MonsterEyeGames
First,
after playing for about an hour or two, I have to say I'm absolutely thrilled by the diverse cast of actual individuals with actual interesting stories/background/storylines! Even if this VN did not have any sex, I would still have been interested in reading it. That is very uncommon (for me) regarding the VNs on this website.
Second,
Is it just me, or is the music extremely soft? Even if I put all the sliders to max, I have to set the Windows system volume to 100% to actually hear the music. But, when I get a notification on my computer, it will obviously be extremely loud because of the 100% volume level. Can this be fixed (either on your side or on mine)?
Third,
There is a small grammatical error when the MC is sitting near the fountain with Sofia discussing Lily:
MC: "Gorgons are really terrible..."
Sofia: "Yes, I am definitely among the most dangerous species"
But, Sofia is a (human?) witch, not a Gorgon.
It should probably be:
Sofia: "Yes, they are definitely among the most dangerous species"