VN Ren'Py Abandoned Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v0.33] [Interblade]

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ArcanusLK

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interbladecard said:
It is avoidable, did you try and read the new dialogue. You mix what you already knew from the old versio of the game with the new. If you play this for the first time and choose to skip, what actually happens when they sleep is unknown and up to the player to fill in.
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It is not avoidable. After mother and son sleep, Zed thinks these words:
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In other words, you just choose whether or not you want to see what happened. Saying it's avoidable is the same thing as saying it doesn't happen. And saying that it's up to the player to fill in what happens is insulting their intelligence because it's clear what happens considering what was said by Zed.

Choosing not to see what happens (which was clearly said by Zed) is just being skippable, not avoidable. You just choose not to see what happens in scene seven and not change what happens in this scene. It seems like you don't know what the difference is between skipable and avoidable.
 
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ArcanusLK said:
It is not avoidable. After mother and son sleep, Zed thinks these words:
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In other words, you just choose whether or not you want to see what happened. Saying it's avoidable is the same thing as saying it doesn't happen. And saying that it's up to the player to fill in what happens is insulting their intelligence because it's clear what happens considering what was said by Zed.

Choosing not to see what happens (which was clearly said by Zed) is just being skippable, not avoidable. You just choose not to see what happens in scene seven and not change what happens in this scene. It seems like you don't know what the difference is between skipable and avoidable.
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Ah good point about Zed's dialogue I missed that. Will fix it in the new version. Thanks
 
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joelurmel said:
TO interbladecard
New bug found:
At the end of act02scene08nontr.rpy there is no jump a04s01_start

I think the first part of act06s01b.rpy with Bobby should be at the start of act06s01a.rpy. Because the doctor teaches him that he must not wet his casts and in act06s01a.rpy, he tells Monica that the doctor told him not to wet them.
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thanks made the changes to the code and changed the dialogue to make sense
 
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To interbladecard (sorry to bother you ;) )

Gross typo at each beginning at all act2's
centered"{size=35}ACT TWO:{size=30} A Night at the Dessert{i} <- double ss
instead of
centered"{size=35}ACT TWO:{size=30} A Night at the Desert{i}
 
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To interbladecard :

Another error in Scene_00.rpy.
If you hit return at the name request, you go back to the main menu...
You have to delete the tab before jump a01s01_start to solve.

And a suggestion:
$ tempname = renpy.input("{b}What is your name? default: [mcname]{/b}").strip()
if tempname != "":
$ mcname = tempname[0].upper() + tempname[1:] if tempname else ''
$ umcname = tempname.upper()

The first treatment is to have the first letter in upper case and the 2nd to have the MC name in full upper case when Sophia screams
 
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to interbladecard :

a suggestion for the act02scene04.rpy line 104, replace:
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve

with
image xxx001c_b:
"xxx001b"
pause 0.35
"xxx001c"
pause 0.35
repeat

scene xxx001c_b with dissolve
mc_mlou "{size=+10}I'M IN HEAVEN!!!!"

Which is more elegant (maybe you have to adjust the pause) and allow some to jerk off :cool:

another suggestion for act01scene02.rpy line 441
replace

scene dickclose with dissolve
sop "D..d..dy..[mcname]!"

with

scene dickclose with dissolve
$ smcname = mcname[0]
$ s2mcname = mcname[0] + mcname[1] if mcname else ''
sop "[smcname]... [smcname]... [s2mcname]... [mcname]!"

screenshot0001.png
 
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joelurmel said:
And a suggestion:
$ tempname = renpy.input("{b}What is your name? default: [mcname]{/b}").strip()
if tempname != "":
$ mcname = tempname[0].upper() + tempname[1:] if tempname else ''
$ umcname = tempname.upper()

The first treatment is to have the first letter in upper case and the 2nd to have the MC name in full upper case when Sophia screams
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No need to fix the first treatment, when a player is too lazy to use proper capitalization inputting a new name....that's a PEBCAK issue, not a game issue
for the second, there's text flags to show variable values in all caps, so [mcname] would just need to be changed to [mcname!u] in dialogue lines where the line is all caps.
 
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monkey33 said:
is that the only scene considered "ntr"? cuz i agree with you that it's rape instead. i personally stay away from ntr, but if thats all it is (well having Love interest raped isn't great, but can get past that).
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I believe people who dislike it would still call it NTR because for those who dislike NTR and also dislike any love interest getting used by another guy willing or unwilling it still gives those players the same discomfort as regular NTR, same as sharing/swinging... So is a Love interest getting raped NTR? I mean maybe not by Google definition but chances are people will still feel shit about it unless that is the content they are into
 
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MadLad Nomad said:
I believe people who dislike it would still call it NTR because for those who dislike NTR and also dislike any love interest getting used by another guy willing or unwilling it still gives those players the same discomfort as regular NTR, same as sharing/swinging... So is a Love interest getting raped NTR? I mean maybe not by Google definition but chances are people will still feel shit about it unless that is the content they are into
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i feel ya, i'm 100% one of those people that rage at ntr and any other penises near my waifus :p (though this is my first time posting about it)
 
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joelurmel said:
to interbladecard :

a suggestion for the act02scene04.rpy line 104, replace:
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve
scene xxx001b with dissolve
scene xxx001c with dissolve

with
image xxx001c_b:
"xxx001b"
pause 0.35
"xxx001c"
pause 0.35
repeat

scene xxx001c_b with dissolve
mc_mlou "{size=+10}I'M IN HEAVEN!!!!"

Which is more elegant (maybe you have to adjust the pause) and allow some to jerk off :cool:

another suggestion for act01scene02.rpy line 441
replace

scene dickclose with dissolve
sop "D..d..dy..[mcname]!"

with

scene dickclose with dissolve
$ smcname = mcname[0]
$ s2mcname = mcname[0] + mcname[1] if mcname else ''
sop "[smcname]... [smcname]... [s2mcname]... [mcname]!"

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thanks mate fixed all of the issues
 
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V2.9.2

No new content compared to 2.9.1 just bug fixes and the NTR should really be avoidable now

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Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v2.9.2] [Interbladecard] - Update only

The patch may break your game, use at your own risk.

Universal: v2.9.1 -> v2.9.2 [9,23 MB]
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Bob69 said:
Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v2.9.1] [Interbladecard] - Update only

The patch may break your game, use at your own risk.

Universal: v2.9.1 -> v2.9.2 [9,23 MB]
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You have omitted to put acts\sct_06\act06scene04.rpy
 
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joelurmel said:
View attachment 3094976 Are you sure ???
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Yeah pretty much:
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Manually checking them they are identical and UAGC that has done the patch does also say they are identical.

Edit just to be 100% sure, I redownloaded it. Last version v2.9.1 from Pixeldrain (those were here before it was updated)
And the v2.9.2 from Mega from the Dev a few post above. Unpacked them completely this time but still get that they are identical:
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