VN Ren'Py Mutual Corruption [v0.1.5] [Broken_Tomboy_dev]

[Wilwock]

I prototyped another game in which that is the main theme, but I wanna avoid that in this game. I have a very specific vision for where I'm going with this game.

How about female on male? (pegging)

 

[0ss3]

Android pls

 

[{Jeizaguretokanteishi01}]

this game is what happens when the twisted world fan base says fine ill do it my self

 

[Crimsonfiend76]

So this is just a demo then right? I liked the concept of Twisted World, but it's an understatement to say how much of a disappointment is has become so I was curious about this. I am not a fan of sandbox/free roam games, but I don't mind the format of this one where you can choose which LI stories you want to play in any particular order.

I was also a bit disappointed with how mean the family was, but I am hoping there will be a reason why they seem to hate their family member, but I am holding out hope that we can eventually win them over...while fucking their brains out of course.

 

[Broken_Tomboy_dev]

this game is what happens when the twisted world fan base says fine ill do it my self

Thats exactly my motivation

So this is just a demo then right? I liked the concept of Twisted World, but it's an understatement to say how much of a disappointment is has become so I was curious about this. I am not a fan of sandbox/free roam games, but I don't mind the format of this one where you can choose which LI stories you want to play in any particular order.

I was also a bit disappointed with how mean the family was, but I am hoping there will be a reason why they seem to hate their family member, but I am holding out hope that we can eventually win them over...while fucking their brains out of course.

This is like half of the intro, I got to do the audio for the second half and it'll be ready for release.

I know that feeling, the reboot really annoyed me, so I said fuck it; I'll make my own.

My idea for the girls is multiple. There is some trauma there, the previous owner of the players body was not a good guy; even by the standards of this world. I want that to be the motivation for the girls to corrupt the current player.

 

[{Jeizaguretokanteishi01}]

to the dev and those interested in this game i have written my thoughts on this game as it currently sits and these are subject to change as the game is still in development and im sure the dev is going to improve things thats aside here we are

just finished the current version and i gotta say kind of disappointing and as much as i hoped this was going to be the game that took twisted worlds place i dont think it will well as it is now so far the story is intriguing and seems like it will be good but the visuals animation pacing and voice acting leave a lot to be desired first thing im going to talk on out of those is the visuals and animation the visuals are a bit off and the characters dont seem very well designed and what i mean by this is they dont look very well done the concept of the characters and there personality are good but the looks are not and the animations are a bit simple i would have preferred there not be any at all for just the simple talking bits though the one sex scene was decently done now then as far as pacing goes it is just a little off like i wish it was just a little more steady and as for the voice acting well just dont do it ive played so many vns that had no voice acting but i would consider them master pieces as they had every thing else right and the ones i have played that had voice acting and where really well done had real voice actors and where made by a real game studio so again i will say just dont do voice acting even if you can use a ai to do just dont it kills the mood

well that's all the criticisms and well to be honest i dont have really any thing positive to say other then i really like the idea of the game and i give this feedback because i want the game to be successful and do what i think this story can do i also want the dev to learn and improve as much as possible as i will say again i think this game has a great idea and i want to see it pull that idea off im also well away of how early in development this game is so dont take what i say to seriously and make your own opinions

 

[Fapmaister]

You can change the names in game, call them whatever you want

you mean change the relationship?

 

[Banjorune]

Interesting beginning. I will be keeping an eye on it. The art is... not terrible. I usually wouldn't even bother with a game done in this childish, Japanese-cartoon-style art, but this... I don't hate. Don't misunderstand me, I would much rather it be good, realistic-looking 3D renders, but this is... passable. I look forward to future updates.

 

[Ciaran8023]

Interesting beginning. I will be keeping an eye on it. The art is... not terrible. I usually wouldn't even bother with a game done in this childish, Japanese-cartoon-style art, but this... I don't hate. Don't misunderstand me, I would much rather it be good, realistic-looking 3D renders, but this is... passable. I look forward to future updates.

The level of investment needed in money, time AND effort to make good DAZ models is so far above and beyond using something like Koikatsu or HS/HS2.

Sure, DAZ might be better in this situation but the dev might not have the resources, time or knowledge to do it justice, at which point it's much better to focus on getting the story and scenes right and visual fidelity taking a backseat.

 

[CollectorTivan]

this game is what happens when the twisted world fan base says fine ill do it my self

In comparison what'd you give this game compared to the old Twisted World? I really liked the old TW but the new TW is already shit so no need comparing this with that.

 

[{Jeizaguretokanteishi01}]

In comparison what'd you give this game compared to the old Twisted World? I really liked the old TW but the new TW is already shit so no need comparing this with that.

i was comparing it to old tw and the new tw is not that bad it has better quality in some areas but over all old tw is better and so i used old tw in the comparison

 

[goodpet]

Was a big fan of the old TW but tired of waiting for the remake, and it lacks the same flair as the original. Good to see something similar being made.

I don't think voice acting is as important unless it is done right and makes it feel real engaging. The best example I can come up with is Karen's Prison, where the dialogues are not voice acted but all the sex scenes has a bunch of interactive voice overs.

 

[obibobi]

I was also a bit disappointed with how mean the family was, but I am hoping there will be a reason why they seem to hate their family member, but I am holding out hope that we can eventually win them over...while fucking their brains out of course.

The over the top aggressiveness is both unappealing and doesn't make sense.

So we are suppose to believe that the son is a spoiled brat and yet they treat him like shit. If these things where an internal monologue maybe but the guy would be a simpering wreck being on the receiving end of that kind of hostility, not the brat they say he once was.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[popoe22]

So much talk and no one wrote that the game loads the processor by 100% when the game is running

 

[Broken_Tomboy_dev]

So much talk and no one wrote that the game loads the processor by 100% when the game is running

Which scenes does this happen in?

 

[popoe22]

Thats exactly my motivation



This is like half of the intro, I got to do the audio for the second half and it'll be ready for release.

I know that feeling, the reboot really annoyed me, so I said fuck it; I'll make my own.

My idea for the girls is multiple. There is some trauma there, the previous owner of the players body was not a good guy; even by the standards of this world. I want that to be the motivation for the girls to corrupt the current player.

he was not a good guy did you see the guy you created he is a guy or who and this nonentity will contain an evil background it's just funny the main character doesn't even look like a guy at most a sissy this sissy clearly doesn't reach the level of evil

 

[popoe22]

Which scenes does this happen in?

This happens already in the main menu just when starting the game, this was a problem in the previous versions too

 

[Glewey15]

how hung is the MC, I cant see it in any of the preview images?

 

[Broken_Tomboy_dev]

This happens already in the main menu just when starting the game, this was a problem in the previous versions too

That is really weird, I'll look into it

how hung is the MC, I cant see it in any of the preview images?

Not in the current build yet, but decently hung.

The over the top aggressiveness is both unappealing and doesn't make sense.

So we are suppose to believe that the son is a spoiled brat and yet they treat him like shit. If these things where an internal monologue maybe but the guy would be a simpering wreck being on the receiving end of that kind of hostility, not the brat they say he once was.

I mean if it wasn't, every character would jump him in 5 seconds, I need someway to build up affection in this world