Ren'Py Mobile of Desires [Ch.6.46.9] [QuantumBunnyNovels]

[kirbe7]

Hello. The second chapter already has a lot more action than the first. There will be even more in the third.

Hi, okay so I was right that the tags are wrong.

Anyway, you are stepping into a big "market" with this game, pretty much every week we see a new ntr phone game which wants to be "NTR Mobile". There is many great games already in this area so your competition is fierce. There is 2 main games new devs are taking inspiration from, NTR Mobile & Netorase Phone, and seeing as there is "nanobots" in this one I see you are taking inspiration from "NTR Mobile".

Now "NTR Mobile" is being developed for a while and you can't expect to make the same/better quality game in first releases however there is a few things all the other copies (there is literally 100s of them here) don't do and which you can use to your advantage cause to get $ in this market your game has to have something unique and addictive.

-Sound: NTR Mobile does this great with nanobots (+option to disable for people who don't like it) and for whatever reason 99% of these games lack sound

-Amount of content per patch: its usually better to take more time in the first patches to bring out more content rather then shipping 2 minutes of gameplay, keep the community engaged with teasers on patreon/f95 while you are working on content. It goes a long way to release a good patch with a good amount of content

-Innovation: I saw earlier a dev trying something new in this market. He added an AI which was trained to be the MCs girlfriend (Phone NTR story if you want to check it out). This is unique and interesting at the first glance but we will see how it develops in the future. Try to find your own unique thing, maybe nicely voiced phone calls in real time (not voice messages) idk just shooting ideas here.

-Decide on your Identity: Developing 3 paths (Love, NTR, NTS) will take 3 times more time then just focusing on one, develop the path which you excel at, not every game needs to have all paths/options, plenty of other games focusing on one (Netorase Phone is a big example here where the dev just focused on NTS and it became huge)

And just a last tip, fact check your story, play your own game. There is a lot of errors and communication which just doesn't make sense. Play it through and see if you like the narrative. The MC being oblivious is nothing new but the players aren't that oblivious

 

[Beckendwarf]

I am going to keep an eye on this one, but as for endings... I would love to see all the endings you have planned. NTR, NTS, Love, all of it. I am here for the long run

 

[Nimbus Commando]

So another generic AI slop phone cuck game. lol how many is that now.

 

[JennaJJ]

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[Eyepatch1$]

Ok so I'm confused has the cheating already happened? Because I was on the playthrough of choosing willpower and bond options before his incident and it still led to the same outcome of her blowing the guy. So is that the unavoidable NTR and the nanos are there to keep her from going further or was this some kind of mistake in story options? Because I'm seeing people comment about the story jumping the gun or not making sense with this part.

 

[Riva]

Thanks !

 

[FatYoda]

there is no good NTS route for anyone looking for it. I've chosen bond/willpower every time it's available and she's already blowing the guy...and MC's dick works...i'm pretty sure they fucked the day before she blew the photographer...so it's not like she's cock starved

 

[FatYoda]

Ooh, that's an interesting idea. I'll think about it.

if she cheats your NTS fans are gone. hell most of them are already going to be gone after she blew him.

 

[Eyepatch1$]

if she cheats your NTS fans are gone. hell most of them are already going to be gone after she blew him.

Like you said the Mc's dick obviously still works and sounded like she was satisfied with him, so the blowjob just feels like it came out of nowhere because her lust shouldn't be high enough to just immediately be down for that unless you were spamming lust and corruption.

 

[nanahanana]

Does the MC control the wife into cheating on him? Isn't that just NTS at the end of the day? Do we see things only from the dude's perspective or is there both?

 

[FatYoda]

Like you said the Mc's dick obviously still works and sounded like she was satisfied with him, so the blowjob just feels like it came out of nowhere because her lust shouldn't be high enough to just immediately be down for that unless you were spamming lust and corruption.

completely agree...just out of nowhere she's got a dick in her mouth. There is no NTS path from here. Which is fine if he's wanting an all NTR game...but why give us stats like willpower and bond if they don't mean anything?

 

[FatYoda]

Does the MC control the wife into cheating on him? Isn't that just NTS at the end of the day? Do we see things only from the dude's perspective or is there both?

he doesn't appear to control anything...his fiance is already blowing her photographer.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

The "Developer Notes" section might be a bit misleading for some players, potentially making them think this is just a kinetic novel and thus not worth their time to test or play

You also mentioned in a this post that you'd add NTS and Love routes if players want
This raises a crucial question: Are you developing this game based purely on player feedback and desires, or are you following your own personal vision and ideas?
For example, if 50 patrons immediately started supporting you and demanded that the game evolve into an extreme scenario (e.g., a hard Netorare where the MC is constantly humiliated) and insisted that this be the only route, would you comply with such a request?
While listening to supporters on minor, non-critical aspects is perfectly fine, it becomes a concern when it touches upon core elements like the game's narrative routes

Before we decide to play and support your work, we need clarity: Is this game primarily driven by financial incentives and player demands, or by your own artistic vision? Could you please tell us how many routes you plan to have, and whether you intend to give substantial attention to each one?

My personal option is to include all three routes—Netorare, Love, and Netorase—and ensure that each receives a significant and well-developed focus

Hello! Thank you for your great feedback!
About the description - I will change it soon, thanks for your thoughts

About the game changes and the influence of players. I think the determining factor is still my vision. For example, I wouldn't want to see a number of fetishes or actions in my game, and no matter how much the players ask, I won't add them. At the same time, I'm interested in some related fetishes, like the same NTS, but I'm not sure if players will like it, so I'll make a poll on patreon about it soon. And if the players are also interested in it, I will change the already released chapters and add a new path, primarily because I myself am interested in it and it has the support of the players.

As for what this game is focused on. It's focused on my personal fetishes and the story based on them that I want to tell. That does not prevent me from listening to the players and make adjustments in places where there are controversial points and minor flaws.

As for the routes, I do not know yet, I will make a poll whether the game needs the path of Love and NTS. But the game already has routes with and without the "nano chip". Accordingly, both of them will be developed in each branch.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Hi, okay so I was right that the tags are wrong.

Anyway, you are stepping into a big "market" with this game, pretty much every week we see a new ntr phone game which wants to be "NTR Mobile". There is many great games already in this area so your competition is fierce. There is 2 main games new devs are taking inspiration from, NTR Mobile & Netorase Phone, and seeing as there is "nanobots" in this one I see you are taking inspiration from "NTR Mobile".

Now "NTR Mobile" is being developed for a while and you can't expect to make the same/better quality game in first releases however there is a few things all the other copies (there is literally 100s of them here) don't do and which you can use to your advantage cause to get $ in this market your game has to have something unique and addictive.

-Sound: NTR Mobile does this great with nanobots (+option to disable for people who don't like it) and for whatever reason 99% of these games lack sound

-Amount of content per patch: its usually better to take more time in the first patches to bring out more content rather then shipping 2 minutes of gameplay, keep the community engaged with teasers on patreon/f95 while you are working on content. It goes a long way to release a good patch with a good amount of content

-Innovation: I saw earlier a dev trying something new in this market. He added an AI which was trained to be the MCs girlfriend (Phone NTR story if you want to check it out). This is unique and interesting at the first glance but we will see how it develops in the future. Try to find your own unique thing, maybe nicely voiced phone calls in real time (not voice messages) idk just shooting ideas here.

-Decide on your Identity: Developing 3 paths (Love, NTR, NTS) will take 3 times more time then just focusing on one, develop the path which you excel at, not every game needs to have all paths/options, plenty of other games focusing on one (Netorase Phone is a big example here where the dev just focused on NTS and it became huge)

And just a last tip, fact check your story, play your own game. There is a lot of errors and communication which just doesn't make sense. Play it through and see if you like the narrative. The MC being oblivious is nothing new but the players aren't that oblivious

Wow thank you so much, lots of good thoughts, I will definitely use this!

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Ok so I'm confused has the cheating already happened? Because I was on the playthrough of choosing willpower and bond options before his incident and it still led to the same outcome of her blowing the guy. So is that the unavoidable NTR and the nanos are there to keep her from going further or was this some kind of mistake in story options? Because I'm seeing people comment about the story jumping the gun or not making sense with this part.

I think I'll redo the first and second part to better structure the plot and add new NTS and Love lines.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Does the MC control the wife into cheating on him? Isn't that just NTS at the end of the day? Do we see things only from the dude's perspective or is there both?

So far the game is only written in the NTR direction, but I will soon add other paths by rewriting the existing text. The game will only go from Oscar's perspective, but we will occasionally see the wife's thoughts if there are enough communication points available

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

completely agree...just out of nowhere she's got a dick in her mouth. There is no NTS path from here. Which is fine if he's wanting an all NTR game...but why give us stats like willpower and bond if they don't mean anything?

Yes, only NTR for now, but I think I will change the game and on July 5th I will publish a new version of chapter 1 and 2 with new NTS and Love branches already

 

[FatYoda]

Yes, only NTR for now, but I think I will change the game and on July 5th I will publish a new version of chapter 1 and 2 with new NTS and Love branches already

is the NTS path going to be a passive cuck who likes to watch her have sex? or will he be physically involved with her and others (3somes or more) as well?

 

[Krakk3n]

People are min-maxing efforts to earning ratio it seems. Trying to make money from their gooning sessions while playing with AI Art gen.

 

[Enlight432]

So far the game is only written in the NTR direction, but I will soon add other paths by rewriting the existing text. The game will only go from Oscar's perspective, but we will occasionally see the wife's thoughts if there are enough communication points available

Yes, only NTR for now, but I think I will change the game and on July 5th I will publish a new version of chapter 1 and 2 with new NTS and Love branches already

So, this game will also feature three routes, much like the first one in the "Other Games" section
I think this is a good decision because it immediately demonstrates that the main characters are intelligent and capable enough to protect their relationship from external challenges
Personally, I find myself enjoying all three routes much more when the game is structured this way
Thanks for sharing this game