game for now will focus only on Linda and Gloria since they both are like yin yang and were the primary focus even in the legacy game. But ofcourse there will be other side characters sex scenes here and there but they won't add anything major to storyline. I personally believe the dialogues are little bit stretched and looks like a japanese VN since you're playing the game as yourself and not as JOE. i'm not completely satisfied with them since they overexaggerate a lot and once the game is out you guys can give an opinion on it to change or keep it. what i had in mind was completely different game where you can interact with items and travel to the different parts using map or the limousine like the original game, but that was too much work for me to handle all alone atm and instead i decided to make a choice based VN where your decision effect the outcome. I will also be making a mobile version too and i'm aiming to release the game early next week as there are little more dialogues to be added have to rectify any following errors made. I'm Really looking forward on your opinion and suggestion to make this game better and finish what the original devs didn't.

Thanks and light speed!!

PS: i've no idea why i can't upload image quality higher than 10mb. Did F95 change anything related to image or file upload? i even had to compress and make the preview shots iam showing side by side in one big picture instead of a video or individual pics. View attachment 1871287
wanna share a Idea why Instead of making the full game from 0 you don't start from where dev left it and make it a sequel of the abandon one?
 
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BlueRocketMan

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Can believe that it over , I just finished the final update and still cant believe it , with how the story was going , I did have alittle hope seeing how they made gallery for game in the discreen recently but I don't know , just sad to see it gone
 
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KoutaruArts

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Can believe that it over , I just finished the final update and still cant believe it , with how the story was going , I did have alittle hope seeing how they made gallery for game in the discreen recently but I don't know , just sad to see it gone
It quiet one of the best game I had played by long time so sad they Abandon I still don't understand they reasons and too Sadly their Gallery kinda suck it better to have save state of the sexual scene instead tbh
 

Xia Liu Bei

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I've turned Gloria into a sweet ideal Milf instead of her being bitchy in the original game and Linda here is quite naive and horny.
I loved Gloria as a bitch. It's part of what made her so hot. You have to understand the dynamics of the relationship between Gloria and Joey to know how it created sexual tension. Gloria is a rich, wealthy elite. Joey, not. It starts out with her looking down on Joey, thinking she would be able to take advantage of him, push him around, etc...

As the sexual relationship develops, she can become softer and softer, but you absolutely can't have her weak and pliable from the beginning. It isn't who she is, and it takes all the sexiness of the character away.
 

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I loved Gloria as a bitch. It's part of what made her so hot. You have to understand the dynamics of the relationship between Gloria and Joey to know how it created sexual tension. Gloria is a rich, wealthy elite. Joey, not. It starts out with her looking down on Joey, thinking she would be able to take advantage of him, push him around, etc...

As the sexual relationship develops, she can become softer and softer, but you absolutely can't have her weak and pliable from the beginning. It isn't who she is, and it takes all the sexiness of the character away.
Totally agree about Gloria.
If anything, the problem in MD was that the clever rich bitch Gloria loses much of her aura of cleverness by giving in to Joey too quickly, too easily.
Linda, on the other hand, is much too grumpy with Joey through much of the game. Change that to make her "softer" but still firmly against Joey's advances. More pain for Joey at the beginning, but more gain later.
 

solidsnake322

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I loved Gloria as a bitch. It's part of what made her so hot. You have to understand the dynamics of the relationship between Gloria and Joey to know how it created sexual tension. Gloria is a rich, wealthy elite. Joey, not. It starts out with her looking down on Joey, thinking she would be able to take advantage of him, push him around, etc...

As the sexual relationship develops, she can become softer and softer, but you absolutely can't have her weak and pliable from the beginning. It isn't who she is, and it takes all the sexiness of the character away.
Gloria is authoritarian and doesn't flex according to player. She is sweet as long as you do what you're told to do! If not she will force yourself on you. Since Gloria is rich and full of pride she doesn't go around sleeping with men she sees as Inferior in her standard, and she doesn't do it with her Husband since he is a old and she only likes young men and unfortunately thats how i made her to be in my game. 1655820406922.png
The reason for that is the you the player already had a long time relationship with Gloria before starting the game! It was my idea in a way to show her sex scenes much faster instead of making you guys wait for hours to get her scenes where you have to persuade her and progress in game wasting your time. i just wanted to get to the main plot in a snap like a simple VN. since this is still the beginning of the story i can make heavy changes according to what majority wants. The first part will tell you the story from my perspective, if the players don't like it then i can change the story and update the game.
 

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Gloria is authoritarian and doesn't flex according to player. She is sweet as long as you do what you're told to do! If not she will force yourself on you. Since Gloria is rich and full of pride she doesn't go around sleeping with men she sees as Inferior in her standard, and she doesn't do it with her Husband since he is a old and she only likes young men and unfortunately thats how i made her to be in my game. View attachment 1883222
The reason for that is the you the player already had a long time relationship with Gloria before starting the game! It was my idea in a way to show her sex scenes much faster instead of making you guys wait for hours to get her scenes where you have to persuade her and progress in game wasting your time. i just wanted to get to the main plot in a snap like a simple VN. since this is still the beginning of the story i can make heavy changes according to what majority wants. The first part will tell you the story from my perspective, if the players don't like it then i can change the story and update the game.
I hope there are lots of CGs about Gloria! I'm always rooting for you!
 

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The reason for that is the you the player already had a long time relationship with Gloria before starting the game! It was my idea in a way to show her sex scenes much faster instead of making you guys wait for hours to get her scenes where you have to persuade her and progress in game wasting your time.
Please not too fast.
Otherwise, it will not be a game anymore, just another VN.
 

solidsnake322

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Please not too fast.
Otherwise, it will not be a game anymore, just another VN.
I can drag and make the game longer for hours with 1 scene each at a time instead, But most people are against it. I just wanted to make a quick game instead of wasting people time for hours like how original game did.

But if people want the game to be like 20-25 hrs longer with web of choices, Its not too late for me to go back and rewrite stuff.
 

solidsnake322

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Hahaha relax bruv, i wont make it unnecessarily long.




^^^ I've attached a link above which directs you to the poll where you can vote for the game to be lengthy or not.


I humbly suggest everyone to vote so that i can decide what you guys want, Adding few more dialogues and normal scenes won't take that long so don't worry.
 
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haoqibaobao

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Gloria is authoritarian and doesn't flex according to player. She is sweet as long as you do what you're told to do! If not she will force yourself on you. Since Gloria is rich and full of pride she doesn't go around sleeping with men she sees as Inferior in her standard, and she doesn't do it with her Husband since he is a old and she only likes young men and unfortunately thats how i made her to be in my game. View attachment 1883222
The reason for that is the you the player already had a long time relationship with Gloria before starting the game! It was my idea in a way to show her sex scenes much faster instead of making you guys wait for hours to get her scenes where you have to persuade her and progress in game wasting your time. i just wanted to get to the main plot in a snap like a simple VN. since this is still the beginning of the story i can make heavy changes according to what majority wants. The first part will tell you the story from my perspective, if the players don't like it then i can change the story and update the game.
Maybe people have different understand about what does "Sweet" or "Bitchy Way" mean, your decision seems also reasonable since they already had a long relationship, so it could also not take too much time for players to put his paints down, for my aspect Gloria is a woman which is "expensive", "dominate" and somehow try to "manipulate" our player, always told him "if i want fxxk " the player has to fxxk with her, even sometimes the palyer is horny but she did not want then she will rufuse to do so (even maybe give him a littel tease) she tried to force palyer to do something to achieve her " Evil Goals“ (Money, Power , revenge what ever this woman looks for) and player try to follow it somehow in his own way, which also leads to a funny result that Gloria did not expect 100% and then the she started to plan something new in another round etc. This is my understanding how did the "Gloria Line" developed in this story, for the fxxk sence sofar as i understood either Gloria has a feeling that things moving on then she is in good mood and then she will reward player for a fxxk or sometimes she is pissed off (Like seems some other woman is dropped the attention of player and she is feeling threatened and try to teas and do the player to show she is a sexy woman etc or she is pissed off from other people for exp her husband and then she will do the player to release her tension, or to prove that someone is attracted by her, and i think this humanity make her like a special woman somehow). Nevertheless, we will never now how does your project look like, so still recommend you to release the first pilot project and let us take a deep look, if you have interest and this also make fun for you, you can always make adjsutment.
 

Xia Liu Bei

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I can drag and make the game longer for hours with 1 scene each at a time instead, But most people are against it. I just wanted to make a quick game instead of wasting people time for hours like how original game did.

But if people want the game to be like 20-25 hrs longer with web of choices, Its not too late for me to go back and rewrite stuff.
I don’t think anyone wants the game to drag on for hours. I think a lot of us just want the characters to be the same characters we fell in love with, instead of entirely new characters that just happen to look like the old ones.

Either way, it’s your version and you’re doing the hard work, so you do it according to your vision.
 
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