VN Ren'Py Motel: A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B] [Interbladecard]

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I think that the biggest thing that has disappointed a lot of fans is that initially, it seemed to set up that there would be the start of an ongoing affair between Sophia and Dylan. In the clothing store, you had Sophia go from being a concerned mother, to sexually teasing, to nearly giving in to her lust and on the verge of giving Dylan a bj. She was still in reflection once they got to the motel and, thanks to the laced beer, gave in. She even enjoyed it and the two of them were making plans of continuing when they got home. After the accident, it's like hitting the "reset" button on a console game, except the reset Totally changed what you were doing the first time.
I'm a part-time writer so I know how, if you don't go back and read your own story, you'll find your ensuing chapters branching way off from your initial plot line. All everyone is saying, although some not as eloquently, is get back to what was laid out at the start. Pick it up at the point just before the car accident. I thought that it would continue when we found that Sophia and her husband were separated. Why? Did she confess what was the cause of the accident? Did she express to Liam that she had feelings for Dylan? There's no way to know because, suddenly you have half a dozen new characters introduced and the focus has now become about them instead of the premise for the game, which was the potential sexual relationship between Dylan and his mom. We just want the story to be reigned in.
 
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Overview:
In this story, you play a young guy out on a shopping trip with his Female-Guardian™ Sophia. After being in a changing room together, Sophia must come to terms with the fact that there is a sexual tension growing between them... Before action can commence, the duo is struck with misfortune: Their car breaks down! How will they get home?? How will Sophia keep their relationship pure with this extended time together?
FIND OUT, IN: MOTEL A.S.A.B.
Motel: A Son and Brother Story, by Interbladecard
Based on : A Wife and Mother
Note: This is a kinetic novel without audio
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Thread Updated: 2024-05-26
Release Date: 2024-05-25
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Censored: No
Version: 3.0B
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English, French
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Based on A Wife and Mother

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While processing text tag {size=3 0} in "{size=30}ACT TWO:{size=30} A Night at the Desert{i} 'No Tell' {/i}Motel\n{size=30}SCENE SIX:{size=30} Sweet Dreams are Made of These\n{size=3 0}(Hookers, Strippers and Viagra OH MY!)".:
  File "game/Acts/Act_02/act02scene06.rpy", line 5, in script
    pause
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 455, in execute_pause
    renpy.pause()
ValueError: invalid literal for int() with base 10: '3 0'

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Full traceback:
  File "game/Acts/Act_02/act02scene06.rpy", line 5, in script
    pause
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\ast.py", line 2232, in execute
    self.call("execute")
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\ast.py", line 2220, in call
    return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\statements.py", line 281, in call
    return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 455, in execute_pause
    renpy.pause()
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\exports.py", line 1537, in pause
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='pause', type='pause', roll_forward=roll_forward, pause=delay, pause_modal=modal)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\core.py", line 3912, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\core.py", line 2602, in draw_screen
    surftree = renpy.display.render.render_screen(
  File "render.pyx", line 495, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\screen.py", line 704, in render
    child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1334, in render
    surf = render(child,
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\text\text.py", line 2109, in render
    virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\text\text.py", line 627, in __init__
    self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
  File "E:\--Downloads--\Motel A Son and Brother Story [v3.0B]\renpy\text\text.py", line 1188, in segment
    push().size = int(value)
ValueError: invalid literal for int() with base 10: '3 0'

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mod, there are several, better download links in page 45, as well as a compressed version. can you please add them to OP?
 
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The update is really short and doesn't include much. Started good but lost it somewhere after the coma. Hopefully gets back to the point as this game looks to have a potential, but not in it's current state. Also lots of typos.
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Great game need regular big update
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NO PLEASE NOOOOO!
I must be missing something and alot of others who seem to be on same page as me cause after they wake up in car great is far gone and not at all anywhere to be seen and the future looks even more dark than back to good for damn sure not great!

I can't believe that after the first time I played this and got to actually fuck Sophia and that it was a great actual quality fuck with even following that up with her wanting it again after they woke up in the car again, then came another update that seemed like this was gonna be something to watch while it developed when it seemed that we were gonna fuck Ellie as well but a fuckin giant, yes a giant quickly gives you a fuck you now here comes the real game! Since that dumb ass ending of the 2nd update I think, THIS HAS AND IS GOING DOWN THE GARBAGE SHUTE AND EACH UPDATE SUCKS WORSE THAN THE LAST SOMEHOW!
It has quickly come to the point I would and will just go back to the actual AWAM game! Hell at least shit is finally starting to go down there and looks way better with it being the real characters obviously. Why is it going further away from fucking the only 2 bitches anyone even clicks this in the first place? SOPHIA AND ELLIE IS THE GAME AND SEEING THEM IS ALL THAT SHOULD AND BE THE ENTIRE TIME SPENT CREATING A SPINOFF, NOT A TON OF FUCKIN UGLY NOBODIES THAT ARE FORGOTTEN AS SOON AS THEY BECOME SKIPPED, TABBED OR CRTL HELD!
WHY WHY THE ACTUAL FUCK after fucking the bitch twice has it now come down to dreaming bout fucking her instead of just going into her room and fucking her? Every time Sophia is finally back in the story it gets so stupid that any action from her again looks like it would take as long as the original game so why anyone wants to keep up with this is irrelevant, we already have one slower than ever game dont need this. The Ellie plot is dumber than anything else I have seen and there is no hope after this trash update where fuckboy dont get to see what she did while out of it! if next update is same shit with alll the other characters who nobody wants to see shit from instead of only 2 things should only be in next update, Dylan fucks Ellie and then fucks Sophia or both together or just quit making this game cause nothing else is worth doing here. this whole story is fuckin retarded after the great motel scenes we had. I mean the name is hotel son brother........ not skiing another dbag and his ugly ass stepmom and have some uglier nurse take away time Sophia should have been spending time with or Ellie fuck no more wasted shit with the doc or nurse cause they are fuckin wack as the plot now!
STICK WITH WHAT WAS GOOD AND WHY ANYONE WOULD CLICK ON THE GAME NOT THIS EPIC DUMPSTER FIRE IT IS TURNING INTO PLEASE!
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Story stalling badly and the download links are either blocked by my Security software or fee charging (or both).
Its a sad result, as it looked like a good one, but its one for the bin.
 
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EDIT: Finally played E13 (see later post) and it changed my opinion from what I had posted here.
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