VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Motherless [v0.23.1.0] [Mr.Mister]

Played this game until the end of Chapter 11 (when the MC takes a flight to Italy).
Loved the story: gripping, thrilling even if it seems a bit overdone at first. The MC goes from being a newly graduated psychology student to (presumably) being the head of one of the most powerful (mafia ?) families in the world.
The girls and women characters are all varied and all have distinct personalities which is very rare in such a game.
The author manages to develop them into full persons, which again, is almost unheard of.
They are all likable and some of the them are really lovable.
My favorites are:
1. Gissel - the MC's (adoptive) mother
2. Domenica and Mirella
In conclusion: the writing qualities are the best I've seen in such a game rivaling very good soap operas. This is true for the story and the well developed and varied characters and love interests.
The characters facial expressions are mostly good but there is a weird one here and there.
Nevertheless, the quality of the writing makes up for it and makes this game one of the best I've played.

Reviewing v0.13.1.1 v0.13.2.1 0.14.2.1 0.14.3.0

Story: Average. The story seems to be contrived to make the MC meet tons of women he's never met before that are also his family members in some form or another. There some kind of plot related to the MC's Mafioso (or similar) heritage, but it's incredibly shallow and overshadowed by the MC meeting and fucking new women all the time. It's hard to stay interested in the story, but I suppose that's normal for a porn game. It's nice that the MC is portrayed as genuinely caring for the women he meets, but the fact that every woman immediately falls madly in love with him and wants to fuck him is a fantasy that got old fast.

Writing: Poor. Maybe other languages are better, but the English is tedious to read. The dialogues are forced, too formal, and definitely unnatural, and that's ignoring the also poor spelling and grammar. It's definitely a translation problem, which is typical for adult VN games.

Visuals: The render quality is good but not outstanding. Too many of the character's bodies and sometimes faces are unnaturally distorted (cartoonish) and the distortion varies between scenes with the same characters. The distorted bodies are obviously intentional, but unfortunately, not consistent. The animations are mostly poor but I'm starting to notice better animations in newer updates so new players should keep that in mind.

Content: Very good. The one thing that this game really excels at is having a lot of renders and lewd scenes. Usually, there are 3 or 4 new scenes every update and the updates are relatively frequent.

Gameplay/User Interface: Average. The game started out as a visual novel with very few choices, then new faux sandbox interface was added. This sandbox is pointless since the game is still completely linear and there are still very few choices, but on top of that the sandbox has also been very buggy. The developer said it's going to be optional in the next update.

Summary: I would give this game a 3.5 rating. This is literally the mother of all incest+harem+pregnancy games, pun intended. If that's your thing, you'll definitely want to play it. The MC fucks nearly every woman in the game. Most of them are related to him and it looks like most of them will get pregnant. I played without any mod or patch and, using the default relationships of "friend", the dialogues are even more awkward. Actual incest with known family relationships definitely makes for a better story, but there are so many relationships, it doesn't make sense to choose them yourself, so if that's what you want, you definitely need to use a mod or a guide to choose relationships.

The quality is certainly getting better, specially the model renders, with little to no awkward expressions down the update and animations are good too. Average story but imho feel good one, love is in the air baby, did i tell you it's i n c e s t* game. Some of the reviews down has 1star but it's definitely better than one, jump in then and enjoy, you may come across Willem Dafoesque expressions sometime in the beginning so patience is virtue.

This game is certainly more than i would expect. the first time i saw it i was thinking that it would be just a quick one sex scene one after the other but boy! was i wrong (kinda).

The story although not the best is certainly entertaining, enjoyable, and easy to follow, even if it fall flat on some places it's still far from disappointing.
The character, while not the best looking (imo) is good and certainly act more than just a sex object.

However i think the fact that the mc always managed to make every women around him fall for him in just a matter of a few scenes is a big weakness, since that way there's little to no build up for their relationship, making even if you succeed on wooing her feels not that rewarding.
The animation also could use some improvement, since in some scenes it feels a bit too rough, causing me to break out from the immersion.

But overall, this game is good, and it keeps making me wanting more, the fact that it's a fairly frequent update also makes it even more appealing.

Great work Mr. Mister, i hope that i can play it to it's conclusive end

Good graphics and that is it. There is no coherent plot yet the developer insist to continue on it. Dialogues are incredibly boring and meaningless MC's character is bland. Sex scenes are so boring as if they are drawn by someone who had only missionary sex in his life

Maybe give it a try at full skip. Don't waste your time trying to read the nonsense.

Motherless is a miss on my book. The reasons for that are several, the main one being a horrible story with an equally horrible writing. Character models are also quite dispropportionatea s well in many ways, making them strange, and often adopt quite weird postures just for random sexualization that add little to the story. The game does include many animations, which is something good, but at least as far as I got, their quality was not too high. And finally, it does include several sounds on different moments, but nothing impressive either.

So, all in all, a clear no for me.

Well finally sat down and played from the beginning until the update and I must say I was very impressed. I’m definitely someone who is about the story and build up. Well this game certainly does that and has a great story.

pros
- graphics and characters are unique and well flushed out as far as their story. A couple of the daughters of the woman you work for could use a bit more flushing out but that’s a minor grief.
- I think I avoided this game do to the main character looking like a blond Barbie. After playing and learning his or your story that went away and found myself liking him more and more.
- lots of stories, twists, plots, and side quests that are all interconnected and blended together very well
- overall a great story with plenty of lewd content and kinks to certainly satisfy most. Great game and looking forward to the updates.

cons
- first time this has ever been a con for me, but there is lots of lewd content and when I say a lot the main character would give Wilt Chamberlain a run for his money. The only reason it’s a con for me is that sometimes I’m getting really into to story and I’m like Ugg another scene. This is minor for me but it’s one of those conundrums where if you have too little of lewdness you loose people, but too much (grant it first time I’ve said this) and you kind of roll your eyes too.

great game overall and certainly five stars

This is the best game in the history of this site, and the second place is very, very far behind - characters, sex scenes, plot, MC, there is not a single minus here, this game is just too good, and dev releases updates with such crazy frequency, for such work Mr.Mister deserves six stars no less

It looked interesting at first this game, but quick reveals that its definitely scrapping the barrel end of Quality AVNs.


I only rate it 2 stars because there has and is alot of effort being put into this by the Developer.



But Frankly its very poor. the models although are generally good quality, are horrendous to look at. i mean it might just be me and my tastes... but every female model is the same basic formula... big tits, massive arse, body builder bodies complete with thigh and calf implants. not at all pleasant.

In fact the only true different model i've come across is the granny.


Story wise.... there's a story atleast. abit simple and far fetched but its there.


not sure why theres choices in this VN, as it doesnt seem to matter if i want a lewdscene or not with any character, your forced into it.



the other thing thats incredibly annoying. literally every female character the MC meets, within seconds falls in love or so overcome by lust that within afew scenes its time for the lewdscenes, and not a one is bothered weather or not if the females or MC are in any relationship, married or even gay (valerie for instance, a gay women who switches side after meeting the MC. the gay man who suddenly wants to bang a woman all the time???), they all drop those panties within seconds of meeting the MC.



If your after an Adult Visual novel with a good story, maybe some feels, engaging characters with personality, maybe abit of romance build up etThen this is not for you.



If your after Porn Visual Novel that is just constant lewdscenes one after the other. then this is the one for you.

The MC has the look, but is annoying and cringeworthy unfortunately. Let's jump right in.


Story:

There's this odd looking blob of a child who stays with one chick (Valerie) ends up in some odd religious cult school where they "fancy" little boys. He ages and runs away where he stays will another chick (Gisselle) until he's older and his journey begins, he gets pussy, there's weird and obnoxious sounds effects the whole nine yards. Not much there, but I found this game annoying, the MC is like some Fabio wannabee, who zero personality, yet bags all the girls instantly, no real relationships or build ups, just nothing.

His annoying name Sunny, which can't be changed by the way adds to the rage, if you're making a game please give players the option to change the name completely it breaks immersion when I'm constantly called Sunny, I can't stress enough how annoying I found that.

Characters:

Nothing special, slutty Mom turned nun, Valerie was probably the best character early on... until she wasn't. She quickly had a change in personality and give in to "Sunny" as do all of them. It just gets old fast, no real romance, just a lot of "Oh Yeah!!" and "Haaa".

Renders:

Average renders, most of the models look plastic, there are grainy renders, but it evens out.


Overall I'm just not impressed by Fabio and his quest for more "Oh Yeah!!!".

If I could rate this game with 10 stars, I would give 11.
In my opinion, everything is fine in it.
The pictures are bright and rich, they are simply pleasing to the eye and I like their approach to illustrating events.
On the one hand, the plot is straightforward, but it allows the player to make a choice without confusing him in many unnecessary options. The options remain, and given the colorfulness of the novel, I would like to try to change some events.
Personally, the process of the game does not tire me much, but only pleases me. Especially it should be noted the lack of relations with loli, which I really like.
To a small drawback, it can be attributed to the inability to leave only those who you want nearby and add another character to your personal harem.
But in principle, this is a trifle that does not interfere with playing with pleasure.
Thanks to the site and the author. I'm looking forward to the update.


P.S.
A good idea always comes with a delay, it would probably be chic if the costumes of the main characters could be made a little fetishistic and modern - vinyl, leather, latex. On the wonderful figures of the heroines, it would look gorgeous and add piquancy and charm. I hope that such thoughts have occurred to the distinguished author. Thanks again for a great game. For me, she is in the top five of the best

Motherless - v.0.11.4.0

Are you tired of blueballing slow burners? Are you tired of having to see the main menu of a VN, just when things were about to get hot? Well boy, do i have the game for you

Introducing: Sunny. The archetypical Don Giovanni/Lothario, who successfully nails every woman, whether they be nuns or cowgirls. This guy has the Holy-trinity of what every woman is physically looking for in a man: Face, Body and Balls. That means you won't have to awkwardly fap to an 18 year old with the face and body of a child, but the dick of a horse, giving it hard to a supermodel. But of course, to even the scales, the dev had to create some fucking sex-bombs for the MC to ravage, and he did. The women in this novel are extremely pleasing to eye and down-right sexy. Their curves, their tits and their ass, are something to behold. But without sounding too much like a simp, i'll leave the rest for you to experience.

My only problem with this novel, which other reviewers have also expressed, was the dialogue. I perfectly understand this myself, being someone from a non-English speaking country, with a subpar understanding of grammar etc. But nothing ruins a boner quite like broken sex-talk.

But from my perspective, this game was the perfect cure for my blueball blues. And that much is apparent for the constant lewd/sex scenes.

4/5 - a proud fap

Aw, Sunny, ya big galoot. Seriously, though you do get to rename him. But I like Sunny for the MC. He looks like a Sunny. He's a teenage boy in a Greek God's body. He's just trying to find his mom, of whom there are several contenders. They're all supermodels, of course. And just like when two very attractive people meet, they get interested in each other. But Sunny actually earns his harem, by doing good deeds. He's likeable, that big, dumb friend who's strong as an ox but wouldn't hurt a fly. He's a Pixar character.

I have to say, looks matter with these things, and I love the look of the women in this VN. That is what brings me back. The typical DAZ assets have been toyed with just enough to make them both different and striking, like that actress in the TV chess series - you know the one I mean.

It's a VN with obscure choices and minigame elements, and there's not enough complexity to reward reply, so use a mod. There's sound and music as well, but I find that hit or miss with VNs.

The renders are a real mixed bag. In general the quality is good, not great. There are continuity issues, and lots of static images, like a person's face while they're talking on the phone. I have to say I find the sex scenes somewhat... dull. I mean, if I had the talent and the graphics card, I'd do a lot more with these beautiful women than the dev does. To me, the sex scenes are conventional, but maybe I'm jaded by too many VNs?

On the other hand, there are some sequences that are sheer, creative brilliance. The one I come back to, repeatedly, is where Sunny meets the three women at the airport, and he greets each one in turn in a different way, dancing, embracing, dipping. It's dynamic and joyous and really captures the giddy pleasure of meeting someone you love after a long absence.

The plot really goes all over the place. I think it's driven by the need is to create scenarios for Sunny to save the day, so there are flashbacks and secrets and mafia and all sorts of things like that.

Speaking of mafia, where does this game take place? It looks like North America, but people talk like it's Italy, and I think some of the supermodel-mothers are from Eastern Europe. All very international.

Dialogue is a problem. I hate to criticize non-native English in these things. It's too easy to do, and the last thing I want is for talented devs to become dispirited just because English isn't their native language. But good dialogue is what makes the reader actually read the VN as opposed to just click-thru to the sex scenes. The dialogue here is illusion-breaking, like that uncanny, bad movie subtitle English we've all seen. Yeah, it's bad. This is unfortunate, because there is a lot of affection in this VN. People have sex because they actually like, even love each other, which is nice. I just wish it sounded more natural.

Entire thing felt like static. Like a TV running in the background that you're not really paying attention to, because it's not really that interesting.

Deleted before long, it was just a series of pictures with some obstacles in the form of chosing an random option, that you wouldn't know what did if not for the WT mod.

Interesting story, lots of love interest, lots of characters, expanding storyline with every update. Also regularly updated in 15-20 days. And Dev always active on forum you can ask whatever you want and he'll always answers and also react your comment.

What a player can ask more?

Review for 0.11.3.0

Story: 2/5. The story started off well. I was intrigued and genuinely interested in how it was going to progress. However, as the it progressed, I simply became bored.

Renders: 3/5. The quality of the renders are decent. However, all of the female characters' bodies seems to be the same. Maybe a different skin tone, but almost a cookie cutter copy of the other. They all seemed to have big breast and over inflated butts. If this had simply been the description of one or two female renders, then no problem. However, this seemed to be every female render.

Grammar: 4/5. I didn't notice any major problems with the grammar in this game.

I've giving this game an average rating. This doesn't mean that this game is horrible. It just isn't in my wheelhouse.

While the story may not be the best compare to other novels on here, it still has it's own flavor to it.

What I do like about this game are the characters and their renders. There plenty of characters to chose from that fits your type of women. Also, their was a few moments that made me laugh Also, the sound effects are something else. In the story for what it tells is definitely unique. One thing the author should improve is the animation. I think it can make this novel be even better.

Well, I don't expect great writing in a porn game, but this one's just poor. The characters acted so braindead und unbelievable that I could not get myself to finish the game. Renders are not great (faces often look weird and the clothes look like glued to the body) but ok otherwise. I have the feeling that choices don't really matter, so you just click along the story, that's basically it.

Tonally this is all over the place. It really feels like the writer started writing one scene, got bored, and came back with a totally different approach and instead of starting over, just picked up where they left off. The art is not great either - everyone looks like a plastic sex doll. And I don't just mean that they all have the same body shape, I mean that their skin looks like shiny molded plastic too. There's a scene at the beginning with two impossibly shaped women where one has on a bikini top, then doesn't, then does again, then doesn't again, then does again, etc. Like I said, it really feels like the dev keeps walking away and coming back without remembering details like what the characters are supposed to be wearing in a given scene, or why one character was calling another on the phone, or what a character's motivation is in any given conversation.

The potential is there, but it needs some major proofreading and editing.

I really love this game, there are a lot of girls that I really like with a huge amount of content. The renders are good enough to make me "Di Papa Lespaguetty" and it completely does the job, no slow burn and straight to what you come for. The story is fun with a lot of interesting and memorable moments.

The developer is always helpful and very active in the community, there are new updates with good content every so often.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to new content.