Hi everyone. While everyone is waiting for the new update, I'd like to offer you all an appetizer - a fan fiction story I've just finished.
It's not for everyone, though, since it belongs to the Octavia's corruption route. It's definitely on the maledom side, so even Octavia's adorers should beware.
After a long consideration I decided to write an a sort of a reimagining for the Day 18 Octavia's scene in "Mask". It's not that the original is bad - no. I guess I just didn't 'click' with the scene's general direction. I wrote about it in detail in this very thread, so I won't bore you and repeat myself. Anyhow, I wrote this fic to make the scene more personal, more intimate. And I'm not at all sure I've succeeded that, because it feels that I'm actually went overboard with the whole "intimate" part. As I was writing the first draft, I realized that it's just way too mild and playful and romantic for the corruption route. No surprises here - I love this shit. But this particular shit was more fit for the romance route, so I wrote the second version - this time for the real bad boys. And I didn't like it half as much - it turned out to be way too dark for me. So I've been left with a feeling that one option was too "pink", and the other one too grim and dark. I guess I could've try and find an average between these two values, but instead of that I decided to give power to the players and post everything.
I divided the fic to three parts - the intro part and then two different routes branching from the single decision at the end of the intro part. You know, it's like those "choose your own adventure" books from the 80's.
Two things are left to say. First - it's quite long. I'm not sure, perhaps three or four times longer than the original scene. Second - my English sucks, I kinda rushed it and I'm sleepy as heck. So it's probably full of mistakes and incorrect sentence constructions. Please report all the screw ups, big and small. And don't forget to just criticize it to your heart's content.
That's it, hope you'll enjoy as much as I did, guys. I'm off to bed.
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