The story is good. Prologue episode 5 was hit me right in the feels. That's why I think the first sex scene with Emma should not have been dealt with differently. When someone is reunited with their childhood love who is their first love of their life, I don't think they'd jump on them the first chance they get. They should have hugged, cried, kissed, etc. The person you've been missing your entire life is in front of you, and you're done with other problems, you might first take the time to appreciate the fact that you're united. The sex should have been more organic, with both of them getting there naturally.
The writing is so bad, it hurts. I get it that English is not their first language or even second or third, but they have a good story and they're not doing justice to it.
The writing is so bad, it hurts. I get it that English is not their first language or even second or third, but they have a good story and they're not doing justice to it.