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I’m shocked we didn’t make any moves with the female student. I would've liked if we showed her our underwear under the table or maybe get a good look of her ass or something.
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- Jul 20, 2017
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Why?
We get more content and the updates are a hell of a lot quicker with this game
Yes the update are quicker let's see if this didn't turn out like awam
- Jul 20, 2017
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We have only had 4 updates and you peeps are complaining because she has not fucked anything yet.
This game is not awam.
The dev is not L&P
The cast is a lot smaller
The dev has a team behind him/her.
It states it is a slow burn burn so if you don't like it leave
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- Jul 24, 2021
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Copycat all the way... stop lying yourself...
Is it now, don't forget that lp added cast along the way not from the beginning soo let's wait for a few updates to see if the cast remains the same, doubtful...
Dude we didn't even saw her titties cuz the only time the opportunity was some bath fome covered in a very convenient way her private parts...
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And who did L&P copy his idea off?Copycat all the way... stop lying yourself...
Is it now, don't forget that lp added cast along the way not from the beginning soo let's wait for a few updates to see if the cast remains the same, doubtful...
Dude we didn't even saw her titties cuz the only time the opportunity was some bath fome covered in a very convenient way her private parts...
I also meant in the way that he has teased everything out for almost 6 years
- Jul 24, 2021
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Well given the fact that his game started in 2017 when this porn vn industry was pretty much at the beginning its very hard to tell...
- Jul 20, 2017
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Either you start building with bricks and cement or pull your sleeves up and build it with sand again with a smile. Each stomping gives you something new to do rather than admire an art from the past. The stomping may hurt but you don't want to give them the satisfaction now, do you? Chin up and face the world with a smile my friend.
- Jul 24, 2021
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And i don't disagree...
Anyways six months passed...I made my statement, see you in about 2 yrs to see if i'm right or wrong...
Oh for fucks sake, the "show me titties" dude is spamming the thread again.
Omg !!I love this game , this update was lovely , finally a Dev that put pantyhose in there update !! I hope there is more between Wanda and her co worker in hose!! my new favorite seen by far!! cant wait for the next update!! thank you thank you thank you!!!
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popdoggy is legend love u bro \and ignore negative comments
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I wonder in what game we saw this "touching the fabric" thing 
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shots fired!
btw ... good update! loved the renders.
btw ... good update! loved the renders.
I have to ask... Is this being written by an AI.? Because everything from the renders to way the story is being set up looks great, but the writing is very robotic to the point where it sometimes borders on nonsensical. Like it's being done by some kind of AI that's still in the process of learning how human speech works.
Maybe it's just because English isn't the developer's first language, but this game could really use a proofreader.
Also, please consider dropping the narration. It doesn't really add anything and most of the time just ends up being confusing since it constantly jumps between past tense and present tense for no reason(the same thing happens with a lot of the "inner thoughts" by the way).
You don't have to write things like "she starts with the limbs" when we're watching someone apply sunscreen. It's a VN, there's no need to tell us stuff like that when you're already showing us a render of her doing it. Instead, you could replace that with something the MC might be thinking like "mmm, that's nice and cool" or something similar.
Here's an example;
"The boy stood stiffly, hands folded in front of him, hot and sweaty, perhaps deferentially awaiting Wanda's accountability, or perhaps he was hiding something between his legs, an indescribable sense of joy and excitement, and we all knew which."
Honestly, the only way to describe that bit of narration, is that it's very awkward. Again, much of what's being said here is stuff we could've filled in ourselves since we can actually see it happen.. The choice of words is again making me feel like an AI wrote this, it just feels very unnatural.
And who are "we all" at the end there? It sounds like we're supposed to imagine some narrator -who's also an unseen third party observer at the same time- is reading this to us or something? It just doesn't work, and only ends up feeling rather disconnected.
Again, besides all this the game does look great. I'm just trying to give some constructive feedback as I feel like the writing could use some work, or at least a proofreader with a good grasp of the English language.
Maybe it's just because English isn't the developer's first language, but this game could really use a proofreader.
Also, please consider dropping the narration. It doesn't really add anything and most of the time just ends up being confusing since it constantly jumps between past tense and present tense for no reason(the same thing happens with a lot of the "inner thoughts" by the way).
You don't have to write things like "she starts with the limbs" when we're watching someone apply sunscreen. It's a VN, there's no need to tell us stuff like that when you're already showing us a render of her doing it. Instead, you could replace that with something the MC might be thinking like "mmm, that's nice and cool" or something similar.
Here's an example;
"The boy stood stiffly, hands folded in front of him, hot and sweaty, perhaps deferentially awaiting Wanda's accountability, or perhaps he was hiding something between his legs, an indescribable sense of joy and excitement, and we all knew which."
Honestly, the only way to describe that bit of narration, is that it's very awkward. Again, much of what's being said here is stuff we could've filled in ourselves since we can actually see it happen.. The choice of words is again making me feel like an AI wrote this, it just feels very unnatural.
And who are "we all" at the end there? It sounds like we're supposed to imagine some narrator -who's also an unseen third party observer at the same time- is reading this to us or something? It just doesn't work, and only ends up feeling rather disconnected.
Again, besides all this the game does look great. I'm just trying to give some constructive feedback as I feel like the writing could use some work, or at least a proofreader with a good grasp of the English language.
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It's already planned from the developers themselves (in the extras menu the memories button)