VN Ren'Py Abandoned Mists of Magic [v0.1] [Green Hat Productions]

[Hollerboller]

Totally! I appreciate the feedback, genuinely. Posting this project was one of the scariest things I've ever done but as it turns out, the overwhelming amount of people leaving comments, even critical comments, are not coming from a place of meanness, just offering their honest opinions. I am grateful for it! I'll try my best to balance taking criticism to heart while still remaining true to my own ideas and what not. Have a good one

I will watch this thread and see where it goes. It's your project, don't bend over for anyone.

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Totally! I appreciate the feedback, genuinely. Posting this project was one of the scariest things I've ever done but as it turns out, the overwhelming amount of people leaving comments, even critical comments, are not coming from a place of meanness, just offering their honest opinions. I am grateful for it! I'll try my best to balance taking criticism to heart while still remaining true to my own ideas and what not. Have a good one

It helps a lot that you are being open and honest about your plans and what you want the game to be. Most times when things get toxic and bad around here it comes from people not wanting to be clear about what the game will be, so you are off to a good start! I'm a sad there will be no incest, but I understand it isn't everyone's kink and you may also be worried about patreon and stuff too. Still, it looks promising, and I'll be keeping an eye on this project going forward. Harem and no NTR means this will probably be a game I enjoy, I'll add it to my list to play very soon.

Fingers crossed that maybe a fan patch will show up one day to add incest in,

 

[SlapE]

Definitely one I'm going to be watching out for, Harem & MILF. and no sign of NTR = very promising indeed
Though I'm definitely gonna wait for at least a couple of updates, I rarely play first releases unless they're massive.

GL dev

 

[Larry2000]

Am I the only one looking at the MC and having an overwhelming need to punch him in the face? Also, what is that dick? It looked like the leg of a pig it's so pink. OINK! The girls look great, but the MC makes me cringe harder than I've ever cringed for an MC. Good luck, but work on MC's look. It's like someone took a small boy, gave him a 20 pack and long dick and called it a day. It kinda makes him look plastic, like they are implants rather than hard earned.

Edit: So it doesn't look JUST Negative. I'll say that the girls look good. Some are a bit generic, but good overall. The main thing is to take away the plastic look most of the characters have. There is no softness, so if you can work on it, I think it can only get better. remember SOFT, not Plastic.

 

[Call of Booty]

Damn,who is who in this game.?New girls with strange names just poping up. What are their relations to MC? No backstory,so confusing.

 

[MrD812]

Bailz , curious and have to ask.
Will the Main Character be calling his mate(s) 'sluts', 'whores' in 'so called' "Dirty Talk"?
Seems some developers have this mindset in dialog/writing more often then not.

Much like the common MC's being a Jerk with no option NOT for him to be like that, in rejecting LI's.
Thank You for Your time and Sharing, Best of Everything to Ya!!

 

[Big Horney Bull]

Nice game so far, but desperately needs a different font, this is not readable for someone with reading problems.

 

[jhonatanw]

Compressed please

 

[Canto Forte]

Right below the very first post in the thread, page one:
Other: Compressed*

Other: Compressed*

Literally, post no. #2 in this entire thread says:

Mists of Magic [v0.1] [Green Hat Productions] crunched

Compressed please

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Sex scenes are animated? Or we just have pictures?

 

[Vostolorde549]

Hey why is the game displaying ALL the time as if it has a Slice horizontally and then pasted off set.????? i have seen this with a few games now, and i dont get it.

 

[Canto Forte]

In the game engine, where devs set the parameters for the GUi,

you can set the width and heigth of the text,

so if you set it at one fourth of your screen width, it will look weird,

stacking the lines in a tower against your left side of the screen.

 

[Feyascia]

Going by preview pics alone, I'm assuming this is some kind of GigaChad simulator.

 

[sabadongelov]

Thanks for the feedback. I definitely have room to grow and improve with various elements of character design. I appreciate that you gave it a chance. Cheers, mate

Since you're getting a lot of shit from people, I just want to add, that the fact that you clearly made the MC male model taller/larger than the female models is a huge plus, as the vast majority of games have midget male MCs that are as short as the women and usually scrawny and thin to boot.

Furthermore, I also like that the MC has a big cock (as long as it is acknowledged in the game and actually matters when it comes to sex*), I have no interest in playing an MC who is average or smaller. That's of course something subjective, but going by this thread, you might get the impression that people in general prefer small dicks in their porn, but I don't think that's the case. I also like the fact that the MC has serious muscles and muscle definition. Also something that many games lack. Finally, it's clear that the MC has a handsome face which is also a plus if it is to be beleived that more or less every woman finds him a total hunk (a lot of women like male faces that has more of a young Tom Cruise, David Beckham or Johnny Depp kind of look, which fits if the MC is supposed to be young).

Now, that being said, there are some things that could be improved. His face looks a bit strange at times (his eyes are very wide open for instance, showing whites around the irises) and his butt thrusts out mightily from his body in a way that makes it even look surgically enhanced. Wouldn't hurt with a bit wider shoulders to offset his great lenght and maybe a bit taller tarso and slightly shorter legs, as he really is all legs now. And personally, I like when the cock is more veiny and not quite that smooth, then again, some cocks look like that, so I guess it's a personal preference (can promise you that nine out of ten women prefer the veiny look though).

* Having tried your game, the women definately acknowledge his big cock and that's good, I hope it will also be reflected not only in how much they love it, but also that it might cause problems and even pain, as a small/tight woman would struggle with that monster (in fact, most women would, but I guess porn logic... ).

 

[Green Hat Productions]

Damn,who is who in this game.?New girls with strange names just poping up. What are their relations to MC? No backstory,so confusing.

Thanks - this is a really good point - I think at this point we've spent so much time on building this world and the characters that it was obvious who was who, but there's really no introduction for the characters. We were originally going to have a codex for players to check out character bios as well, but now we're going to add introductions to each character as they're introduced so players aren't left in the dark.

Bailz , curious and have to ask.
Will the Main Character be calling his mate(s) 'sluts', 'whores' in 'so called' "Dirty Talk"?
Seems some developers have this mindset in dialog/writing more often then not.

Much like the common MC's being a Jerk with no option NOT for him to be like that, in rejecting LI's.
Thank You for Your time and Sharing, Best of Everything to Ya!!

There'll be dirty talk, but not likely to the degree you're talking about where the main character demeans them, unless it gets explored as a fetish or something down the line. TBH, I think it might be the opposite, where people will think the main character comes across as too much of a simp for his partners.

Nice game so far, but desperately needs a different font, this is not readable for someone with reading problems.

Thanks for the feedback - we'll look into using a different font, or maybe go back to the default if we can't find something better.

Sex scenes are animated? Or we just have pictures?

No animations in this release, but we have some animations we want to incorporate for the next release. Can't do too many at the moment since we're paying out of pocket for animators. As our project grows we'll be able to add in more animations.

Since you're getting a lot of shit from people, I just want to add, that the fact that you clearly made the MC male model taller/larger than the female models is a huge plus, as the vast majority of games have midget male MCs that are as short as the women and usually scrawny and thin to boot.

Furthermore, I also like that the MC has a big cock (as long as it is acknowledged in the game and actually matters when it comes to sex*), I have no interest in playing an MC who is average or smaller. That's of course something subjective, but going by this thread, you might get the impression that people in general prefer small dicks in their porn, but I don't think that's the case. I also like the fact that the MC has serious muscles and muscle definition. Also something that many games lack. Finally, it's clear that the MC has a handsome face which is also a plus if it is to be beleived that more or less every woman finds him a total hunk (a lot of women like male faces that has more of a young Tom Cruise, David Beckham or Johnny Depp kind of look, which fits if the MC is supposed to be young).

Now, that being said, there are some things that could be improved. His face looks a bit strange at times (his eyes are very wide open for instance, showing whites around the irises) and his butt thrusts out mightily from his body in a way that makes it even look surgically enhanced. Wouldn't hurt with a bit wider shoulders to offset his great lenght and maybe a bit taller tarso and slightly shorter legs, as he really is all legs now. And personally, I like when the cock is more veiny and not quite that smooth, then again, some cocks look like that, so I guess it's a personal preference (can promise you that nine out of ten women prefer the veiny look though).

* Having tried your game, the women definately acknowledge his big cock and that's good, I hope it will also be reflected not only in how much they love it, but also that it might cause problems and even pain, as a small/tight woman would struggle with that monster (in fact, most women would, but I guess porn logic... ).

Thank you! We're always happy to find more connoisseurs of the big dick bandit genre. We'll look into the other modeling issues as well.

 

[hoborg]

The characters look good, except for the MC.
His proportions are just all wrong, its weird.
Also the writing is a bit childish, will put on watch though to see if it improves.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Let's see... The average Ren'Py game featuring SmoothFace McLongDick.
Definitely never seen anything like him before. lol

Spoiler: The deal with Western Porn... xD

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THX for sharing...

I thought it looks like a dildo.
MC's dick looks so fake it's just bad. There are way better, more realistic looking genitalia/dick models out there and i don't mean the size.
The MC in general is just meh. As for the females, average at best. But good assets are not cheap.

Can't we just be happy the mc isn't a typical 4'3 manlet like other games?

 

[Hollerboller]

Since you're getting a lot of shit from people, I just want to add, that the fact that you clearly made the MC male model taller/larger than the female models is a huge plus, as the vast majority of games have midget male MCs that are as short as the women and usually scrawny and thin to boot.

Furthermore, I also like that the MC has a big cock (as long as it is acknowledged in the game and actually matters when it comes to sex*), I have no interest in playing an MC who is average or smaller. That's of course something subjective, but going by this thread, you might get the impression that people in general prefer small dicks in their porn, but I don't think that's the case. I also like the fact that the MC has serious muscles and muscle definition. Also something that many games lack. Finally, it's clear that the MC has a handsome face which is also a plus if it is to be beleived that more or less every woman finds him a total hunk (a lot of women like male faces that has more of a young Tom Cruise, David Beckham or Johnny Depp kind of look, which fits if the MC is supposed to be young).

Now, that being said, there are some things that could be improved. His face looks a bit strange at times (his eyes are very wide open for instance, showing whites around the irises) and his butt thrusts out mightily from his body in a way that makes it even look surgically enhanced. Wouldn't hurt with a bit wider shoulders to offset his great lenght and maybe a bit taller tarso and slightly shorter legs, as he really is all legs now. And personally, I like when the cock is more veiny and not quite that smooth, then again, some cocks look like that, so I guess it's a personal preference (can promise you that nine out of ten women prefer the veiny look though).

* Having tried your game, the women definately acknowledge his big cock and that's good, I hope it will also be reflected not only in how much they love it, but also that it might cause problems and even pain, as a small/tight woman would struggle with that monster (in fact, most women would, but I guess porn logic... ).

You have two good points here. First, that he is taller than the girls. Second, thank the god's of love he has no mini dick.
But the appearence of the MC is bad. Would be good enough for a comedy game i guess.

 

[Hollerboller]

Can't we just be happy the mc isn't a typical 4'3 manlet like other games?

I could, but it really doesn't help if the MC looks overall just wierd.

 

[El Tanque]

I appreciate that the MC is taller than the girls, but his body proportions make him look weird, it's hard to ignore... I guess it's a matter of getting used to his weirdness.
Anyway good luck to the dev.