Had a quick run through.
I don't understand what people's problem with Ivy was. You get 2 chances to avoid/turn her down. So that's the avoid part taken care of.
Renee portion is indeed unavoidable but she doesn't really do anything, does she? It's not like Ivy fucks Renee & is coming for all your LIs. Rather the Renee part makes the dialogue much hotter, taking the dominant role mc is too ignorant (not enough knowledge/experience, with trans in general or of Ivy specifically) to take at the moment.
Ivy remained just 'a bottom for the protagonist' in the scene & didn't top anyone. While I'd be grateful to get options to avoid top Ivy(fucking other LI, getting bjs), scenes like Renee helping push Ivy further into bottom/slut territory is hot imo.
Personally, I like MC dom/top others, don't like the MC being dom/top by others & don't like MC's LIs being dom/top by anyone other than MC. So the Ivy scene felt hot rather than bad. As long as you can avoid Ivy dick interactions, it should be good enough. That's just my personal view anyways ¯\_ (ツ)_/¯
While disabling trans at the start alongside netori & drugs sounds good (tbh should've done that from the start - trans is waaay more controversial than netori), I hope the option to disable her interactions with others isn't a blanket ban that includes similar scenes like the Renee one.
Rather I'd say put options before each interaction. Just like you can say yes or no to the bj (put a better transition for the no option tho. Just putting pass currently makes it feel more abrupt compared to how the scene flows when giving the bj), you can say yes or no to Renee entering the bathroom.
Rather giving several options to customise MC actions is a good thing.
I actually think the cunnilingus in the Eisley scene shouldn't be default. Give cunni if you choose treat, not if choose shock. Similar to bj or no bj option for Ivy, gives a generous vs selfish lover route vibes, similar to cocky vs humble - one for non-sexual interactions & one for sexual ones, though some overlap would be natural.
(Ofc selfish is not purely bad/evil just like how cocky isn't. Still cares about others, just the amount of priority for others pleasure vs his own (cunni vs bj) differs, creating a subtle difference in scenes & dialogues)
Well this went from a suggestion about a single choice to a suggestion about a whole mechanic/route
More you feel you can dictate the MC interactions/personality/character, the more invested a player will feel in a game.
What else...
Good renders. I'm always apprehensive of MC faces, but looking at the multiple competently created male characters, I feel there's nothing to worry about. Give the MC a great face
Same for the female characters too, tho that isn't as much of an unicorn as well done male characters.
I did feel some possible discrepancies in quality sometimes, mostly with the trickier angles & some backgrounds. Didn't really do a proper play through so can't really say for sure on that. Next version maybe.
Also wasn't a fan of story pacing or scene transitions in some places.
However, I mostly ctrl-ed through the game this time, knowing a rework was in the works. Proper feedback when I play it properly after an update or two.
Finally, a walkthrough would be nice. Put the events/fetishes/consequences of each action in the choices & players can avoid/achieve stuff like trans & other content much more easily. Activated from settings options.
It's kinda funny how the cannonically non-blood related character isn't a LI. Might be the only mom-type character on the site.
Anyway, Good Luck
The game looks solid & has potential
