VN Ren'Py My A-rank Witch [v0.5] [Skinny Rat Studio]

[M3lly]

Got it. Cheating on your spouse = Love
Letting a man play with your ass, when well out of the dungeon in front of wounded spouse = Love.

If she loved him, she would have stopped it or wounded/killed the man. Came clean about the Lizzard. Shes a liar and a cheat. Lies and cheating arnt love.

I don't know if we played the same game. Mia loves MC alot. Just because Gordok grope her butt doesn't she is cheating on him? It could be without consent? Or Gordok has some information on the witches and it is as a leverage on Mia? For all we know, Mia could be beating up Gordok in the next scene.

In my playthrough, I already chose the most slut option available, but Mia was still resisting the influence of the succubus maze.

 

[Buffalo schizophrenic]

Alway funny to see people applying logic to these kind of games. Better to turn of your brain and enjoy the endless fun possibilities instead of questioning every action a fictional character takes. Looking forward to Mia getting enslaved by those witchhunters (they know their shit if they got all those w(b)itches enslaved).

With her ass being their main attraction, it would be incredible.

 

[Buffalo schizophrenic]

I don't know if we played the same game. Mia loves MC alot. Just because Gordok grope her butt doesn't she is cheating on him? It could be without consent? Or Gordok has some information on the witches and is it as a leverage on Mia? For all we know, Mia could be beating up Gordok in the next scene.

In my playthrough, I already chose the most slut option available, but Mia was still resisting the influence of the succubus maze.

Yes, that's exactly it, because if Mia had liked it, she wouldn't have tried to take her hand away from him.

We'll only really know when the update is available. I'm waiting for him to get a good beating and insults, but then I want to see her remembering his hand at the end. I want to see her enjoying that danger.

 

[Flojerazul20]

One way the MC can get revenge is by having their ability reach the SSS rank, and making it so overpowered that no one can stand against them. This, of course, occurs in a revenge route; the awakening can happen because of their desire for revenge.

 

[Buffalo schizophrenic]

Darren has the potential to reach S or SSS level. That is, if the developer wants him to, since he has everything defined. The NTR branch could very well mess with the MC's life again in two different worlds, lol. I confess I'd like to see what happens to him, but I'd also like a revenge route. The MC is a good person, but every hero... He can turn into a heartless, bloodthirsty villain.
He could immediately recall that flashback of Mia pregnant with his cute little daughter; that could show him what he had lost and what the future held for him. The anger, the hatred, the revenge would only increase their desire to destroy everyone somehow, and with someone's help. A powerful character with an interest in him or his soul, Darren's powers would be valuable in the hands of evil beings seeking revenge.

Finally, we'll have interesting routes: sharing/cuckold/stepfather, and who knows, maybe even a revenge route.

 

[Shiemi Moriyama]

Honey Select I can still tolerate, depending on the quality, but I like more realistic games, I don't like 2D games. I even liked them back in the early 2000s, but today games are moving towards photorealism, and seeing cartoon-style games doesn't appeal to me.
My goal wasn't to offend, just to give a personal opinion, good luck with the game. I followed the other one even without supporting it, but this one isn't my style.
I took another look at the images here, and I realized there are furries, which is another big no-no for me.

There is also a translation from AI into other languages, and your author is lazy, that he at least tried to correct the errors in some languages, and did not just stupidly paste, translate, copy what the AI translated, and that’s it, and so on, a game stupidly made to make money, I agree with you, that game was better and good.

 

[Dragremir]

Of course, the ideal would be to hire professional translators. But lets be real, for a niche or indie game, that is often just not financially possible. In that situation, using AI for translation is not about laziness. It is pretty much the only way to get the game in front of some kind of international audience. And for many players who are not comfortable with English, even that is a real convenience.

This leads to the real question: how exactly is the developer supposed to fix all the translation errors by themselves? It is not like a single person knows all 8+ languages the game is translated into. Without feedback from the community, it is practically impossible. So instead of just complaining, it would be much more productive to point out specific mistakes. That way, it actually helps everyone.

 

[M3lly]

Darren has the potential to reach S or SSS level. That is, if the developer wants him to, since he has everything defined. The NTR branch could very well mess with the MC's life again in two different worlds, lol. I confess I'd like to see what happens to him, but I'd also like a revenge route. The MC is a good person, but every hero... He can turn into a heartless, bloodthirsty villain.
He could immediately recall that flashback of Mia pregnant with his cute little daughter; that could show him what he had lost and what the future held for him. The anger, the hatred, the revenge would only increase their desire to destroy everyone somehow, and with someone's help. A powerful character with an interest in him or his soul, Darren's powers would be valuable in the hands of evil beings seeking revenge.

Finally, we'll have interesting routes: sharing/cuckold/stepfather, and who knows, maybe even a revenge route.

It would be hard for him to reach S or higher though. Isn't he just C rank right now? He carries other party member with his knowledge and strategy but on his own he can't really fight or even heal very well. I think he can carry a party to S rank for sure, but his own rank would be limited.