The episode was ok, it is for the most part same formula as the other 50+ episodes. I've been trying to keep this to myself, as I don't want to be "that guy" but from one TK17 artist to another...constructive feedback is always a blessing. I know Morpheuscuk watches this thread like a hawk so here we go... Opinions are my own
- Expand on your themes. I think the whole mama's boy fucks his mom and her friends has been overdone here. Pregnancy, cheating, girlfriend, something...the plots are just really weak. Maybe they are supposed to be, but 20+ minutes of plotness fucking gets boring fast.
- Spend some time on your male model. Dude looks like an afterthought and the fact he has the same hairstyle as his moms is weird.
- Add some variety to your clothing and make it fit the scene. People don't dress like a street walker at work. The same white dress scene all the time is also boring.
- Add some variety to your poses. While not all of us can be Nickcockman...it would be nice to see some different ranges of poses versus the ones we are constantly seeing.
- Pay attention to your music. Make sure it fits the scene. Is this Romantic, Sneaky, Balls to the Wall Fuck Fest? If the music is wrong the vibe is wrong.
Just a few things off the bat, I think will elevate your videos...
Cheers!!