Ren'Py - Completed - MWNeus [v1.0 Fix] [CLLGames]

The game is below average.

The girl is disproportionate physically, and very very poorly written.
The mc, is no better.

The entire story, makes no sense at all. You want to impregnate her, because your grandma wants a grandchild, with the help of a "magical book", for... "reasons".

The entire plot, if we even dare call it that, is extremely weak.

The renders are barely average, the animations are below average.

The puzzles, are entirely unneeded, and make as much sense as the rest of the game. Every time you progress, one picture/puzzle appears in each room, for ... reasons?

The spanking minigame, is not straight forward, as is the need to "activate touch". At first, you'd think it's a magical thing, but, well, I'm not even sure, it just seems like the normal action in a couple.

This thing's not worth anyone's time.

Rough, needs a rework in a lot of places but has potential.

The good stuff:
Nice clean renders, the girl has a cute face, absolutely no farming, each event is unique and new or a follow up of a previous one but the story moves forward with all of them. The animations are not bad just what's needed, and while I do prefer slow burns I can also appreciate when things go fast and this is the case here.
The sex scenes were great, I enjoyed them despite some of the rough and weird aspects of the game.

The not so good stuff :
What's going on? That's what you'll ask yourself a lot. You'll go from a kiss to a blow job on day one without anything justifying it, no transition. You are having a normal discussion, the screen dims black and bam she is on her knees about to give you a HJ or BJ and being unhappy about it. Why? What did you do to make it happen?
There is some pretend blackmail there, about her having taken some of your porn to hide it or something and you are blackmailing her about it? (huh?)
Lot's of stuff like this that don't make sense because too much stuff was just skiped in between the scenes.
Also wth is going on? Are we using spells to influence her? Are we using an app? Both? Neither? Wth is going on there?
English is fine unlike what some people are saying, it's good enough.
The girl's face is cute but her body not so much. Tiny titties huge ass. I'm not into huge asses, but even if I were I believe the proportions are wrong. I hope her model will either be reworked or something in the app (or spells or whatever) can alter that.

So yeah rough, with a lot of potential, I hope the dev won't give up and will come back to that beginning to smooth things out. Because this can make it rain quite a few loads.

One of the worst VN's I've read.

Writing is barely english and is completely non-sensicle and disjointed. Random sex scenes out of nowhere. No plot no build up no character development.

Not good for a fap either cause the sex scenes suck. MC is ugly the scenes aren't well rendered and aren't animated.

I like pregnancy content and childhood friends seems like a great launching point so I was disappointed this was such a turd.

A chill game with a solid start so far(as of v0.2); has a good model for the the main partner, a story that’s interesting while not taking itself too seriously, and non grindy gameplay which is always good to see. The games creator isn’t a native English speaker so the grammar is sometimes a bit off, but it’s not something I’ll criticize given it’s a one man team. If the developer did want have the grammar be a bit tighter an English speaking editor could give this one pass through and they would be able to fix the few issues there are. Overall promising, keep up the good work.

The characters have alien proportions which look absolutely horrible as do the hairy bleeding genitals.

There's random blowjob scenes from day 1 that you have no control over with the girl just saying youre annoying, I have no idea whats going on but based on the other reviews I assume its becasue of the found photos

The writing/plot is ridiculously bad, the 'reasoning ' for why things work isn't thought through at all

Learning touch doesn't work. Minigames are an annoyance

Gave this one a DL because the model caught my eye. Decent amount of content in the first two updates and a clean-looking UI, but that's where the positives stop. A few thoughts:

• This game needs a translator. The dialogue is clunky at best and nonsensical at worst.
• The game introduces several mechanics at once that are explained very poorly (you do puzzles to learn magic?) and as a result, you get sex scenes with zero buildup or warning that feel like they're way ahead of where the story's plot is supposed to be. The mechanic seems unnecessary and takes away from the story.
• MC's dick is absurd. We're all used to the MC having a large dick, but this one is comically disproportionate.

This game shows some decent promise, but it will need a translator (and probably a story editor too) to make this worth anyone's time.

very solid start!
The renders are good and unique,I have not seen a simular model before on this site.
The gameplay is not to complycated:
you get a quest and have to be on a certain time at a certain place.
but since you can access all places (but one) with one click and also move to next timefrime with one click, it is easy to use.
The sister i mean CHILDHOOD FRIEND can be found at a different place on each timframe and also wears different outfits in each of them. There you can interact with her and repeat most of the actions you have done before.
The lewd scenes come up pretty soon after starting a game, which a metter of preference. But since the renders and scenes are good, I count it as a positive thing.
I hope this game gets finished and not abandonded