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Fzoner95

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Is there a missing page, because it feels like something's missing between 25, 26, 27
Because 25 she's talking about kissing it, then it immediately jumps to 26 about sucking it. Even though sucking was not bought up.
No, I think this is the right pace. She is told to kiss it, refuses but then agrees immediately after some talk. And she starts sucking because her head is pushed down and, following the porn logic, that means she has to open her mouth and then continue sucking.
 

Anon4321

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No, I think this is the right pace. She is told to kiss it, refuses but then agrees immediately after some talk. And she starts sucking because her head is pushed down and, following the porn logic, that means she has to open her mouth and then continue sucking.
It still feels off to me, like Ayanna would have have said something, "Maybe after kissing it, you could take it one step further" and that's when the mother jumps up saying " I can't suck my Son's...."
 
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It still feels of to, like Ayanna would have have said something, "Maybe after kissing it, you could take it one step further" and that's when the mother jumps up saying " I can't suck my Son's...."
This goes back to a comment I made here or another thread. I think they just have so many scenes rendered and work around them. It is why so many of these have strange pacing or always seem to skip the middle and go from a slow buildup to 100 mph. More often than not it feels like something is missing or some scene happened off the pages. It is especially weird when you consider some games have a ton more renders a month.
 

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I like how the story go on this one. Do any one know any story or game with a good build-up like this one?
 

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Does someone know when next update will be?
it's all to see


I think we will have a new set images soon, knowing that he posted preview with no text for this comic.

The issue is he is busy with 3 Comics atm.

2 of wich i love :D

We had The Scandalous Proposal updated on the 30th of June
We had Timmy Strikes back updated on 26th of June (I like this one)


I think we MIGHT get a update this weekend
 
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