Personally I'm fine with where the game is going. At it's most offensive, it's someone with a cock fucking someone with a pussy. so yeah. If she starts fucking dudes with said cock, i'm out, cos that's not for me, but til then, it's fine.
Anyway, on to me bitching about grammar, because of course that's why I'm here.
"Without testicals" should be "Without testicles"
"Your the one prying here" should be "You're the one prying here"
"it would have softend" should be "it would have softened"
"Had this much cum inside me" is a bit awkward, "Had you cum this much inside me" is less awkward, so is "Had you put this much cum inside me" so take your pic.
"would be pregnate" should be "would be pregnant"
and that's all I found.