VN Ren'Py Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v0.33] [Interbladecard]

Akiharu89 · Jun 5, 2023

His name is Bigdick? Seriously?

Gametimer · Jun 6, 2023

Ghost'' said:
Android Port Updated..

Thanks for the Android Port Ghost!

mizilic · Jun 6, 2023

xapican said:
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Don't know ask Search function

I did search before asking here but search didn't find any. And if you "don't know" why do you answer?

SonsOfLiberty · Jun 6, 2023

mizilic said:
I did search before asking here but search didn't find any. And if you "don't know" why do you answer?

Are you sure you did???

It's right below you asking for compressed

Post #441 on page 23.

xapican · Jun 6, 2023

mizilic said:
I did search before asking here but search didn't find any. And if you "don't know" why do you answer?

I sincerly thought you were kidding, 3 pages back is the compressed version (that giving you the benefit of doubt that you didn't look in the post what SonsOLiberty point out,) so my apologies, that I lied to you yes I knew and I played it
Greeat Update by the way and thanks for the (komprsd ver)

Richard Perkins · Jun 6, 2023

simple_human said:
Made an incest patch
version: [v2.6.6]
feature: It changes the characters info. mc refer to Sophia as Mom, Ellie - sister. Sidestory's mc, Bob, refer to Monica as Mom
install: Unzip inside the "game" folder.

notes:
This patch should work with future versions(unless the dev changes the code), may(or not) require an update for new content.
I might have missed something, let me know if you see it(preferably with a description of the scene and line text, a screenshot would also help).

At the begging(typos) he call sopihe his dad girlfiend in stead of mom

joelurmel · Jun 6, 2023

Richard Perkins said:
At the begging(typos) he call sopihe his dad girlfiend in stead of mom

This is a bug from the original game ! not from the incest patch. because it use pattern matching to replace Sophie to Mom in certain case. So if it have sopihe the incest patch does not work

joelurmel · Jun 6, 2023

simple_human said:
Can you please send the line where it is, or a screenshot?

it's in
game\Acts\Act_02\act02scene03.rpy: sop "Haha Sopia Wins!"

EDIT: I have badly learn the problem, but there is this one from the dev

joelurmel · Jun 6, 2023

Akiharu89 said:
His name is Bigdick? Seriously?

And a boy with a dick of 40 Cm ??? Seriously ?

Richard Perkins · Jun 6, 2023

simple_human said:
Can you please send the line where it is, or a screenshot?

joelurmel · Jun 6, 2023

simple_human said:
As I understand, you suggest changing it to "Haha Mom Wins!" But I think it's okay to keep the original.

No, it should be "Haha Sophia Wins!" and not "Haha Sopia Wins!"

FaceCrap · Jun 6, 2023

pearsman said:
That title is confusing. Why it's called "son and brother" instead of "son and mother"? No gay stuff, right?

originally the son referred to the relation Dylan vs Sophia, and the brother part to the relation Dylan vs Ellie... but... that was then, whut we have now... no idea, but the only part of the title still somewhat valid is that the story somewhat started out with a night in a motel. At least, at some point it did... no idea if that part survived.

xapican · Jun 6, 2023

I don't get what is happening here, was the Patreoquisiton passing by or what ? sorry I was lazy and did not read all the posts,

virus115 · Jun 8, 2023

Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

drhotrod · Jun 8, 2023

virus115 said:
Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

joelurmel · Jun 8, 2023

drhotrod said:
The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

and with videos that are made in 281p in the last update which in addition, are extremely noisy

INNERBLADE · Jun 8, 2023

drhotrod said:
The problem here is the dev doesn't know how to do the slow burn correctly. Basically the MC here is made to be a beta to get what he wants, while the player wants to be an alpha. The dressing room scene was all the slow burn we got. That is not enough time to break down the mother for the motel scenes. There should have been more story before getting to the motel. Bot what did we get was a complete ending of the title of the game and stupidly added new family that is a copy of the first just to fill in three wasted updates.

Bit of history here. Game was created out of frustration of the extremely slow pacing of the game; A wife and mother.
https://f95zone.to/threads/a-wife-and-mother-v0-185-lust-passion.5944/

So that's why this is not a slow burn game.

INNERBLADE · Jun 8, 2023

joelurmel said:
and with videos that are made in 281p in the last update which in addition, are extremely noisy

which vid would that be? Which version did you play.

INNERBLADE · Jun 8, 2023

virus115 said:
Can understand why this game isn't that popular. Horrible game where rape is punished and it ends the game.

It's not tagged as such a game..

INNERBLADE · Jun 8, 2023

Hyperserver said:
the dev really needs to learn how to code.
No wonder it's re-written several times.
Instead of using "MCName" + "suffix" for sayer in renpy, he uses "Dylan", "Dylan (shouting)", "Dylan (soft)" ... and so on.
WTF? Alone for Dylan he uses several HUNDRED (yes, you see right - no typo/mistake over here) different sayer-definitions.
over 2000 sayers ingame for now:
View attachment 2674362
Ever heared about variables and how to use them?
mc_name = "Dylan"
suffix_soft = "(soft)"
....
suffix_angry = "(angry)"

(or even better: use 1 dictionary instead of dozen suffix)

then use sayer: mc_name+suffix_soft
(or sayer: player+suffix['soft'] if you use dictionary)

At least people would be able to rename the MC like they want to. renaming is a basic feature in all modern avn games.

There is no need to use an entirely new sayer for every emotion you want to express.

*SIGH* people decide to create games and start to put some lines together even without at least some basic knowledge about coding.

EDIT:
Or even better: just use ONE sayer (ffs "Dylan" if you want), and put the mood into textline:
Sayer: Dylan:
Textline: "(whispering) ... whatever needs to be whispered"
=> like other games do for a GOOD reason!

Houwdy,

Uhm wellllllll hehe yeah not great at coding. I now have this mess.
How could I best solve this and add the ability for new players to chose a name

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