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pupitti

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I have mixed feelings about the update. I liked it, but I feel like the conversations are extremely long osmetimes and dont end up in nothing. Also, since some time has passed since the latest update, it would be nice to have a summary of whats happened in the previous update. Also I dont really understand why we can see the money we have, since we dont really have a choice wether we spend it or not. But on the other side, its nice that we had a game even if it was the fundraiser one, the visuals are extremely good, the music also very good and it feels like we are moving forward with the story and not stuck in some side quests. Really great update overall!
 
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uamkt

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Yeah i dont mind the terminology being used and the dev actually did a great job with the feature which explains most stuff. And stuff like this got used in chapter 1 and 2 too, its just that this chapter kinda went overboard with naming loads of american sports stars and stuff which feel shallow if you dont have any connection to it imo

But maybe thats just me
honestly this bitch would be the same if the game was about a euro soccer player that no american would know and they started naming PL Bundasliga Siere A etc names that US ppl wouldnt knwo and they bitvh that its too local...Its the sport hes using...
 
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ImSenjou

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About the "harem club", I didn't understand the scene when I saw it in the game, it was weird to see that, and I don't think it should be there, I only understood it when I read the comments here, and the guy being mocked is probably someone who is already on my long 'ignore' list, because I have no idea who he is.

I think if the dev wanted to mock the guy and people like him, creating a short comic and posting it on Patreon would be enough, someone would have posted it here and whoever cares would have found it funny, but as some said, the dev should think bigger, and consider that 99% won't understand, and this specific content can negatively affect the general opinion of the game on platforms like Steam, I'll just post some SS from the game, I think the dev will understand it better that way.

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Canon content in AVNs usually shows characters in the background, who are there, but are not part of the story, but in this game it's not like that, the characters in the story interact with the canon characters, something I don't think should happen; A few months ago I commented on a character, but only later did I find out that it was a canon character from another game and not someone who is actually part of the story, which distracted me... it might just be a personal opinion, but that's my opinion.

About the update, I thought it was weak, I like the game, but this update felt like filler to me, we didn't see any progress in relationships, maybe with Fame, but only maybe; the renders avoided showing Parker for some reason, she was there, but the renders focused a bit too much on the protagonist, I don't even remember Parker's face or what she was wearing; Yuna appeared, but she was in the background, she just happened to be in the protagonist's room, but the focus was still on the protagonist and not her; the only other character we might have seen progress with was Ria.

About American football, I don't know much about the sport, and I'm not interested in learning about it, so I'll avoid talking too much about it, but the dev needs to remember that it's not a widely popular sport, and all that content and conversations in a short space of time can be a bit overwhelming, so many things were said that I don't understand and mentioned so many people that I've never heard of, that I ended up simply ignoring and skipping those dialogues; I would enjoy it much more if there was less of that and more content with the LIs, after all, I'm here for them.

Anyway, I like the game, but due to my expectations, this update was disappointing, I wanted more scenes with the LIs, more progression in relationships, especially with Yuna, I'm not interested in Fame and had even avoided her before, but I remade my save saying "yes" to all of them simply because I thought the update was weak.

One criticism I have to make is the huge amount of "exceptions" I encountered when clicking through the interface, and honestly, it's worrying to see so many problems like that, and it's something the dev could fix in a day if he wanted to.
 
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Landro2340

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lmao @ the Goff diss.
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Not going to lie this game suprised me a lot, very well written and the renders are incredible (all those tattooed ladies man 10/10).

I agree with what others have said that the harem club meme is a bit out of place, I didn't get it at first unless I came here, other than that keep doing you dev about time we had a proper football game in here loving all the references.
 

MissFortune

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Alright the constant right wing shit was a bearable for a while but this one sent me. Like is the constant right wing shit realllly necessary here?
I won't deny there is some right-leaning stuff in the game (mostly hidden by the patch). But there's nothing right or left wing about the general statement, it's more inherently apolitical than anything else. Big/mainstream media has warped the view that it's a right wing belief while simultaneously ignoring that trans men/women themselves are against it.

Nice to know Thad Castle ain't forgotten. Saw the name and instantly thought of him.

If unknown hes a funny dude in Blue Mountain State.
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Its at the beginning-ish but the fact theres a crazy mofo named Thad & college football? Can't say thats coincidence.
There's another in Episode 3, too. During the party. :KEK:
 
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I enjoyed the update overall, but it would've been nice to see a little more of Parker, Diana, and Yuna beyond just a brief appearance in v0.3. It didn't have to be to the level of Phoebe "Fame" was this update, but something more alike to Ivy, who I both enjoy their characters. Those three's personal times with the MC felt very brief in comparison.
As a fan of American football, I can see how the numerous references can be somewhat overwhelming, but that is what the glossary in the upper left corner is for (I love the Goff comment by the way lol). However, the references/terminology would need to be updated within the glossary would be only desire. At least, the references have a legitimate place in the story about a football star becoming a dragon from a koi.
The harem club thing on the other hand, while it was funny to me, it does break my immersion somewhat. I'm not sure how a situation like that would be better implemented, unless it's like further in the story where the LIs are made aware of one another to a degree. I guess the history would have to be better established of the MC having multiple partners as public knowledge, similar to how early in the game, Ria assumed from the start that the MC was a r*pist from the Natalie situation to avoid the immersion-breaking aspect.
Also, is it likely that v0.3.5 is going to include fixing the extras tab for the characters? As someone who hasn't played the game since the last update, it's a nice touch to jog my memory of Move the Chains. At the moment, there's four women I don't remember at all, but clicking on their profiles only lead to errors.
Either way, again, I enjoy the update and can't wait for the next one. Please keep up the good work, MissFortune.
 

MissFortune

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I think if the dev wanted to mock the guy and people like him
Not people like him. Just him. Specifically.

About the update, I thought it was weak, I like the game, but this update felt like filler to me, we didn't see any progress in relationships, maybe with Fame, but only maybe; the renders avoided showing Parker for some reason, she was there, but the renders focused a bit too much on the protagonist, I don't even remember Parker's face or what she was wearing; Yuna appeared, but she was in the background, she just happened to be in the protagonist's room, but the focus was still on the protagonist and not her; the only other character we might have seen progress with was Ria.
I suppose that's fair. What I'd consider world building/character dev, some might see as filler.

Point taken about showing too much of the MC. Will be sure to give more focus on the LIs for future updates. The reason it was done like that was due to lighting. If I filmed at the opposite angle to show more of her, she'd be largely hit by light with very little in shadow department. As for Yuna's scene, I thought it was pretty well balanced between them both given how relatively short it was.

About American football, I don't know much about the sport, and I'm not interested in learning about it, so I'll avoid talking too much about it, but the dev needs to remember that it's not a widely popular sport, and all that content and conversations in a short space of time can be a bit overwhelming, so many things were said that I don't understand and mentioned so many people that I've never heard of, that I ended up simply ignoring and skipping those dialogues; I would enjoy it much more if there was less of that and more content with the LIs, after all, I'm here for them.
I'd argue the opposite on the popularity of football, but semantics.

The game is about football/handegg. Most of the story is tied to it, and I don't have a ton of interest in making it a background element of the game. While I'm trying to balance the football side and the life side, there's going to be updates where there's more of one than the other. There's also going to be slower (like this one) updates mixed in with higher energy ones.

One criticism I have to make is the huge amount of "exceptions" I encountered when clicking through the interface, and honestly, it's worrying to see so many problems like that, and it's something the dev could fix in a day if he wanted to.
The stats menu has a fix up from a user here and will fixed in the next tier release. The character page has a big old warning label right above the genders, which is what I think you're referring to?

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If that's what you're referring to, then no. It's not a one-day job. Have to design the UI elements, write everything out, code it all, and then make sure it's working. Beyond those, I'm having a hard time finding a whole lot else? If you could, I'd appreciate you pointing me toward the 'huge' amount of exceptions. I'm no physicist, but two doesn't exactly seem like a huge number to me.
 

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Not people like him. Just him. Specifically.



I suppose that's fair. What I'd consider world building/character dev, some might see as filler.

Point taken about showing too much of the MC. Will be sure to give more focus on the LIs for future updates. The reason it was done like that was due to lighting. If I filmed at the opposite angle to show more of her, she'd be largely hit by light with very little in shadow department. As for Yuna's scene, I thought it was pretty well balanced between them both given how relatively short it was.



I'd argue the opposite on the popularity of football, but semantics.

The game is about football/handegg. Most of the story is tied to it, and I don't have a ton of interest in making it a background element of the game. While I'm trying to balance the football side and the life side, there's going to be updates where there's more of one than the other. There's also going to be slower (like this one) updates mixed in with higher energy ones.



The stats menu has a fix up from a user here and will fixed in the next tier release. The character page has a big old warning label right above the genders, which is what I think you're referring to?

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If that's what you're referring to, then no. It's not a one-day job. Have to design the UI elements, write everything out, code it all, and then make sure it's working. Beyond those, I'm having a hard time finding a whole lot else? If you could, I'd appreciate you pointing me toward the 'huge' amount of exceptions. I'm no physicist, but two doesn't exactly seem like a huge number to me.
Fuck all that. Keep writing the game like you've been doing. There's only a few that are whining. Don't change it to suit them. You're doing a great job. That dude lost all credibility when he said:
but the dev needs to remember that it's not a widely popular sport
So, please keep on doing what you're doing.
 

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as for the Ivy i already rejected her like twice and still got a chance to kiss her, idk if i did something wrong but i feel like if i reject her twice then it should lock me in like a friendship path or something, i aint gonna change my mind about hitting that
Welp, was kind of worried about this crap. Really would prefer an option to leave the trans characters out of the story entirely because so many devs can't seem to conceive that not every player sees that as anything more than a hair color preference. I would love to see the response of people if the same thing was done with religion.

It is pretty much like this:
You want this?
No?
You sure?
Come on, it's the same thing!
How about now?
Now?
How about now?
You sure?
Here, I'll just write them into the story as a pivotal character. Let's keep it in your face, some more.
How about now?
.......
 
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Landro2340

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Fuck all that. Keep writing the game like you've been doing. There's only a few that are whining. Don't change it to suit them. You're doing a great job. That dude lost all credibility when he said:


So, please keep on doing what you're doing.
Gonna have to echo the brother here too. I ain't american but I have been watching it for 2 years now and it's nice to see the behind the scenes world of it (specially for those hyped prospects). You're doing a very good job at world building here so write the story as you see it fit, don't force things because of what others say, not saying that you should ignore feedback though, just don't lose your goal.

I kinda wish the MC would stick with his CB role but I get the feeling that isn't going to be the case (with the coach giving him the offensive playbook and watching the exhibition game), but hey that's fair, you ain't pulling it out of your ass given the MC's talent, there's a reason why that HC from Alabama wanted him as QB.
 
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Old Grumpy Wolf

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Gonna have to echo the brother here too. I ain't american but I have been watching it for 2 years now and it's nice to see the behind the scenes world of it (specially for those hyped prospects). You're doing a very good job at world building here so write the story as you see it fit, don't force things because of what others say, not saying that you should ignore feedback though, just don't lose your goal.

I kinda wish the MC would stick his CB role but I get the feeling that isn't going to be the case (with the coach giving him the offensive playbook and watching the exhibition game), but hey that's fair, you ain't pulling it out of your ass given the MC's talent, there's a reason why that HC from Alabama wanted him as QB.
Hell, I have several Brit friends who watch and enjoy.
 
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