VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Motherless [v0.23.1.0] [Mr.Mister]

[Played to Ch.4 and then my eyes rolled out of my head. If everything magically gets better in Ch5, let me know.]

If story, characters and writing are your thing, this game is not for you. The dialogue is terrible and story convoluted, yet childish. The MC has magic man parts and acts like a child, or like a robot programmed by a child.

The women are exaggerated, huge tits and no space for internal organs. The sex happens lightning fast and doesn't have any eroticism. Just pumping and cumming.

There is some good things here. The MC is in the scenes, and has a good model. Some parts of the animations seem pretty good, with sound. There was some promise with the plot synopsis.

Rating: 2/5 - below average.
It isn't bad, but for people who want good writing, understandable motivations, good stories, emotion etc. not recommended.

To be honest, i first thought the game will be bad. But over time the renders and animations got better (they got really good). Story is also pretty good and i cant wait for the next updates.

Renders 4/5
Animations 5/5
Story 5/5
Characters 4/5

Best VN evahhh!

Seriously, it`s funny as fuck, the MC is a buff stud hung like a bull, there`a tons of sweet sweet poontang to harpoon...oh my!

The renders are great, all the women look sexy as fuck - they would give the Walking Dead a serious boner, the story is actually quite engrossing and has plenty of sexy time, plus lots of funny moments throughout. The MC is actually quite a loveable char and not the usual whiny little bitch types you get these days so often. Dude is a manly man.

It even has a Roddy Piper easter egg from They Live...that`s some good shit right there.

I wasn`t expecting a lot but this gem grabbed me by the cock and yanked hard!

Five stars from the Mac.

Well, to ne honest this is one of the best games i've ever played.

The plot is interesting and the humor makes it even more interesting. Besides the character designs are SO GOOD.

There is just few things that i didn't liked about game.

1- Models and protagonists apperience changes at unexpected times.
2- If you wanna replay a scene, the game sents you to main menu after replay.

Lastly, yeah this game is interesting but after few updates, it will start to feel like same episode. So i wish there will be NTR or swinging in future updates.

What have we here? ..A game that can easily be forgotten minutes after playing . From the weird face expressions as if the girls are possessed by demons to the story that makes no sense, the Dev got it all wrong . believe me, The MC is the greatest Douche and a registered sex offender on the prowl that could ever be and fucking look like Edge from WWE.
A tragic backstory of a Motherless child gone in vain..because who cares right? we fuck everything that moves. The renders are okay-ish, animations bad and the characters forgettable.
By the description , the MC is supposed to be a golden eyed boy, a ladiesman, a person who cares about others...but, the dev managed to portray the MC as a giant dick by writing sentences like " look at her, she's waiting for me on all fours like a tamed dog" to girl he's meeting for the first time.
The game is poor in every category but surprisingly scores high in the Incest area which led me to give it a 3 star. If you like Incest and are not story driven ,or just like to plain fap, this is the game for you.

I decided to abandon the game on episode 2. Half of the girls look odd, animations are janky and detract from the experience, the story progresses in a non-sensical way and English is not the best. Not recommended.

Motherless is the one of the Best enjoyable story I ever found.

Story is neat with excitement elements
Lot of Fapping stuff
Bunch of different females, with Milfs are of Top Natch Quality, along with MC's GF.
This is the story where I have seen MC having three mother figures is so rare in other adult games.
The way author handled patreon rules in terms of Incest is a helpful trick for other devs too.

Yes, Some people may criticize it for being a bit less teasing or having much sex scenes, but on a final note, still many of us are coming here to play fap games. And the story is also equally exciting with mystery.

Especially who are into Mom/Son or Milf fetish, should definitely play this game.

Title is "Motherless", but it is mothers on full mode.

very nice work. loved the game!

1. good soap opera, keeps me interested in the story
2. the work to get it is just right, rewards are good
3. great sex scenes, good porn.
4. love all the characters storylines, and character models.

Alright - here's the deal:
- The story is pretty ridiculous. The dev tries WAY too hard to create a tragic backstory for the MC and the way things unfold is very unrealistic..
- This is one of those VN's where every female character wants to instantly fuck the MC.
Normally a VN that has an unrealistic story and where the MC just goes around screwing every female within minutes of meeting him, I would quickly un-install the VN and give it a 1-2 star rating.
But I was actually drawn in to this VN. It probably has a lot to do with the fact that the models are all hot and the renders and animations are really good. The witty dialogue also helps to let me look past some of the unrealistic storyline - and probably the hot models.
I probably shouldn't be rating this as high as I am, because the story is just really unrealistic. But I actually enjoyed playing through this and am anxious for the updates to see how things unfold.

This game is better than most of famous games around here.
When i first played this i am completely hooked
because the mc had a hard time growing up.
Good storyline,Good plot,Good renders and animations.
what more can you ask for?
just dont mind the low rating dimwits here.
play the game and see for yourself.

Edit: this game should have wrapped up quite some time ago and while i don't have any particluar problems with the dev continuing to add hot chicks to the game, the bloat drags it down a bit, hence the loss of a star.

Do you want to help Sunny rip through an entire town of women with his Godzilla cock? Yes, yes you do. Another crazy bang fest. The story is fine for a porn if a bit convoluted. You can tell English is a second language here but it never gets in the way of comprehension. The story is more soap opera melodrama than straight up bad. But your here for the banging and there is a lot of it and it's pretty good. Models are a bit stylized but look good. Definitely play this game.

Wow, that was pretty bad. From the banner and pictures, I thought that this game would suck ass because the main character and all the female characters looked weird, boring, or unattractive. But I gave the game a try anyway because incest is one of my biggest fetishes and I've played hundreds of adult games and wanted to try something new. I didn't like the MC's looks at all, but i tried to get past that. There were a lot of super hot females in the game but the sex scenes did nothing for me. My arousal level from 1-10 was a 1. In fact, the hottest scenes might have been with the 85 year old grandma, which is sad considering all the young hot women, but even grandma couldn't give me an erection. This is a game that I am happy to uninstall and delete and I wouldn't recommend it to anyone. I would never play this game again, even if it goes from Chapter 6 to Chapter 20 and there is a ton of new content. It just plain sucks.

The premise of the mom forcefully removing her toddler from her best friend and dropping him off with a dude she barely knows so that the mc can attend this random school and "grow up and be a good person" based on ONE conversation over coffee *deep breath* is so utterly ridiculous that I almost wish I could give the game 0 stars. What kind of mother would do that to her son without any research into the school or without at least talking to the best friend to see if what the husband said was true? The dumbest part is that she never followed up with the school. The fact that the husband would rather drop a three-year-old off at a boarding school to get molested instead of simply asking the mom to take back the son is also head-scratching. If Gissell is an attorney, why wouldn't she press charges against the boarding school? Why wouldn't she and Kelly help the mc find his mom since that was the reason he escaped the school in the first place?

If you can swallow that abysmal backstory, the dialogue is serviceable and the girls are decently attractive. But they're oh so stupid. Haruka fucks the mc after minutes of meeting him; there's no choice to turn her down, no inner conflict that mc has of fucking the first girl he meets on a plane after leaving his long-time girlfriend behind and "promising" to call her after he lands. Moon, this chick who was supposed be dating the mc for five years now and has known him for 10, has no problem with the mc leaving for 3 months all of a sudden. Evangeline basically rapes the mc while he's in the bathtub.

On animations: They don't do much for me. They're sharp and the frame rate is okay, but the movements are robotic and clunky.

Nitpicks:
-We don't need to be constantly made aware of the ethnicity of a character
-In-game sounds are cringe
-Why does Haruka use so many Japanese words during her first time talking to the whitest dude (mc) on the plane?
-You'd think that a boy who spent his childhood and early adolescence in a monastery would be either pro or anti religion, but the mc never brings it up.
-Did the dev use Microsoft Paint to write the in-game menu options? I get the interest in personalization, but you can just download fonts that would work much better as a "handwritten" option.
-The mc picks up Valerie and thinks to himself "she's light as a feather" but also says he's "exhausted" carrying her to the bedroom. Either he's not as strong as he thinks or she's not that light.
-The dev went out of his way to give Helga, the maid, massive drooping cleavage. But given her age and sag, it's a turnoff to me personally.
-If Valerie was knocked up once while she was high on sleeping pills, why would she not divorce her husband? Especially after her dad had a heart attack arguing about this issue. How do you let that happen to you twice? And that's legitimately rape, so idk why he wasn't arrested or she didn't report even tho she "hates men" now.
-The way Gaylord is reported to have died cuz of "looking for a lost key and then drowning" is a lazy way to kill him off.
-If Mirella is spying on the mc, why is she talking to herself? Wouldn't she want to be quiet to not get caught?
- I despise "game overs". When Eva comes onto you in the bathtub, why are you punished for giving in? Don't give us a choice if you're going to punish us with a game- over based on that one choice.

I can go on and on with the nitpicks. It's a poorly executed game in its current state. If you can play without associating any logic or common sense to it, then yea it's playable, particularly if the sex scenes are ironed out. I could go lower but certainly not above 2 stars.

This is my first impression for Motherless [Ch.6].

The premise is serviceable. As long as it makes some level of sense, the amount of convenient plot elements is not an issue. It's admittedly fun to see the developer lampshade how convenient the plot is as well. Plot's simple: You got a new job and must now have sex with local women without going Oedipus Rex. Shouldn't be hard right? Considering how you actually have some idea of who the MC's mother is. Acceptable breaks from reality are obviously, acceptable. It's not like we all come here to simultaneously masturbate and overthink. I must however point out the dialogue sounded quite awkward, if not downright cringeworthy.

The girls are attractive for obvious reasons (with exceptions), there isn't much to complain yet. What bothers me is how Haruka and the MC were portrayed: Starting with Haruka. I'm sure porn game players are no stranger to Asian characters in porn games. What bothers me is how Haruka - apart from speaking gratuitous Japanese - sounded like a porn star with a fetish for Americans. It's fine if this is her actual characterization, but some may take this the wrong way, since it's at best a bit cringy and at worst, vaguely racist. MC is fine in general, it just that there's a difference between being an awesome guy and being an on-the-nose Gary Stu.

I've said enough for a first impression, so I'll end my self-righteous rant here.

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The storytelling isn't as tight as it could be and it isn't very ambitious, and I can't say I felt much emotional investment, especially in the last couple of chapters. But it has enough laughs, heart, and a pleasant "story of lust" with the MC's surrounding.

Apart from that, this game certainly did a pretty good job producing it.
Regarding the stories goes, I prefer the older version (early chapter) over the latest one. It's a more simple and more interesting way to tell the stories.
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I think this game is underrated, but that's not the only reason I'm givin 5 stars, it has a nice easy going story, not to complicated but still a bit mysterious with some plot changes, nice renders, nice anims, ok, maybe not the best but still very good, and then the girls : these MILF's, my o my, super fappable !!! Can't get enough of it, looking forward to more updates !

For a porn renpy game , it's solid one.

PROS:

- The story is ok and straight forward.
- No NTR or cucking crap for now (ch.4).
- MC is chad even though not a gigachad but that's all right.
- Main heroines at least not bunch public toilet sluts.

CONS:

- English text is readable but need improvement.
- Engine sometimes wonky and lag.
- Why side female characters got more sex development than main girls.

One of those games that the renders are pretty good, a lot o beutiful girls and has average animations, but that's about it, everything else is bad.

First, the story of this game has a lot of potential, but it's wasted by the bad writting, bad translation and an intentionally non stop mix of italian with english, like, i get it, the dev is italian and is proud of it, but man, stop inserting it in everything, the names of the characters are italian, 60% of the characters has a italian background, italian roots or something like that, the mix of italian with english is annoying ASF, i am from Brazil, but if i was going to develop a game, i certainly wouldn't mix portuguese with english and put a brazilian name in every character, like Luciana, Clara, Carolina, Bruna, João, Pedro, Thiago.

Second are the dialoges, it seems very robotic, doesn't feel like it's humans talking, is really weird, doesn't transmite emotion.

Third, the MC, the MC is good looking, and you actually can understand why all the girls are atracted to him, but idk how the dev managed to make him very smart and very dumb at the same time, it's something that i don't know how to describe, just playing to understand.

And the last but not least is the relationship with the girls, it's VERY rushed. Vanessa has a traumatizing past, absolutely hates man, but in less thant a week is wearing a micro bikini while the MC is massaging her. The 2 daughters throw themselves to the MC and say they love him and whant to be in a relationship even so they didn't knew each other less thant a week ago, and all the other womans just throw themselves to the MC, very, very unrealistic.

it's the longest review that i made in this site, but it's because i saw so much potential in this game, and is just wasted because all the reasons above, i think if this game had a rework, it would be a top notch game.

I have really enjoyed the game so far. Its unique in its own way. This game has good enough animations, good renders, and many different type of girls for all tastes (some you don't see often) with lots of milfs and potential incest. The asses are huge in this game but that is a preference not that distracting. The story is interesting and while the "help" is quick to sex, understandable as no other males in the vicinity.
The only negative i see is that there are way to many characters and story will get very convoluted but that will be an opportunity for the dev to shine

Well done so far and look forward to updates and continued development of the game.

I do really recommend it.

One of the best games out there. The animations are in the top 3 for me. The story is good too. I am actually reading through it, it is pretty intricate and well made. The models are really good looking and diverse.
As for the gameplay, there isn't much time waste on bullshit. Has few minigames that you can skip.
Great content. I love it. If I could, I will rate it 5/7.