The game's set up was top notch. The dialog seemed forced, but this is still a good one. I didn't even know about the first game, so you get a plus from me just for the change in gender MC. I find it is always nice to play a corruption game like this type here.
Immersion did break some with the change in the women being used for the MC(or should I say FC now a days.), but not that much. They were nice to look at, but we could tell in scenes that it wasn't her. Fans would know for sure. That is the problem for people that use a well known person for anything. Cutting the heads off would work for those not so known people but not for an MC unless you had a ton of media to back it up.
The U.I. is good and you already had a working concept in your other game so that is a bonus here. But since this is a side project. I know the updates will be far away from each other.
None the less good job on a starter that looks like it could go far.
