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I am really liking Moon aswell, I love how layered her character personality isJust finished the latest update and Moon has become my favorite. Story is a lot of layers so far and I'm enjoying it. Looking forward to more updates.
red hair..... school uniform.... stockings.... skirt..... sleeveless shirtSooooo who is the spooky lady
Likely Lily (though that isn't her usual school uniform). But could be Klara in a flashback from her college days as well.red hair..... school uniform.... stockings.... skirt..... sleeveless shirt
guess who
We gotta bring Lily into the fold at some point so probably her.Likely Lily (though that isn't her usual school uniform). But could be Klara in a flashback from her college days as well.
A king must know who the most beautiful woman in his kingdom is even if he must serve the others.View attachment 2477758
Hey, guys! I'm back for a short discussion.
To start things off, we will change the Episode/Update title.
Something didn't work out how I wanted it to, so I chose my second option. And honestly, it is way better, and I'm delighted with the results. I can't spoil it for you now, but it doesn't affect the story, so don't worry.
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Now, onto the numbers:
Line of raw dialogues: 1380
Renders: 0
Animations: 0
Audio & SFX: 0
I'm putting all my attention on writing at the moment, and it is moving faster than usual. Our goal for this update's raw dialogue lines is 4000 more or less. If this keeps up, we'll reach that goal in no time.
I will finish one major event of a particular character, then render the update's first half. So, our next post will likely be a preview.
The second half focuses entirely on Gwen alone, and her Second Arc will prove why she's the best girl(not a biased developer at all).
And that will be all for this post.
I'll see you at the next one!
- NiiChan out
Yes! Cant wait for this. Gwen just hits differently for meView attachment 2477758
Hey, guys! I'm back for a short discussion.
To start things off, we will change the Episode/Update title.
Something didn't work out how I wanted it to, so I chose my second option. And honestly, it is way better, and I'm delighted with the results. I can't spoil it for you now, but it doesn't affect the story, so don't worry.
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Now, onto the numbers:
Line of raw dialogues: 1380
Renders: 0
Animations: 0
Audio & SFX: 0
I'm putting all my attention on writing at the moment, and it is moving faster than usual. Our goal for this update's raw dialogue lines is 4000 more or less. If this keeps up, we'll reach that goal in no time.
I will finish one major event of a particular character, then render the update's first half. So, our next post will likely be a preview.
The second half focuses entirely on Gwen alone, and her Second Arc will prove why she's the best girl(not a biased developer at all).
And that will be all for this post.
I'll see you at the next one!
- NiiChan out
I bet the mc will get to hit Gwen differently too heheYes! Cant wait for this. Gwen just hits differently for me
oh for sure bruda for sureI bet the mc will get to hit Gwen differently too hehe
Emma's solo ending comes about because MC basically says to Emma: Fuck the plot, let's elope!Wait, wtf? Why 'Emma Solo Ending'? I can understand if we weren't treating the first 7 chapters as a 'Prologue', but if they were meant as a prologue, having an ending at the very first chapter feels very, very weird. Even counting the first 7 chapters, one is essentially a backstory chapter, so this feels very sudden.
Wait, wtf? Why 'Emma Solo Ending'? I can understand if we weren't treating the first 7 chapters as a 'Prologue', but if they were meant as a prologue, having an ending at the very first chapter feels very, very weird. Even counting the first 7 chapters, one is essentially a backstory chapter, so this feels very sudden.
It would be very and i mean VERY difficult down the line for MC to say "fuck all of you imma go be with emma"Emma's solo ending comes about because MC basically says to Emma: Fuck the plot, let's elope!
Although I can agree that it is somewhat sudden. It is not necessary for MC to fulfill his promise to Emma at the first possible opportunity after all. On the other hand, things will get complicated if we continue with the plot, so there may not be further opportunities.
That's true; it'd probably make it necessary to make a "route" where the MC does not romance the other girls (particularly Aine of course), but he does what he needs to do/would do in a romance route because it is "correct/morally good", which is something I could see the MC doing but I can understand if writing it all would feel too boring only to get the Emma end anyway. I think I can understand it from a developer/writing point of view, but it does feel sudden to me as a reader.It would be very and i mean VERY difficult down the line for MC to say "fuck all of you imma go be with emma"