Lazy_Monkey This game is too good. Loving everything about it. Every time i have to chose an option between the mom and Kira (or even the teacher) i get an existential crisis deciding what to pick.
Here are some typos and weird things i spotted. Not a native english speaker so look for second opinions just in case.
Mom:I guess being
naxt(next) to you gives me confidence...
Let's get
cracy(crazy) (this option appears a few times, but only once is misspelled)
Mrs. Weeks: You better be careful, or I'll end up teaching class with a bigyou taught me history swollen belly. (Something went wrong at the end of the sentence there, perhaps "or I'll end up teachin you history with a big swollen belly"?)
Aunt: Did something happen between you and
my (your) mom? (or "between you and my sister")
Kira(should be "Aunt" saying this): Rest, MC. Chao.
Aunt: Ellie can let you borrow som(e) clothes, ...
Aunt: Ah, MC, there's not much room in the house, so you'll be sleeping in the living room. I've already set up a cozy little space for you.
r you. (del)
MC: Well, maybe a couple of times. Not more than tha(t).
Arthur: You're going to have some serious problems. Okay? (E)ven though your mother rarely listens to me, we can agree on that.
Aunt: are you ashamed of me(add space)or what?
Aunt: I'm sure I can guess every single thought that's going through your head right now, Mom(sis/sister).
Aunt: You know, when I couldn't sleep as a child, your grandfather always say("said"/"used to say") that this house was under magical protection. Those words were soothing.
Aunt: Fuck, Mom(Sis/Sister), what are you doing here?
Kira: Um... no. Okay. Let's leave (the) case here and check on Dad. ...
Killa: I earned
them(it?). Provided a service. And now...
Killa: I earned
them(it?).
MC: Money...
They are (It is) under a stone slab...
Killa: What? You didn't even move
them(it) to another place?
Kira: Did you know where
they were (it was)? Why did you torment us then, ...
Kira: Yes, with (your) teeth. Don't worry, I'll go to (the) dentist with you later.
Kira: What kind of service was she doing
to(for) our father?
MC: She took the money.
She took the money(repeated?). Judging by the weight of the suitcase(,)
- all (the) money that we took.
Mom: The problem is that you are fucking my son in the kitchen! (The Mc went from having his shirt on to having his shirt off and seemingly pounding the aunt from behind, but there was nothing showing when(if) they started to fuck, not sure if something missing there)
Diane(until now she always talked as aunt not sure if the lack of consistency is intentional): This is the purest truth. (Nothing wrong with this line, but the one that comes right after is in cyrilic)
Diane: But I'm right. Besides, I didn't force him. And you know it. (In this scene he has his t-shirt off and in the next one he has it back on)
Ellie: So... are we going to smoke?/Kira: Wtf. Do you really have to ask? (This two lines of dialogue switch the scenery from being indoors in the couch to being outside on the steps of the house, then they go back inside)
Ellie:
If only MC wants to. (Only if MC wants to.)
Kira: I didn't want to say it, but (our) parents thought at first that a puppy was born an not a human.
Kira: No, no
there("it"? not sure) is also about love...
Kira: Of course not. With my perfect health, it's only good.
What (That) can't be said about you...
Kira: Well, you see? You're already starting to
losing(lose).
MC: There was nothing in (the) bet about where i can
and(or) can't cum.
Mom: Is everything
is(del) okay?
Mom: Cum on
my mom's tits. (technically not wrong, as she is a mom, so she has mom's tits, but maybe "Cum on mom's tits")
Mom: Did you enjoy the reli(e)f?
Sorry if they are not in order, but some were found when replaying different paths.
There are some scenes like when we can click on Kira on the couch and there is a gray arrow pointing to the right, but it does nothing (the day after Alice goes to your house) Same when starting the part were Kira wants to stalk her ex, there is an arrow pointing down but cannot be clicked or when Kira is in the bathroom after shower, there is an arrow pointing left.
Hope we see more Kira choking and a pregnancy tag some day!
