Ok, this is pretty bad even for v0.1:
- English is bad, that could be excused, but the writing is also terrible
- there is no direction/story, not even just enough to let player know what the hell is going on
- the blowjob sound effect from the intro (if it even can be called that) plays for good 10-20 seconds after animation is over.
- stat changes screen after actions stays on the screen for way too long
- money you earn are stupidly low compared to prices, 2$ for work when a coffee costs 10$, chocolate 15$ and visiting arcade 15$?
- girls locations are marked by a color, there is no way of telling which girl is what color other than by checking a marked location manually and memorizing which color is which girl
- these markers don't update properly, after time change you have to enter and exit a location for them to update which is a pain in the ass
- buggy events - interacting with one girl plays a talk as if we are at a pool at school, other girl plays an event of checking a shop for work and meeting her, these two events are also the only events in the game i've found
- music is badly looped, it randomly stops abruptly and starts playing from the beggining
- all interactions are placeholders (at least I hope they are, if not this is bad)
Just one look and I know this game will need a walkthrough (which is not built in currently), a translator/proofreader/editor, bugfix, a bit of redesign in terms of gameplay and more content before it will be even playable. Currently it's barely a buggy, clunky proof of concept with close to no content.
