VN - Ren'Py - My Best Deal [v3.5] [Pirot King]

I give this Game 4 star.
Reasons why.

Pro-

+Graphics
+Writting
+models

Cons-

-Story
-lack of choices

Conclusion.

Overall game is promising, need some little work like add some choices so player can enjoy this. Story is bit awkward to me (My personal opinion). Besides this everything is awesome.

Renders are awesome but the lack of choices hurt the game.
At first you think you will get to deciude between using love or corruption but in the end your are forced into scences and relationships if you want it or not - of course you have pointless walls of text with no erotic build-uo in between.

If the game would have been honest from the start in this regard I would have bothered with it in the first place.

If forced sex scenes wind you up, run from this game.

Technical

CG - Renders are quite good. The skin tones and level of detail are well above average. Also above average are the animations, especially the newer ones.

Audio - Background music is acceptable, although the mundane, elevator-style tracks start to become grating after a while. More variety, but especially more contemporary tracks would be nice.

Writing - Grammatical, spelling, etc are above average and mostly free of errors. Easy to understand (ie, English).

Artistry

This is where the game starts unraveling. The MC is mostly a typical HS level individual with limited intelligence and lack of foresight. When one reads the script the impression is the problem lies with the author. There are numerous logical flaws that just don't add up and one has to overlook what would should be, could be, more engaging dialog.

The biggest problem is lack of choice, which at first glance seems incongruent with the ability to choose a more altruistic vs corrupt path. But other than the interaction with the goddesses and their desires, the MC gets locked into relationships the player can't escape. And then the script turns the MC into a really mediocre liar that any reasonable female would have little tolerance for. But in his household and school, they (the women) have been gobsmacked by a -20 intelligence spell...or something similar.

Pros:

++++ CG and animations and attractive women (although personally I am not a fan of Rin and Lin)

Cons:

-- Story, script, premise
--- Forced Sex. Lots of it.

If you can deal with the forced sex, and just want to look at eye candy, d/l and play. If you want engagement and a compelling story, stay away.

Played this once when it first came out,and it was ok. Now, well it is a great game and is my top 10 for sure. Keep up the good work! The renders are good,the story is fantastic and has an edge to it in more ways than one. It is not all roses nor is morality totally tossed out the window,but it works.

story seems good, but needs more choices in the beginning to keep the readers interested. this feels like a kinetic novel with only few choices you can make. the visuas are good but the animations leave alot to be desired, the writing was excellent, found only a few bugs.

I don't think the game is bad but it has really dumb things in it that make it a chore to play at times. The gay looking friend who needs the MC to steal panties is so irritating that I ended up just clicking though the dialogue without bothering to read it. I got rid of him the first chance I got.

Once you get through that the even dumber Rin/Lin story starts and you have to sit through all these scenes setting up some lesbo scene in the future by telling the one twin that her sister is in love with her. Why do that? To throw her off the scent that the MC and the other twin sister are fooling around....On top of that are the dream sequences with the MC and the twin sister where he seems to put the idea in her head even more that her sister wants her. It's so painful and stupid that again you have to just click though it as fast as possible.

The mom isn't so bad and the other characters look good too. Sadly these silly setups for some lesbo scenes with some twins seem to take up a lot of the story so you don't get as much time with the others.

I'm not finished yet but I'm guessing the story will get even worse. It's pretty typical for devs to have a story but to put it on the back burner so they can add the usual lesbo action. I see more of the twins than the goddess I'm supposed to be serving. The powers I have should make it easy to avoid having to play with the obsession of the twin to hide the relationship with her sister. That doesn't happen and the MC chooses to say the worst things he could say instead.

The game characters are pretty good and the actual story isn't terrible but the weird scenes with the gay looking friend and the Lin/Rin story gives the game an average rating for me. If you could choose whether the twins becomes lesbos the game would get a better rating and just get rid of that David idiot altogether.. 3/5

This game is fantastic the scenes animations and everything is good especially molly cant wait for the new update
they should put moan sounds the game would be so much better, and also focus on more incest scenes

There are few games I don't skip most of the dialogue, or cheat to speed up, mostly come for port so I FF to the sex scenes. Often I read most of the dialogue! Even rarer for me to read all of the intro which I did. Brilliant way to start, and explain a way for Incest that works in its own world. Amazing graphics and some of the best sex scenes out there! Top notch game!

v1.7
Woah that was incredible!

The level of details in each shot is really great. Many various locations and poses were shown during conversations and the fact that the characters would blink or slightly move their body added way more realism.

Storywise, absolutely love the mind control aspect and the fact you can go the dom/sub route with various powers. Character development are great/original and always curious about what will happen next.

I feel like the main protagonist is a bit too reserved for my personal taste. I really got hooked in when the control power came on since the love route wasn't enough assertive.

I was hoping for a bit more h-scene at the start as it starts pretty slow. During the end, there are a good amount of options, which is pretty satisfying to control a brand new character from nowhere.

Looking forward for new updates! This game is some really high quality stuff.

I really like the part of mind control in this game, absolutely top-tier renders with fluent animations. I personally only care for the mind control part. In my idea, girls would not voluteerily line up to be used. And mind control can make up any problems with plots (It is actually a great savior for simple plots). Some scene without mind control or not even love influence is not making sense. Asian girls like any other girls are not stupid or cheap. They have their own thoughts and dignity. And only thing that can make things sensible is to have magics with every scene, no matter it is love influence (Personally do not like) or mind control. And the best for this game's mind control is that the girls' eyes are black. Really turns me on with those scenes. More mind control please. And Hope your game will be more popular and better.

Firstly, I would personally like to say: Pirot King, please ignore the haters on the game. I played through the entirety of this game, and while the MC could use a bit more common sense, it doesn't warrant the people wanting to lynch you for it.

Sure, the MC lies to his mother about (without spoiling it), what happens to Annie. Also, when those three thugs go into the house and take her, sure, probably should've told his mom about who they are and what they wanted. I definitely would've told my mom everything if I had the same happen to me. But, again it's only for the sake of the story.

However, the one gripe I have with the game that would redact a star for me personally if it isn't addressed in the next update is Annie. She's terribly underused in the scenes for a character that supposedly has a big impact on the story. I have never felt more sympathy for a character in a VN before like I have her, and yet she's so underused, it's borderline criminal. Plus, she is honestly SO ADORABLE!

Needless to say, I'm literally begging to have more content with her in the near future. Please. And please, update soon!

Great renders. Great scenes. Passable writing. Good pacing. and a controversial MC.

Most complaints seem to be about the MC and him being less forward which I don't think is an objective fault but a matter of preference. Even with this being the case, scenes still come at a good pace and you never have to wait too long for the next one.

If you prefer girls coming on to you and not being the initiator, but still being able to lay down the pipe confidently when the time comes, the MC might be a plus for you.

The MC is such an insufferable bitch I can barely enjoy all the good parts on display here. The animations are pretty good (I'm not much into AVN anims but I appreciate their quality), the women are proportioned realistically, and so far no one has a huge bush or anything; I also prefer there to be a bit more meat, but that's just me and I know I'm in the minority there.

There's also not much content. You only get it in with one of the main girls and this has been in development for almost three years. The way progression works in ten out of ten AVNs, we're still going to have to go through the handie --> blowie --> butt stuff --> finally good parts with every OTHER "main" girl (and by that I mean the family, duh).

Sadly, the MC is so repulsive in virtually every way except physically (I don't like how he looks either but it's by FAR not the worst I've seen). He has literal mind control but he thinks "oh no I shouldn't" without giving me the choice. Ok, so the dev doesn't want me to, but I want to. This is a game after all. If the dev is so dead-set on railroading, either don't give the MC superpowers immediately or just have bad endings/game overs. At least that way I can still pretend not to be a bitch. I mean it's infuriating in a way I can't even properly write because I just got so angry at the MC (and then obviously the dev) because I literally don't care what this moron is thinking. I know it will be stupid.

Anyway if you can get past the terrible MC and lots of typos, and super enjoy AVN animations, I can see this being worth it. Just don't expect a lot of quality content.

v1.7

Have no complaints at all, love everything about the game and I have been following for some time now. The girls look good, there are a lot of choices, the situations that lead up to the sex are great (love Rin's library and stuck bed scenes), the animations are smooth and the story is alright.

Nice Story, (actually readable, different from majority of games out there)
Good characters with incredible personalities (the actual feeling is good chars are actually good and bad are actually bad, not that thing everything is rainbow like some games)
Nice angles for sex scenes, pov and a good quantity of variation
Renders are AWESOME
Char models are incredible, theirs faces, hair, body, oh yeah!!
Animation is 10/10
If you have any doubt about the game Give it a try
Also cliffhanger from this version was just perfect, fucc I love you Pirot King .

This is the dumbest MC I've ever seen. He never thought about how to solve the problem. When the question came, he panicked and started lying. The blessings of the two goddesses were used to wipe the buttocks.

Played v1.6 of the game.
Very nice game with interesting story. Has 2 paths control and love.
Renders and models are 10/10. Everything looks amazing.
Animations are also 10/10 right out the start! The talking scenes are also animated and thats actually a really nice detail.
BGM+

The only negative thing is that the MC takes the most dumb decisions he can and lies to his close ones. Also the logic of some setups is kinda dumb. For example he brings the girl in the house and doesnt even consider the possibility of the thugs hurting his family. There's more things like this.

So good renders and all with a solid story but someone needs to proofread the script because the one writing it apparently can't.

I've been following this game ever since it launched for I'm still a big fan of Dirty Pool (I hope devs will return to that game one day cuz it's really good).
The main pros of this game are:
> Good art
> Top tier animations
> Coherent story
> Well written dialogues
I can't stress enough how good animations are and dev is getting better and better. The story leans towards that cliche when you die and get your soul teleported to another body but it's fine as long as there's some mystery/interesting situations and game has plenty of that.

I'd love devs to add more real choices to the game because most of them don't really matter (yeah, it's mostly a linear VN) but I guess it's fine. Dirty pool had a lot of choices and it resulted in abandonment of that game.

Anyway, give this game a try. You probably gonna like it.

Sex scenes are above par, so +1 star for that. However, the MC's inner dialog is too stupid for words, and the only "choices" don't have any effect on the story at all. Often, there's only one "choice". Not even sure why the game even bothers. When there are more choices, they're just smoke and mirrors and you get the same result regardless with only a slight variation in text. Or it forces you to make the same choice again until you pick the one the writer wanted, which is never a good choice. Oh, and you cannot skip any content. You're going to get dom'ed and feet and whatever no matter what you pick, so go for it if that's your thing.

Another game with some decent renders with a story that sounds mildly interesting, but we get another braindead and spineless MC that sucks any enjoyment out of the game. I made it about two before I just could'nt take the sheer stupidity and utter lack of a backbone.