Pops and I really appreciate it. Thank you so much.View attachment 1002594
*use this money to buy something healthy....
dont need mention it, like i sayed i probably will be still jerkPops and I really appreciate it. Thank you so much.
which kills like what? 33% of the main/first premise of the game, which is having a relationship with the MC's bullies(although calling them bullies is a strong word based on the spoilers...i'm still doing part 1 all over again and i don't know the complete truth yet)there needs to be an alternate where you dont have to help ain
It's the point of the game......there needs to be an alternate where you dont have to help ain
That's not a redemption(and it doesn't redeem her), that's a reason(and not even one that excuses her)...and if you read enough books, you should know that people can have tragic backstories and still not be douchebags...from the top of my head I can call out: Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Seraphine and Claire(from a Korean comic, I like to read), Joey Wheeler (who has abusive alcoholic father that beaten him on a daily basis).Aine will have a tragic story that redeems herYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Precisely. Aine being abused by her mom isn't the thing that will redeem her here. There's more coming.That's not a redemption(and it doesn't redeem her), that's a reason(and not even one that excuses her)...and if you read enough books, you should know that people can have tragic backstories and still not be douchebags...from the top of my head I can call out: Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Seraphine and Claire(from a Korean comic, I like to read), Joey Wheeler (who has abusive alcoholic father that beaten him on a daily basis).
A redemption is when you're a bad guy then after some particular event(like having a taste of your own medicine or something mindblowing) you understand your mistakes, you genuinely feel sorry, you apologize to your victims and try your very best to be a nice person no matter how miserable your life will ever be even if said victims will never forgive you, because now you know and understand the horrible things you did, and you refuse to do them ever again.
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I think you'll find that the coming story will have all of this. She's already a better person and she's "suffered" for it by giving up the security of her family. We've been told she was terrible as a facade, one she dropped when she was able to get some freedom from her family. Once she knows that MC is the person she tormented, I'm 100% positive she'll apologize.That's not a redemption(and it doesn't redeem her), that's a reason(and not even one that excuses her)...and if you read enough books, you should know that people can have tragic backstories and still not be douchebags...from the top of my head I can call out: Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Seraphine and Claire(from a Korean comic, I like to read), Joey Wheeler (who has abusive alcoholic father that beaten him on a daily basis).
A redemption is when you're a bad guy then after some particular event(like having a taste of your own medicine or something mindblowing) you understand your mistakes, you genuinely feel sorry, you apologize to your victims and try your very best to be a nice person no matter how miserable your life will ever be even if said victims will never forgive you, because now you know and understand the horrible things you did, and you refuse to do them ever again.
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Gwen was the one to ride Piggy's hog for the first time and she's obviously still not over it.
you used a poor choice of word...i can't predict what will happen next, we can guess, and NiiChan can tell us...but maybe i'm not there yet...but i don't think she needed to act like a jerk...unless she was monitored by enemies...but that sounds cheap...and would feel like forcing MC into forgiveness bc "she had no choice, she was monitored 24/7 by evil people" but they're(So far Emma, i'm going VERY SLOW in part 2) also not giving choice to MCI think you'll find that the coming story will have all of this. She's already a better person, and she's "suffered" for it by giving up the security of her family. We've been told she was terrible as a facade, one she dropped when she was able to get some freedom from her family. Once she knows that MC is the person she tormented, I'm 100% positive she'll apologize.
It's all there...we just have to wait for the story to reveal it.
None. I only aim it to be a light hearted game.Is there going to be any FEMDOM with the ex-bullies?
Because that is not my kink and if it included any kind of thing like that with his ex bullies on top of it, i would just drop it instantly.
Do you really think I would put this much thought and effort into critiquing something I didn't like?You must really like the game, huh?
Is what I thought.Do you really think I would put this much thought and effort into critiquing something I didn't like?