VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Motherless [v0.23.1.0] [Mr.Mister]

It's a great VN ruined by multiple small bad things that pile up to the point that it becomes multiple big bad things if that makes sense?

The girls appearances is one of the best things in this VN, very hot.

Render quality is above average.

sex animations, Terrible.

MCs hairstyle is one of the things that ruined this VN big time.
Sure dev changed it later on but still the fact that dev thought it was a good idea to give the MC a birds nest as a hairstyle in the first place is dumb.

another of the things that totally ruins this VN is that MC becomes lovestruck to whomever he sticks his dick into.
Its as if the idea of a casual friends with benefits relationships is a foreign concept to him...
He's just so vanilla that it gets bland to read about such an MC.


He has the mindset of a little boy rather than a man imo...
Either MC was designed to have little to no knowledge about love and romance, or it's the dev that has little to no experience with it, no offense but thats my observation.

All in all it's an alright VN but its nothing i would ever bother replaying.

[Only concerns S1]

Damn, this game is ROUGH...and at the same time I couldn't put it down.

Renders: terrible. 100% of women are deformed in a gross way.
Writing: bad. Not just the translation, but in general it's not compelling.
Progression: shit. Scenes just seem to happen one after the other.
Choices: none. You will fuck all the women. And you will also do anal.
Minigames: forced and also awful.
Characters: boring as hell, the same archetypes in every AVN ever.

But at the same time, there's some kind of magic about Motherless that made me play all eight or more hours in two sittings. I've thought about it for a long time and honestly this game just feels passionate, like the dev actually wants to make a good product and not just camp on infinite Patreon money.

I can't stress enough how choppy this game is though, I mean the women are all repulsive, with asses that looks like sig runes and boobs that are some abomination between plastic balloons and cow tits. The faces aren't much better, and the poses are borderline comedy. The writing, as I said, is basic at best and it's made worse by some really bad translation work (I could be wrong but I believe this is written originally in Spanish). Also there are obvious scenarios (a couple girls to bang) where I really wish I could have chosen another way but the game is 100% linear.

But I can't help but give it four stars. I had a really good time, and I can't wait to play more. After all, games are supposed to be enjoyable, and even if I didn't even get a half-chub once I was immensely entertained. I just hope S2 and beyond doesn't have the MC be anything other than a megaChad. If he starts losing or bad things start happening, it will utterly destroy the magic.

Mr and his game deserve so much praise and even more support. The quality is top notch and the story is compelling. All the feedback, be it positive or negative, Mr is always so open to the criticism and works to make everyone happy. He is also a great guy and easy to talk to about anything or questions you may have.

Onto the game, I truly love the mafioso concept of this vn and the direction it has gone. There's a plethora of hot babes so there is someone for everyone. All the beauties are accompanied by a great set of extras and the very likable MC. It does take a little bit to remember all the character and relationships but that is a good thing to worry about! The cherry on top are the amazing renders and great animations.

Honestly, I believe I passed up on Season 1 ages ago but am so glad I gave it another chance and followed into Season 2. It is by far my favorite vn on here! I am even more excited for where it is headed! Give it a shot, you wont be disappointed.

I thought I reviewed Motherless before, sorry for the delay Mr

Standard porn power fantasy fare. Alpha MC. Gets all the girls. Beats up or cucks all the guys. No more. No less.

Still, I'm rating it 4 stars because the dev tries to make unique models... and I do mean tries. That should be rewarded. But you should know what you're getting into. Many (most?) expressions come out distorted.

Then again, some of you might think "And THIS is why we use standard Daz models."... and that's fair too. If you're the latter type of player, knock off 1-2 stars for lack of fappability.

Everything in this game is so bad, starting with the women with their deformed bodies, the cliche and poorly told story, the script, the hyper generic models, It is nonsense, it does not even serve to be a porn game, hard pass.

I like this game vbery much...renders and girls are very beautiful...story is all right too..and tyhere are a loto of sex scenes. i'm waiting for the next update. and i recommend this game to all. keep up the good work Mr Mister..
p.s.
being italian i loved this expecially for the italian expression and words all over the game. thanks for that

I really wanted to like this game. But I never could get into the story or the characters really.

Everything is more or less over the top here, which must not be a bad thing. The MC had a difficult childhood, first his birth mother gave him up and her best friend (a lesbian) took care of him, then the scumbag fake husband of the lesbian foster mom plotted to get rid of the child (said partner was introduced as being "gay", but for some weird reason a short while later he wants to have sex with his fake wife, and the name of said scumbag is literally "Gaylord"???) and entered him into some mean religious boarding school... until the MC runs away and finally finds yet another foster mom who takes him in.

The game also features rape in the foster mom's backstory, since her scumbag husband drugged her several times to get her pregnant. She decided to keep the children. I didn't like that particular element at all.

And the story is then about the super handsome MC (who must have had a horse as a parent a few generations ago...) about accidentally reconnecting with his birth mother who is now a nun and also his first foster mom (the lesbian with the rape backstory) who is still in a toxic relationship with a partner who literally gives her pills to paralyze her from the waist down.
And all of that is before we also get a mafia plot...

And did I mention that the first foster mom is a lesbian? Through and through? Until she isn't anymore because the MC turns her straight and gives her a good time? Eventually the MC will have sex with his birth mom as well and literally everyone else. You can avoid characters here and there of course. So you are not forced into relationships. Which is always positive!

The story is nothing to write home about. It's very unbelievable but ok, if you accept that it's mostly just parody or silly (fun). Except for the rape backstory, which is neither silly nor fun, it's nasty even if you never see it, it's just mentioned through dialogue and narration.

Where Motherless really disappoints is with the character models. Now beauty is subjective but virtually all the female love interests in this game look weird with strange proportions, oversized hips and bottoms and weird faces.

The game has some music, but mostly you get looping sound effects.

The game also has unavoidable kinks, depending on the character. And it's one of those games where the MC encounters a virgin (on an airplane, random encounter of all things!) who is not yet ready for normal sex (of course!), but is totally up for anal sex (as virgins usually are!). If you don't like that (you never know what you will get with any of the characters) you need to avoid the Japanese girl early on. Only you don't know what you'll get.

Another character (one of the daughters of the first foster mom) suddenly becomes submissive, there is even some bondage (she ties herself all up) and again, you have little choice here.

All the sex scenes are animated, the animations are ok but not as good as in other games, but certainly not the worst either.

I eventually stopped playing since I had very little fun. I didn't really like the love interests, almost all of them looked weird, the MC is the personification of a Gary Stu and the story is just silly.
The basic ingredients are all fine, MC who reunites with his family after years of absence... then there are the stereotypical scumbag male NPCs (several of them), the milfs, the mom, the teens, the virgins... but the execution is just sub par, in my opinion.

There are plenty of other games with a similar family setting that do a better job with the (overused) ingredients. And if you want a mafia themed game there are plenty of better (story driven) alternatives as well.

Doesn't mean you can't have fun here. But it will depend on how much you like the both the characters and the character models and if you can tolerate a story that doesn't really make all that much sense. As usual it's best you just give it a try, no review can tell you how much YOU will enjoy something. You can certainly have a good time with this game depending on your personal preferences.
But chances are that you may not enjoy Motherless all that much if you prefer a coherent plot and characters that stick to traditional beauty standards without exaggerated proportions and weird poses, and if you also want your MC to be less of a flawless Gary Stu.

Overall, a very good, humorous, harem game.

Pros:
The graphics and character models are good, but may take getting use to.
All the characters' personalities are unique and well done
Very humorous
MC is strong and does not let anyone get in his way

Cons:
Some of the animations may take awhile to load in.
Too many crossovers with his other game.
Forced sex scenes that just contradict the LIs personality and do not fit the game at all.

Review for v0.15.2.0
The Good:
I personally enjoy the art especially later on they get better.
Wide selection of tag/fetishes especially as a person who enjoys Harem and Pregnancy.
The Bad:
I believe the game is heading towards "Too many Characters". I hope the devs finish this project and move on. It's like a double edge sword with the amount of characters they have to focus on every once in a while.
The downright ugly: I couldn't think of anything particular tbh.
Overall: 4.5/5
I can't wait till we reach the final update of the game.
Best wishes to the Devs and anyone who wants to play/ is playing.
Highly recommended.

Kind of a mixed feeling about this game.

Game has amazing rendering, animations are good as well. Female characters are hot and MC is alpha like, also the amount of dialogues is good (not too much not too few).

However the scenario is kind of a mess in my opinion. Relationships between characters, MC objectives and story development really lack consistency and is very vague. Like nothing is explicitly said, there is no clue in relationships between some characters, you have to guess ? I mean the dude also has tons of girlfriends but you don't know if they are sex friends, exs, proper girlfriends, or something else, the default relationship with the characters and 80% of female characters is "friend". At this point it does affect to a certain extent the originality of the game but also its "teasing" factor. This should be rewritten and clarified.

3/5 only because the game looks good.

Good:
The game has lots of content,
no bullshit blue balling +
lots of moms in there and the renders and characters are unique enough.
Almost perfect.

What I kinda do not like :

I liked the previous mc more , current one looks like every other mc ever. Hair makes a big difference in these Daz things.

It has the same problems most patreon incestish games got, but more chaotic with so many relations to name to the point I forgot who is who except a few characters after coming back.
It is super minor though, it won't be a problem in completed state, just affects people who come back once every few months to come back and play the updates.

Motherless its a no. The reasons for that are alot, the giggest one is that its a bad story with an equally bad writing. Character models are also quite disproportionate `looking strange` . The game does have many animations, which is short of good, but at the end, their quality was also bad. And finally, it does include several sounds on different moments, but nothing impressive either.

So, Thats a no.

The story line is interesting, with a little bit of humor which brings the occasional chuckle. It has decent sound effects. The fact that you can technically write the incest aspect out off the game is something some players can appreciate. The image quality is good, and the characters have a good design.

Animations are great but the story is a bit thin, then there is the whole option to rename your character being pointless as everyone refers to you as "Sunny" for the majority of the game which defeats the whole purpose of being able to name your character in the first place

Developer gave 200% on renders. The story pacing and plot are kind of all over the place but I believe that is secondary in a porn game, only when it is truly bad I find the game unplayable, not the case this time. I hope that the dev keeps up with this quality.

This collection of game is one of best game in the F95zone .
Attractive body , wonderful story , genius author . Just waiting impregnate evryone , again and again , that would be awesome harem .
Developer Mr.Mister is very excellent .

Awesome game marathoned through all 2 seasons it had all the spanish soap opera feels at first I thought it would be a boring hentai game with no story but u get pulled in very quickly loved how long it is cant wait for new update

An amazing game with a huge number of characters, a story that you want to read, and not skimp on sex scenes, many thanks to the developer for his work, I'm really looking forward to the NTR scene with Natasha's mother of the protagonist, thanks for your attention

Played this game until the end of Chapter 11 (when the MC takes a flight to Italy).
Loved the story: gripping, thrilling even if it seems a bit overdone at first. The MC goes from being a newly graduated psychology student to (presumably) being the head of one of the most powerful (mafia ?) families in the world.
The girls and women characters are all varied and all have distinct personalities which is very rare in such a game.
The author manages to develop them into full persons, which again, is almost unheard of.
They are all likable and some of the them are really lovable.
My favorites are:
1. Gissel - the MC's (adoptive) mother
2. Domenica and Mirella
In conclusion: the writing qualities are the best I've seen in such a game rivaling very good soap operas. This is true for the story and the well developed and varied characters and love interests.
The characters facial expressions are mostly good but there is a weird one here and there.
Nevertheless, the quality of the writing makes up for it and makes this game one of the best I've played.

Reviewing v0.13.1.1 v0.13.2.1 0.14.2.1 0.14.3.0

Story: Average. The story seems to be contrived to make the MC meet tons of women he's never met before that are also his family members in some form or another. There some kind of plot related to the MC's Mafioso (or similar) heritage, but it's incredibly shallow and overshadowed by the MC meeting and fucking new women all the time. It's hard to stay interested in the story, but I suppose that's normal for a porn game. It's nice that the MC is portrayed as genuinely caring for the women he meets, but the fact that every woman immediately falls madly in love with him and wants to fuck him is a fantasy that got old fast.

Writing: Poor. Maybe other languages are better, but the English is tedious to read. The dialogues are forced, too formal, and definitely unnatural, and that's ignoring the also poor spelling and grammar. It's definitely a translation problem, which is typical for adult VN games.

Visuals: The render quality is good but not outstanding. Too many of the character's bodies and sometimes faces are unnaturally distorted (cartoonish) and the distortion varies between scenes with the same characters. The distorted bodies are obviously intentional, but unfortunately, not consistent. The animations are mostly poor but I'm starting to notice better animations in newer updates so new players should keep that in mind.

Content: Very good. The one thing that this game really excels at is having a lot of renders and lewd scenes. Usually, there are 3 or 4 new scenes every update and the updates are relatively frequent.

Gameplay/User Interface: Average. The game started out as a visual novel with very few choices, then new faux sandbox interface was added. This sandbox is pointless since the game is still completely linear and there are still very few choices, but on top of that the sandbox has also been very buggy. The developer said it's going to be optional in the next update.

Summary: I would give this game a 3.5 rating. This is literally the mother of all incest+harem+pregnancy games, pun intended. If that's your thing, you'll definitely want to play it. The MC fucks nearly every woman in the game. Most of them are related to him and it looks like most of them will get pregnant. I played without any mod or patch and, using the default relationships of "friend", the dialogues are even more awkward. Actual incest with known family relationships definitely makes for a better story, but there are so many relationships, it doesn't make sense to choose them yourself, so if that's what you want, you definitely need to use a mod or a guide to choose relationships.