VN Ren'Py My A-rank Witch [v0.5] [Skinny Rat Studio]

[desmosome]

When Tara comes up at the camp and starts calling MC "Boss," it's really jarring. Their whole dynamic changed randomly. Until then, she was the childhood friend, same age, almost A ranker, who spoke to him like a teasing friend. There wasn't any vibe that she saw him as a mentor or boss or anything like that. They were just friends.

Then she starts calling him boss and acting like he was actually her boss rather than just using that term playfully. And MC starts treating her like a child. This is some weird break in story flow. It's like you swapped out her personality and backstory out of the blue.

Also, I knew that the way this game is coded without having any actual variables or flags would mess things up sooner or later.
When Tara is getting banged my the blacksmith, if MC watches it, he monologues that maybe the elf lady calling him a cuck was right. He will say this even if you rejected the elf's advances and she never made that comment.

This is a very predictable error that will inevitably happen if you are lazy in coding and decide to direct different paths simply by using jump commands rather than actually tracking the different game states.

 

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[MansionWithFrogs132]

Mia will fuck with monsters only on NTR route? Or on NTS route too?

 

[drh64]

How long till you do some work on the NTS route, I am not a fan of NTR, I will play the NTR path as its part of the game, but I prefer NTS its good that both parties see some action and make for a better game I think.

 

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[Dunking_Donuts]

How long till you do some work on the NTS route, I am not a fan of NTR, I will play the NTR path as its part of the game, but I prefer NTS its good that both parties see some action and make for a better game I think.

Well, as for the content in this update, as I already said, we waited a long time, and 30 minutes was all, there was content, and for your branch, 8 months, apparently, we have to wait, that there was normal content for this branch, the author gave you.

 

[Ass Fan]

Mia will fuck with monsters only on NTR route? Or on NTS route too?

I'm sure she'll do the same on the NTS route, I hope so. If it's just normal guys it would be boring

 

[Ass Fan]

How long till you do some work on the NTS route, I am not a fan of NTR, I will play the NTR path as its part of the game, but I prefer NTS its good that both parties see some action and make for a better game I think.

Just one more update on the NTR route and then we'll have NTS

 

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[rufiyaa]

I like the NTR and NTS route being decided by the potion's effect, but I also hope that based on the last scene, it won't be just a spontaneous blackmailing event [it feels like an oddly boring route for someone like mia], it kind of feels too early with the potential build up by the effects of the forest.

 

[Dunking_Donuts]

I like the NTR and NTS route being decided by the potion's effect, but I also hope that based on the last scene, it won't be just a spontaneous blackmailing event [it feels like an oddly boring route for someone like mia], it kind of feels too early with the potential build up by the effects of the forest.

It's like he drank a potion and now he can't get an erection, or here's another example: he has a small penis and he cums quickly, and you could say that this upsets his girlfriend and her dissatisfaction remains.

 

[_Arius_]

it's NOT animated!

 

[Ass Fan]

I like the NTR and NTS route being decided by the potion's effect, but I also hope that based on the last scene, it won't be just a spontaneous blackmailing event [it feels like an oddly boring route for someone like mia], it kind of feels too early with the potential build up by the effects of the forest.

It really is very good, this was my favorite update
Everything leads us to believe that it could be, right?
But knowing a little about Gordok, he doesn't seem like that typical blackmailing guy.

Only if he's really interested in Mia to get to that point. For now, he has Leia to satisfy his hunger, but knowing the slut, she might stop fucking him.
She has interesting powers and she is very interested in the boss. It's still early but I have this feeling lol

 

[drh64]

Just another thought, one scene has the option of the MC or Mia being dominant, on the NTS route if Mia is the dominant one will she order the MC to do certain things like clean up after she has had sex or maybe Mia will clean up other women after sharing the MC with them.

 

[Ass Fan]

Just another thought, one scene has the option of the MC or Mia being dominant, on the NTS route if Mia is the dominant one will she order the MC to do certain things like clean up after she has had sex or maybe Mia will clean up other women after sharing the MC with them.

Yes we can be dominant or let Mia be the dominant...
And she will certainly make the MC do things like that and vice versa.
But for me the best content of this type will be with Leia, damn that elf has a lot of good ideas for MC

 

[TofuCircle]

Gordok would not go to a low-level dungeon; he is interested in a bigger catch. Why does he want to go with the witch? Their group broke away from the main clan, and there are new rules, new codes, and so on. He and his guys don't despise witches. Gordok is young, so he didn't live through the times when witches were persecuted. As already mentioned, the war ended about 20 years ago, and after that, everything changed.

I didn't notice this reply until I checked out this update. Sorry for the late reply. That makes no sense, it's not a reason for the character, because your explanation relies on author knowledge. And even then, it contradicts the character's personality.

If a super intelligent and careful character is planning to explore a dark cave, they would buy torches and other equipment. Now, the shop might be out of stock and have no torches. But they won't know that until they enter the shop and try to buy supplies, only you know that ahead of time as the author. You're basically using the fact the shop has no torches to explain why the character didn't try to buy torches in the first place, AND have them go into the dark cave. Which makes no sense. Because the character doesn't know everything and can't see the future. Also, if they're actually super intelligent and careful, they would just... not go to the dark cave with no torches.

I played the new update, and apparently MC is so intelligent and careful that his team is the most successful in the whole kingdom and everyone knows them. But... he completely forgot to do such a basic thing like buying torches?

NTR games often have characters with no brain, I'm fine with that. But this game spends the entire time telling the player how MC is super duper smart and good at managing a team and planning dungeon dives. Only to repeatedly show he's absolutely terrible at all of it. You have the MC thinking it, his party members saying it, every single other character, even people all the way in the capital saying it. But he's stupid. It gets really annoying.

 

[rufiyaa]

I am looking forward to the NTS route, always good to see both sides encouraging getting some action.

 

[Ass Fan]

Just waiting for the big moment of seeing Mia using that beautiful little hole...

Spoiler: Tara had difficulty but managed it.

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[jaques]

Once again a small dicked (relative) wimp mc written like a complete moron. Get a potion that makes you impotent in the dungeon that makes everyone horny, then let's not talk among the group who best to take it (logically it should have been the witch as by the strongest of the group and she can take care of the groupleader if lust impacts his decision making), but nope, NTR logic takes precedence because why write an actual story? (from a meta point it opens up NTR/NTS/loyal, but why bother?)

The NTR route is 0-60 in no time, fucking hell. At least pretend the corruption is gradual and try to get rid of it the first few times via more normal means (I mean, MC can't get it up, but he still has hands, a tongue and I am sure he is resourceful enough (oh wait, written like a moron) that he can fashion a dildo out of something) rather than full slut mode out of the gate.

 

[Kekekerkek]

i'm not really sure about the fact it's a "succubus" donjon, it feels kinda forced and makes all choices in the NTR route have less impact because of it, i would have preferred if it was a normal one and she just got corrupted overtime, because now everytime something will happen it'll be partly because of the "curse" and not fully herself..