VN Ren'Py Moonripple Lake [v0.352] [BCG]

[Lanrayr]

Ah yes, that particular zoom effect. The original intent was to give you a better, closer look at Suzie's fuckholes :d
Then I realized it disconnects the character too much from the background, and kind of breaks immersion.
Yeah suzie should be behind the cock 100%!
You'll notice that I've since stopped using that function, and have instead focused on making backgrounds to move with characters in parallax.

You saw that situation as was intended, yeah. Maybe I'm trying to push too much story into my porn game haha.
Caleb was intended as someone to rally against, and much less a 'he wants my girl, he'll take her'.
Also, his shitty self is a perfect point to grow from. I'll just say I have plans for Caleb. We'll see where it takes me, plans can change. But his original purpose wasn't to cuck MC.
It's funny how no one cares as vehemently about Drago, who openly wants Suzie, but he's just a little dork, so it's whatever.

Oh, that's Sophie's (the library girl's) bff, we might see her again

While playing I was thinking about it. Drago could be the classic "from Zero to Hero" guy. And who knows, maybe he could be a bridge to having lots of "group fun" with the rest of the family.

By the way, I just wanted to congratulate you for the good work you've done. As soon as it comes out in Steam, I'll Buy it.

 

[sagerock820]

The goons holding her mouth was a much more effective "violation" depiction without treading into fetish land.

I disagree. As I said earlier, I can do without the non-consensual stuff done to Suzie. No place for that in a sharing game.

Maybe I'm trying to push too much story into my porn game haha.
Caleb was intended as someone to rally against, and much less a 'he wants my girl, he'll take her'.
It's funny how no one cares as vehemently about Drago, who openly wants Suzie, but he's just a little dork, so it's whatever.

I talked about the pace of the game in another post I made yesterday.

The only other thing I would mention is - it seems events with Suzie are happening pretty fast. Anon went from 0 to 100 very quickly on wanting Suzie to do more sexy stuff. I don't mean to make it a long slow burn but it didn't need to be so quick. IMO.

Caleb and Drago are complete opposites. Drago is a dork and not a real threat. Caleb is grade A douchebag. Really didn't need Suzie to be treated the way she was. And Caleb already threatened to take Suzie and to do more to her.

 

[reayLongwood]

imo, The scene of the goon holding her felt a little weird for me too it changed the mood. pros: the new character added drama, which is needed. I expect variety of characters, not only those who MC&GF felt comfortable having fun, the MC need an antagonist or a couple (BCG take notes).

About de GF going from 0 to 100, I would like to see some hesitation by MC or GF depending on the situation from time to time, even when they love each other, sometimes they will disagree or overthink things.

BCG is just an opinion, i liked your work and im already waiting for the next update, hope this serve you as inspiration creativity

 

[sagerock820]

imo, The scene of the goon holding her felt a little weird for me too it changed the mood. pros: the new character added drama, which is needed. I expect variety of characters, not only those who MC&GF felt comfortable having fun, the MC need an antagonist or a couple (BCG take notes).

About de GF going from 0 to 100, I would like to see some hesitation by MC or GF depending on the situation from time to time, even when they love each other, sometimes they will disagree or overthink things.

Same for me, I know they are goons but I think it was too aggressive.

As for the pace, I agree. In the space of what? Two days I believe, MC goes from wanting her to tease with a wet t-shirt to wanting her to french kiss Trevor, sit on the face of Skeeter when he knows she's going commando, to send nude pics to Trevor, etc. I think, like you said, having one of them hesitate or think it through more, would work better. Spread it out more to even out the pace.

 

[Zer0zero]

Whats the release schedule for this game? The art is so freakin detailed I imagine it takes a long time to produce this quality. We got people drawing with potato crayons and just stealin porn taking 5 months between releases

 

[Machete]

Whats the release schedule for this game? The art is so freakin detailed I imagine it takes a long time to produce this quality. We got people drawing with potato crayons and just stealin porn taking 5 months between releases

With all due respect... as if any of this project ever had a reliable schedule

 

[Demon sensei00]

Gonna post my review about this soon. Covering a few points I liked and hated about this avn

 

[sudolink]

Whats the release schedule for this game? The art is so freakin detailed I imagine it takes a long time to produce this quality. We got people drawing with potato crayons and just stealin porn taking 5 months between releases

it's been about 6 weeks between releases I think, dev also said he's aiming for 6 weeks between.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

it's been about 6 weeks between releases I think, dev also said he's aiming for 6 weeks between.

Suzie and Sophie are both genius programmers. As such they would for sure no doubt help expedite the release cycle of the game in between updates

 

[slightchance]

It's funny how no one cares as vehemently about Drago, who openly wants Suzie, but he's just a little dork, so it's whatever.

I mean as long as he's open about his wants and all three give their consent...

I would love to see some sort secret contest, where both the MC and Suzie are making each other jealous on purpose. Some sort of Jackass gone sexual. And when a guy like Caleb thinks he's got power over the MC just he because he nutted over her juicy ass they both laugh at him and continue to fuck like rabbits.

 

[Gravied]

the beautiful game will hopefully get more frequent updates

 

[giorgyo777]

While I do love Caleb as a bully that could steal Suzie from MC, I liked the feeling you could fight back against him because you don't know or care how powerful his reputation is. Without knowing your plans, I can imagine you either trying to avoid Caleb and his cronies when navigating the main story, fighting against him physically or with some schemes, or giving into your kink and letting Suzie be claimed by him. The latter feels like you're letting yourself be defeated by Caleb--now he has more control over you. I could also see cucking being involved in fighting Caleb, where Caleb has his way with Suzie if he comes out on top in the encounter.

hi man!!!
I think completely the opposite, as they say (forbidden fruit is sweet).
The most acute and desirable thing is that MC is not a loser and not an object for humiliation and at first he would not want his beloved girl to be brazenly taken against her will without asking by some hooligan and villain, but over time both LI and MC break down and are subject to this temptation to share a girlfriend, ESPECIALLY WITH A SCUM!!!)))

 

[Zer0zero]

Ah yes, that particular zoom effect. The original intent was to give you a better, closer look at Suzie's fuckholes :d
Then I realized it disconnects the character too much from the background, and kind of breaks immersion.
Yeah suzie should be behind the cock 100%!
You'll notice that I've since stopped using that function, and have instead focused on making backgrounds to move with characters in parallax.

You saw that situation as was intended, yeah. Maybe I'm trying to push too much story into my porn game haha.
Caleb was intended as someone to rally against, and much less a 'he wants my girl, he'll take her'.
Also, his shitty self is a perfect point to grow from. I'll just say I have plans for Caleb. We'll see where it takes me, plans can change. But his original purpose wasn't to cuck MC.
It's funny how no one cares as vehemently about Drago, who openly wants Suzie, but he's just a little dork, so it's whatever.

Oh, that's Sophie's (the library girl's) bff, we might see her again

I loved the zoom - keep focusing like that in the future!

 

[giorgyo777]

it's so funny to watch people from the anti-NTR brigade in a game with the NTR or NTRS tag.
there are a huge bunch of games without this tag, but they seem to be offended by life and run here to make a fuss and interfere with what is happening with this tag...
hey, you are so funny!)))

 

[JagOvv SmearOvv]

hi man!!!
I think completely the opposite, as they say (forbidden fruit is sweet).
The most acute and desirable thing is that MC is not a loser and not an object for humiliation and at first he would not want his beloved girl to be brazenly taken against her will without asking by some hooligan and villain, but over time both LI and MC break down and are subject to this temptation to share a girlfriend, ESPECIALLY WITH A SCUM!!!)))

I think that's cool too, and good on MC for defending his girl when she was seriously threatened. I think a Caleb route (not sure if this game will have character routes or character sections in the story progression) could have some variety with how MC reacts to Caleb. Could range from being the total loser pushover, to willingly letting Suzie fool around with Caleb (maybe just for his kink or for bargaining), to having some fun competing with Caleb over who gets to bang Suzie, to just slapping the shit out of him and banging his mom

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I think that's cool too, and good on MC for defending his girl when she was seriously threatened. I think a Caleb route (not sure if this game will have character routes or character sections in the story progression) could have some variety with how MC reacts to Caleb. Could range from being the total loser pushover, to willingly letting Suzie fool around with Caleb (maybe just for his kink or for bargaining), to having some fun competing with Caleb over who gets to bang Suzie, to just slapping the shit out of him and banging his mom

all of those variants contain some kind of contention, no?

 

[JagOvv SmearOvv]

all of those variants contain some kind of contention, no?

I don't give a fuck

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I don't give a fuck

phew! Well I trust mister 10 banana cream pies to keep this ship on course!

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

to just slapping the shit out of him and banging his mom

Ultimate Chad mode activated

 

[sagerock820]

I don't give a fuck