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It takes a long time for the wife to cheat, slow script! I like the style of "Lily of the Valley", for example, the wife quickly cheats on her husband with her father-in-law, from then on it's just joy... Imagine, if you're stalling for a simple fuck, imagine waiting for a gangbang with your wife from your brother, it will take 100 years! :D
Delusional bullshit. My best friend conquered his student days crush from her husband less than a year. He put his efforts and charm on max and get what he wanted. Im friend with her too and she is nice woman, funny and not some easy skunk, but he showed her that he wants her thouthands time more than husband and he capable to make her trully happy and BAM! She melted and surrendered. And thats all was accomplished for only a year or less. And here we have ADULT vn game where mc after 3 years of development didnt fucked atleast once not only wife but even side charachter. MC here just empty space thanks to bad writing.
 

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You said "less than a year". Even if it was just one month, we're, what, four days into the story?
You totally lose point here. 1 VS 3 years and game for adults dont have actual sex and content what it have is equal to my highschool days, add here bad writing, undecisive mc (in adult fucking game with setting where he should be assertive and decisive by default) who in compare to IRL experience doesnt make a shit of needed efforts to win his brothers wife and by getting it all together I hope you will get my point. One more time, its a game, fiction, fantasy, fairytale created by author and for 3 years when some devs can fully accomplish their game, this one doesnt even have a proper lewd start with fmc, about whom this game was made for.
 

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You totally lose point here. 1 VS 3 years and game for adults dont have actual sex and content what it have is equal to my highschool days, add here bad writing, undecisive mc (in adult fucking game with setting where he should be assertive and decisive by default) who in compare to IRL experience doesnt make a shit of needed efforts to win his brothers wife and by getting it all together I hope you will get my point. One more time, its a game, fiction, fantasy, fairytale created by author and for 3 years when some devs can fully accomplish their game, this one doesnt even have a proper lewd start with fmc, about whom this game was made for.
3 years of development doesn't mean 3 years ingame time ... game is a slow burn ... if you don't like it there are thousands more games on this site where you can bang anything within the first 5 minutes
 
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3 years of development doesn't mean 3 years ingame time ... game is a slow burn ... if you don't like it there are thousands more games on this site where you can bang anything within the first 5 minutes
The issue is the slow development of the MC's conquest, given the time of the story within the script, the MC should have already fucked Jennifer! DEV created a terrible conqueror of married women! :D
 
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3 years of development doesn't mean 3 years ingame time ... game is a slow burn ... if you don't like it there are thousands more games on this site where you can bang anything within the first 5 minutes
3 Years of development its 3 YEARS of development, lol) I wasnt even once writed that in game passed 3 years (I played game), only about the fact that game writed so poorly that for 3 years of development MC didnt get his dick wet even once. Its not a slow burn, its badly writen and very slowly made game, if dev didn't have enough time to work on the game or hardware to make renders quickier, then why did he put a lot of side unnecessary for main story charachters in game and scenes/events which have nothing in common with seducing and winning over the wife? Its rhetoric question.

And about your suggestion to leave thread, dude relax) I perfectly know where to look for games what I like without your suggestions. I writed my critique about game, nothing more, nothing less. Calling this game slowburn is insult to term slowburn itself. 3 years of development and I didnt saw chemistry between chars, actual progression, real advances, content and atleast small realism in this pile of text which pretends to be well writen slowburn.
 
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3 Years of development its 3 YEARS of development, lol) I wasnt even once writed that in game passed 3 years (I played game), only about the fact that game writed so poorly that for 3 years of development MC didnt get his dick wet even once.
It's obvious from the premise, it's a slow burn game. So given the frequency at which the game is released, it's a foregone conclusion that getting to the prize is going to awhile. One may consider this pacing as bad writing but I attribute the pacing to those two factors previously mentioned.

I accept the game speed and am enjoying the trajectory and tension of the story. The characters are likeable and they are evolving naturally without the false push of any porn story logic.
 
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It's obvious from the premise, it's a slow burn game.
As i Writed "Calling this game slowburn is insult to term slowburn itself."
One may consider this pacing as bad writing but I attribute the pacing to those two factors previously mentioned.
Not only because of pacing writing is bad but because of writing itself, no pun intended)
The characters are likeable and they are evolving naturally without the false push of any porn story logic.
No offence but what I saw here not even close resembles as likeable chars (especially bff) and natural story. Its same porn story logic but with pile of text and without fucking :KEK:
 
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You totally lose point here. 1 VS 3 years and game for adults
In-game time vs real time? Wow, you really lost me there and you're saying I lose points? Sheesh.
The dev produces content awfully slowly. I won't give him a single dollar until the game is complete. At this pace, it's going to take 50 years to complete or more and even if I paid just one buck per month, the total would still amount to 600 dollars for a game that's mediocre at best.

dont have actual sex and content what it have is equal to my highschool days, add here bad writing, undecisive mc (in adult fucking game with setting where he should be assertive and decisive by default)
Only if his stated goal is to win his sister-in-law and it only works for somebody who's not awkward. Neither of these describe the protagonist.

who in compare to IRL experience doesnt make a shit of needed efforts to win his brothers wife and by getting it all together I hope you will get my point.
I get your point. But when you see somebody married (let alone your friend or your family member) and your first thought is "I gotta steal her from him" and you take actions towards that goal, you have some serious problems.
Even with your friend, I doubt that he set out to win over his friend's wife as soon as he laid his eyes on her, but it developed over time.

One more time, its a game, fiction, fantasy, fairytale created by author and for 3 years when some devs can fully accomplish their game, this one doesnt even have a proper lewd start with fmc, about whom this game was made for.
Commercial VN makers release several games per year. Those games are well-written, have good graphics, original music and are thoroughly tested. And yet they retail for $10-$30 and are sometimes discounted to half the original price or less.

Patronage is an untenable model for funding game development and it's going to result in something similar to the video game crash of 1983. The few notable exceptions are just that — exceptions.
 

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As i Writed "Calling this game slowburn is insult to term slowburn itself."

Not only because of pacing writing is bad but because of writing itself, no pun intended)

No offence but what I saw here not even close resembles as likeable chars (especially bff) and natural story. Its same porn story logic but with pile of text and without fucking :KEK:
Dude, there are plenty of games where fucking happens immediately. That seems more of your type of game. This was always going to be a slow burn game and anyone could determine that from the 1st few updates. So you should find more of those games to your liking. I have no problem with the pace of this game and its the type of game I like.
Project Marian is one you should check out.
 

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Hello everyone, version 0.10 has just entered its final phase:
-90% of the writing is complete and half has already been translated.
- All images have been cleaned up.
- Half the animations have been edited.

So given all that, I can finally give you a release date. Version 0.10 will be available for elite patreons around February 20. For other third parties, I'll release a detailed release schedule at that time.
As you can see, this will be the big update so far. In fact, it reaches almost 700 frames and will also have the most animation.

See you in ten days' time for the release of 0.10.
 

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Literally 2 posts before there's an update posted.
literally, read that "2 posts before" before providing your bot-answer.

per planned schedule (kindly provided in above,mentioned post) the update for the highest tier should be today.
will it actually be, or not, remains to be seen.
 
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literally, read that "2 posts before" before providing your bot-answer.

per planned schedule (kindly provided in above,mentioned post) the update for the highest tier should be today.
will it actually be, or not, remains to be seen.
I meant update(dev log) about the game *sigh*
you do know that update has different meanings right?
 
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