This is well put together in all honesty. It works and doesn't perform like dogshit which is always a great start.
You clearly have some talent.
Things i'd like to see if you make any future stuff:
- Putting the items in is VERY STATIC and should have an animation associated with it (Put it in, move is forwards and backwards)
- The camera seems to stop at a certain angle when walking until you use A or D to move. Unrestrict it for better flow.
- Bigger possibilities, after all that's done you could of got her unstuck and she becomes addicted, then leading to the bedroom with more positions and a free camera, etc.
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next