Ren'Py Mobile of Desires [Ch.6.46.9] [QuantumBunnyNovels]

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Focus on the bulls too. A hot bull is almost as much important as a hot wife.

I want to make a separate game about Logan and his "fucking other people's wives" thing.

 

[3DSunny]

Hey, how do you make your renders, like which checkpoint and lora you use?

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Hey, how do you make your renders, like which checkpoint and lora you use?

It's very, very complicated, I can't explain it in two words. But I can responsibly say that I tried very hard to make the pictures.

 

[KalbyEaten]

yeahhhhh moooooreeee

 

[Deleted member 4087206]

The conversations are so weird and jumbled up like there are multiple conversations going on in the same chat. Even the choices when you respond to something, have nothing to do with what was being asked. The dialogue is just a confusing mess.

And the images don't match up at all with the conversations either. Even the ones from Logan don't match up. It is again, confusing.

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Like I said before, the dialogue and the images are just jumbled and confusing and don't match what is going on. And a lot of the dialogue is just dragged out beyond belief. Like 100+ messages of them just saying bye. It's too much. They keep over-explaining everything and then explaining things multiple times one after another. And like I mentioned, it's like different conversations going on at once sometimes, where it feels like you're having alternate universe conversations in the same chat at once.

It just needs a lot of work. From the confusing dialogue to the images not matching or making sense and the randomness of it all, it needs work. It is just not good right now. Either way, thanks and best of luck with this.

I came back after trying the game to say exactly the same thing. The messages are all wrong timed with our options of answers and the events that happen in the game, it makes it really confusing. Also, I too agree that the dialogues are too redundant and forced, likely to extend the length of playtime. If the dev could be more concise with the dialogues, and fix the timing of dialogues and events this can become a decent game, it has the potential.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

I came back after trying the game to say exactly the same thing. The messages are all wrong timed with our options of answers and the events that happen in the game, it makes it really confusing. Also, I too agree that the dialogues are too redundant and forced, likely to extend the length of playtime. If the dev could be more concise with the dialogues, and fix the timing of dialogues and events this can become a decent game, it has the potential.

Thanks for the feedback, tomorrow I will look at your comment and the first author's comment in more detail and give you a more detailed response.

 

[ZedInYoBed]

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It's very, very complicated, I can't explain it in two words. But I can responsibly say that I tried very hard to make the pictures.

in other words, they stole them lol

 

[666terror666]

So there is a support level of 10 dollars, even 5 dollars.

Man you dont get it: The game isnt good enough to make anyone pay you 5 dollars to wait just one week less long for an update of some couples chat, some low quality scifi stuff and a handfull of unrelated AI-generated pictures. Its a mess. Fix the game and make some reasonable prices. 5 for a week is too much, 10 for two weeks is too much and 20 for 4 weeks is too much.

 

[666terror666]

The whole game consists of them

False advertising. There is one pic that shows the start of a bj, the rest is just chat about nanobots that doesnt add to anything

 

[kirbe7]

so there is Anal/Vaginal tags but there is no actual CGs in the game yet of any of these tags? Like there is 1 BJ CG and that's it

Used unren to check CGs after finishing the game, did I miss something or did the dev add tags which aren't in the game yet

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

Man you dont get it: The game isnt good enough to make anyone pay you 5 dollars to wait just one week less long for an update of some couples chat, some low quality scifi stuff and a handfull of unrelated AI-generated pictures. Its a mess. Fix the game and make some reasonable prices. 5 for a week is too much, 10 for two weeks is too much and 20 for 4 weeks is too much.

I understand your position, thank you.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

False advertising. There is one pic that shows the start of a bj, the rest is just chat about nanobots that doesnt add to anything

You've only played the first part. The main action starts in the second part.

 

[QuantumBunnyNovels]

so there is Anal/Vaginal tags but there is no actual CGs in the game yet of any of these tags? Like there is 1 BJ CG and that's it

Used unren to check CGs after finishing the game, did I miss something or did the dev add tags which aren't in the game yet

Hello. The second chapter already has a lot more action than the first. There will be even more in the third.

 

[Cherubin25]

I also have to say that I dont think the game is good currently.. I did not bother with the game after a bit. The dialogue was just way too exhausting and honestly very boring. The way Lucy and Oscar talk about their wedding at the start is really long-winded and every few messages he asks her for a Pic. Who talks like that?

Then there was way too much conversation with Arnold. And so negative. It is fine that those Phone Games also bring other people into the conversation as the main girl, but I dont play those games to see two people talking. The random pictures do the rest, again - who has conversations like this? When I text a friend of mine I dont suddenly send them a pic how I am sitting at my desk or get a pic of them looking sad.

The choices are sometimes really weird. E.g. Oscar talks about having a beach wedding with his girlfriend, which she mentioned before, yet she seems to be surprised. And then suddenly it looks like she was dreaming it and not him. So there was either a mix-up or I got way too confused.

So, best of luck to the Dev, but the game is not really for me. I dont really see a point in playing it.

 

[Enlight432]

My game is definitely not a kenetic novel, it has elections. LOTS of choices. By sharing certain choices the player gets different points, such as:
Arousal - Lucy's current level of sexual arousal.
Lust - How often Lucy thinks about sex.
Corruption - Her openness to new sexual experiences and taboos.
Willpower - Lucy's ability to resist external influence, including Logan's.
Bond - A measure of control and the depth of the connection between Oscar and Lucy. Increases with successful interactions, but can decrease due to detachment or mistakes.

Further, the presence or absence of certain points moves your progression along a unique path. There are already several chapter endings in the second chapter. Right now there are 1 path - NTR

There will only be more to come I'm thinking of introducing NTS and Love into the game, if players want it.

The "Developer Notes" section might be a bit misleading for some players, potentially making them think this is just a kinetic novel and thus not worth their time to test or play

You also mentioned in a this post that you'd add NTS and Love routes if players want
This raises a crucial question: Are you developing this game based purely on player feedback and desires, or are you following your own personal vision and ideas?
For example, if 50 patrons immediately started supporting you and demanded that the game evolve into an extreme scenario (e.g., a hard Netorare where the MC is constantly humiliated) and insisted that this be the only route, would you comply with such a request?
While listening to supporters on minor, non-critical aspects is perfectly fine, it becomes a concern when it touches upon core elements like the game's narrative routes

Before we decide to play and support your work, we need clarity: Is this game primarily driven by financial incentives and player demands, or by your own artistic vision? Could you please tell us how many routes you plan to have, and whether you intend to give substantial attention to each one?

My personal option is to include all three routes—Netorare, Love, and Netorase—and ensure that each receives a significant and well-developed focus

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[TheRetroAiden]

Looks fun will give this a try

 

[Adhdclassic]

This is considered a small wedding. 50-70 people.

 

[AgnorWolf]

This is considered a small wedding. 50-70 people.
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Yeah anything under 100 is considered a small wedding(like siblings, parents, uncles, aunties , cousins, best friends) you would be suspired how quickly that adds and not to mention its usually a plus one invite. 100-200 being medium and anything over that is pretty big, ive been at multiple 250+ weddings, fairly common in my country.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX