- I've just started the game and wanted to give the exact notice about that - almost every sentence...I've tried to ignore it, but...it's there, so...anyway:good start. a note about the small text, you dont need to emphases what they are doing like you are writing a book, this for example:
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i literally can see she is doing that. save that text when you want convey complex emotion that a difficult to see. that being said write however you please, im not your English teacher, i just dont think its necessary to write like that.
Just want to say I 200% agree with this. The descriptions often end up distracting rather than enhancing the experience.good start. a note about the small text, you dont need to emphases what they are doing like you are writing a book, this for example:
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i literally can see she is doing that. save that text when you want convey complex emotion that a difficult to see. that being said write however you please, im not your English teacher, i just dont think its necessary to write like that.
Lets see if its continued after the dev was instructed to contact the author Nick Storming regarding the devs unauthorised use of the story and text from Nicks novel MILF Mansion Inheritance.
I hope so; Nicks books are awesome and the dev is putting very pretty faces to the novels characters.
Don't worryI wouldn't be surprised if this game gets abbandoned, good games always get abbandoned.
I second that. The current genre list is obviously incompleteWhat are the future tags dev? Harem? ntr/sharing? Pregnancy?
I'm curious about where the game is going to go as well.
Like it a lot.
Of course, it's only been out for 2 weeks, so I guess the Dev can sleep at least a little
bit right?.... lol
Cheers
here so you don't have to waitLOL, not sure if intentional or not but this sure sounds like this book....
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