VN Ren'Py Mommy's Boy [v0.1] [Onyxdime / DreamBigGames]

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TsubameYui

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You can introduce sexual content in a manner where it gradually builds up over time. That's how we're going to do it. Slow burn NOT no burn.
I, personally, love slow-burns. I'm just hopeful you don't fall into the trap of throwing in meaningless sex scenes with throw-away characters to get early sex scenes. I'd rather wait a painfully long time for action, as long as the story is good, than see tropes like characters banging random strippers/hookers just for the sake of early lewds.

I know a lot of people hate sexy dream sequences, but I actually like them, if they make sense story-wise. From what I've seen, people dislike dream sex, because it "doesn't progress the story/relationships/character development", but I think that's exactly why they're the best option for early lewds in a slow-burn. They let you show off/demonstrate your lewd skills(sexy animation/dialogue) early on, without negatively affecting player's perception of the characters/story, or rushing the slow-burn relationships. Players like to see what to expect from sex scenes from a developer, so they don't risk being disappointed, or can get excited for them, down the line.
 

Xill

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You really managed to make Jacob act like the women in the NTR games. He pretty much told Lauren he doesn't care if she gets hurt after she told him what Vicky wanted to.

A few things though, the dialogue after you pick to cook only for 1 seems out of character after for Lauren after she spent an entire day and morning thinking about him.

Why are only his forearms so hairy but he isn't anywhere else. Looks a bit weird.

I am not sure this VN would fit the definition of NTR. Sounds more like Harem, if I am being honest.
It's a female protagonist game. The guy isn't the protagonist.
 
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BangB420

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Might be harem, if the protagonist were the son, but since it's from the perspective of the mom, it's definitely NTR. Cool thing about this concept, is that the NTR seems much more palatable for the non/anti-NTR crowd.



NTR is not gender-specific. This is textbook NTR, as the MC is facing having someone important to them being stolen away.



It's not reverse NTR, it's just NTR, like mom/son NTR stories, but with those roles reversed. Still pure NTR, though, as MC is having someone stolen to cause jealousy.


NTR doesn't typically specify romantic interests being stolen, and frequently consists of people who are important to the MC, even if non-romantic, being stolen away. Very common to see family members, childhood friends, etc. being the target of NTR. Often it is a male MC having his mother and/or sister(s) being stolen by the antagonist, so the fact that this game is a reversal of the mother/son NTR dynamic is really interesting, but definitely still NTR.
The average non/Anti-NTR crowd doesn't care, they will see NTR in the tags and go off that. Imo while it is NTR, i think having the tag will give people the wrong idea.
 
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Onyxdime

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I, personally, love slow-burns. I'm just hopeful you don't fall into the trap of throwing in meaningless sex scenes with throw-away characters to get early sex scenes. I'd rather wait a painfully long time for action, as long as the story is good, than see tropes like characters banging random strippers/hookers just for the sake of early lewds.
Happy to say we're not going to be doing that. Side characters are also going to be gradually introduced and have the sexual tension slowly build up.

I know a lot of people hate sexy dream sequences, but I actually like them, if they make sense story-wise. From what I've seen, people dislike dream sex, because it "doesn't progress the story/relationships/character development", but I think that's exactly why they're the best option for early lewds in a slow-burn.
We hadn't considered dream sequences. I'll chat with my partner and see what he thinks about the inclusion of these.

You really managed to make Jacob act like the women in the NTR games. He pretty much told Lauren he doesn't care if she gets hurt after she told him what Vicky wanted to.

A few things though, the dialogue after you pick to cook only for 1 seems out of character after for Lauren after she spent an entire day and morning thinking about him.

Why are only his forearms so hairy but he isn't anywhere else. Looks a bit weird.
Thanks for the feedback - I'll review the dialogue of that scene. The idea was to have Lauren choose between nurturing him and trying to get him to "grow up" and stand on his own two feet. If needs be we'll take another look at what works/what doesn't work and make changes. :)
 

TsubameYui

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The average non/Anti-NTR crowd doesn't care, they will see NTR in the tags and go off that. Imo while it is NTR, i think having the tag will give people the wrong idea.
I agree that the tag could definitely chase away players that would probably really enjoy this game, but it is undeniably an NTR game, so the tag is mandatory. A big, bold, underlined disclaimer explaining some details would probably be helpful.

Until the mom have to fuck some dudes to "save" her son lol. Or you know, the other, various throwed in sex scenes of the other milfs banging other shotas, their hubbys or co-workers.
I can't speak for the dev, but from what I've seen thus far, it seems like the son is going to be the focal point of all the women's affections. I can't say for certain, but since it's meant to be a slow-burn corruption/seduction focusing on the MC's son, I'd be surprised if the women are going to be looking at other guys at all.
 

Geigi

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Until the mom have to fuck some dudes to "save" her son lol. Or you know, the other, various throwed in sex scenes of the other milfs banging other shotas, their hubbys or co-workers.
It seems that the only male love interest will be Lauren's son and female characters as love interests, hence one straight and plenty lesbian content.
 
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NewSeal

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Always interesting to see a twist to cliché stories, I don't think I remember any momcest games where the mom was the one trying to seduce her son. Pretty good start.
 

Onyxdime

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The same exact thing happened in this guys last game, Milfy City..
Milfy City was developed by ICSTOR. I was brought on to do the writing for him, but didn't have much creative independence when it came to plotlines (aside from Delilah).

Mommy's Boy is jointly-developed between DreamBigGames and me.

We're self-funding this game as well - so we're not beholden to Visa/Mastercard rules on certain fetishes.

Donations on SubscribeStar will expedite the development process/expand additional content as 100% of money raised there goes to commissioning more renders, animations, voice actresses etc.

However, SubscribeStar is not essential to the project's completion - it's just a bonus.
 
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Derpyshanks

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I am not sure this VN would fit the definition of NTR. Sounds more like Harem, if I am being honest.
Because by default most people here insert themselves into the the main male character of the story...In this case the son who will have multiple women after him to spite his mom. So in there eyes, all the women want me(the son)

This isn't a harem to me. But again that is just me.

Maybe there's a route in all of this that'll work out for the main character and thus turning this into a harem where they all share her son but if any or all the cougars succeed in having Lauren's son value any of them(physically and/or emotionally) over his own mom, then this VN would had succeeded in having a functional NTR plot.
 
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