Say hello to my first render "Linda the Rocker" with many failure. I'm waiting for your advices.
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You need to convert the hair to iray manually to lose that dripping wax look. Also fit the hair manually, if you used autofit, since she doesn't have a bald spot. Some will mind the hair color
Not sure about the lips, either.
I did my own characters (and still do) for the first month, month and a half of learning daz studio. I'd recommend it to you, as well, so you learn the basics without having the pressure of trying to replicate a professional (icstor). Can have a lot of fun that way, too
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