- Jun 6, 2020
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I have pending to explain the origin of the two books, but don't expect much, the explanation will be quite basic. As for Neus' diary, I understand it, but I decided to include only the information that I considered important.I do not understand the story of these two books... One in the attic and the other in the room of the MC ... Where do they come from? The girl hypnoses the Mc? The diary is too light 7-9 pages in several years to summarize.
That got me out of history ..
I understood that it is going fast but the information comes very fast and not in the right order.
Example , I had a dialogue between the 2 protag on the incantation of the MC while I had not triggered the ' confrontation '..
It would also help me a lot if you could give me more details about the event where they talk about the enchantment of the MC so that I can correct it.