get immediately rid of those bad loading screens/transistions! get rid of the score mechanic and that the mc tries to get the affection of the fmc. maybe only via a couple of choices (which will happen without transistion) and to be completely honest: add a ton more ntr scenes with the older guy making out with the hot female and banging the sh*t out of her. that should really be the focus of the game and not affection score system.
other smaller things: don't start with "thats my new boyfriend" and maybe "thats our new neighbour who i got to know during you were at school" or "thats my collegue from work and he asked me out for a date and i said why not" and from there the story goes on. also its a bit weird to have ntr with a "mom/son dynamic". but thats maybe dibatable from an adult game standpoint. maybe its his stepmom and she is single now or left mc's dad with mc.
also remove change the "happy afternoon-channel music" to something more relaxing, subtle and sensual.
let the mc go to school and then there is a transistion where female and old guy are fucking. or make him watch through the door how they fuck at night cause he heard some moaning.
i wrote much now and i hope the feedback helpes. the game would have so much potential and would be much more well recieved - especially as an ntr game with a really damn great female model.
its a shame to give it so low stars cause again: the renders are great, the woman is amazing and i even like the addition of a nasty old man. i would support this and give it a much higher rating would be all the rest different or better.