VN Ren'Py Abandoned More Than Meets the Eye [v0.0.7] [Bearlover]

[bacchusplateau]

Definetly a interesting Story. No choices yet.
If you are here to fap you're wrong. It's just the Introduction for now.

Well it's refreshing that someone actually played the game instead of going straight to the transformer jokes! Though, I didn't even think of the transformers, because I was with @popober. I saw the developers name, looked at the tags, and then thought a tag might have been missed. As for the generic BGs, I'm willing to give the developer a pass on that one. First project, new at this, etc. I'm adding this to the watched list and I will try this game out when a few more updates occur. Good luck @Sandra963!

All these people talking about Transformers... when here I am initially thinking this was going to be about big, hairy gay men from the Dev's name.

 

[blackthorne2001]

this is a good one thanks.

 

[Papa Ernie]

@Sandra963
Called it. ::|:

 

[Sandra963]

@Sandra963
Called it. ::|:

You really know them well.

 

[lunaticbob]

thats just bare mininmum

No, that's minimum bare
*rimshot*

 

[User_10739]

I don't get the Rin character she looks like loli and her head and eyes are giant compared to the other 2 girls... She does not seem to fit and kind of put me off wanting to play this.

 

[Trapezio]

Awful grammar.

 

[Sandra963]

I don't get the Rin character she looks like loli and her head and eyes are giant compared to the other 2 girls... She does not seem to fit and kind of put me off wanting to play this.

She looks different from the others but i tried to concentrate on her story more. I do not think she looks like a loli and the different style of clothing and appareance it's because of the different regions they live on.

 

[Sandra963]

Awful grammar.

Sorry for that. I know my grammar is not good but i will not describe it as awful. As i said before, my main goal is to create a story but i will try to improve my grammar for the next updates.

 

[notamasochist]

Sorry for that. I know my grammar is not good but i will not describe it as awful. As i said before, my main goal is to create a story but i will try to improve my grammar for the next updates.

The grammar is bad, but not as bad as some of the games ive found on here. The lack of punctuation on the other hand...

 

[Godfather922]

robots in disguise.

 

[Sandra963]

Thank you for the feedback. I will try to improve regarding those things.

 

[OctoPriest]

I saw the title of this thread and came here expecting transforming robosexuals. Now, I don't know whether to be relieved or disappointed... XD

 

[Sandra963]

I saw the title of this thread and came here expecting transforming robosexuals. Now, I don't know whether to be relieved or disappointed... XD

It is only one way to find out.

 

[User_23654]

Updated the OP.

 

[Akatriel]

"I think Durkheim (sociologist) said once deviance is good for society so why when i try to skip school everyone is against me?"

Noooope. No no no. I'm out. iamverysmart

 

[paloompa]

My vision is something similar to this

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looking intersting....

 

[cedr777]

hope this doesn't get abandoned too soon, 4 releases since June with 0 patrons is not looking good...
and it doesn't help that most of the comments above are negative feedbacks.

 

[Sandra963]

let's hope this doesn't get abandoned, 4 releases since June with 0 patrons is not looking good...

I am not going to abandon the vn. This is my first attempt at writing a vn and while i might not be that good at it , i will continue because i enjoy writing.

 

[a1fox3]

@Sandra963 I will let staff know your the Dev and see if they will give you Dev tags.