This game is by far the best I've played in this genre. It's clear that the developer has grown a lot since his first game in terms of plot and illustration.
All the main characters are interesting, Leo is not made into an ordinary boring main character, and by the end of the plot he becomes more mature and serious.
Although, there are moments in the game that could be improved.
For example, the system of points and perks received by the characters.
I'll give you an example - If you just go to bed for Leo and don't watch what Luna does at night, then she will automatically choose Ivier. Although, if you do this for the first time, nothing will happen except that her points for Ivier will increase a little.
It was possible to build Luna's actions on this system and on the perks she receives, perhaps also on how the player acts during the day.
And so when we have the opportunity to choose for her, this of course makes the atmosphere weaker.
The same could have been done with Krona, I liked what he did at the beginning of the game when she seduced Leo from time to time. But after she starts living next to our room, there will be no more active actions unless the player goes to her himself, although the goal is to lure information out of us.