VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.18.2 P2 Ch.6] [Trope95]

[SetoKaiba-bestduelistever]

Thanks for the tip. I'll change it for the next update


Scarlett and Daphne aren't lesbians. They only practice kissing. There isn't any lesbian scene yet.
If you don't teach them you'll miss the threesomes with them, but you can open their individual paths later.
You can block lesbian content at the end of Day 6 with a choice that will prevent any kind of interaction between girls

Thanks, guess I was just panicking for nothing.

 

[Trope95]

I'm playing the game for the first time. The first movie you have them watch "Spanking the monkey". I almost fell out of my chair. !!!!

Based off a real movie, the original directed by David O. Russell, one of his early films.

Yes, it's 'Spanking the monkey', a movie that goes well with the motive of the game. Recommended by Norah to Martha... Norah has a weird taste for movies.
The second movie they watch is a generic romcom
The one Martha and Norah go to the cinema to watch is 'Tadpole'. Once again, Norah's taste shows
And the one on the last night is, obviously, "Hotel Transylvania"

Why invent a film when there are films that do the job?

 

[Charlie78]

Hi!

Can someone make a wt-mod, please!?

 

[EJW]

New version, new players with the same concerns as those who have already played it. I consider it logical. I don't share the worries but I understand them.
There really are things that surprise me, like all the trouble there seems to be when two girls who ARE NOT LESBIANS kiss each other for practice.
I guess growing up with 80's porn, where you didn't know what scenes were going to appear on the VHS you rented, made me consider mainstream things that today, with porn on demand and 40 filters on PornHub, are no longer considered vanilla.
Don't worry, My Dorm will continue to be true to itself and those kinds of comments won't change what's planned.

A lot of the problems is that a lot of "harem" games has the women turn bi out nowhere. Then game goes to a poly not harem game. There are not many pure "harem" games on the sight. It does get boring when most of them go the same way all the time.

 

[merlin7560]

Ive found an error in this update


```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While processing text tag {/i} in u"Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}.".:
File "game/script.rpy", line 63, in script call
call c05Llam from _call_c05Llam
File "game/script.rpy", line 86, in script call
call c05_EN from _call_c05_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 13, in script call
call c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN from _call_c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 2570, in script
eri "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}."
Exception: u'/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 63, in script call
call c05Llam from _call_c05Llam
File "game/script.rpy", line 86, in script call
call c05_EN from _call_c05_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 13, in script call
call c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN from _call_c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 2570, in script
eri "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}."
File "renpy/ast.py", line 721, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1419, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/character.py", line 1249, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 901, in do_display
**display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 647, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 688, in render
child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1264, in render
st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 2096, in render
virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 610, in __init__
self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 1039, in segment
raise Exception("%r closes a text tag that isn't open." % text)
Exception: u'/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
My Dorm v0.5.0
Tue Sep 20 23:16:38 2022
```

 

[Trope95]

Wow. How fast this game went downhill. The concept of family or forbidden relationships are just in the name only. Its been 2-3 days sinch he came back home and already talking about and actually bedding his own blood. This game would make more sense without the incest tag actually.

Perhaps these lines shed light on MC's mindset about 'taboo' relationships (this happens on Day 2)

Remember that some relationships that were taboo for our grandparents, in today's society are considered acceptable or totally normal (interracial, same-sex, age gap, etc.).

He only cares if he loves the individual girl. He doesn't care about her age or if she's family as long as he loves her.
He also doesn't give a fuck about her race, religion, or origin.
For him is easy: If he loves some woman, he wants to make that woman happy. If he thinks he can't make her happy, he will take a step aside.

 

[Majindevil]

A lot of the problems is that a lot of "harem" games has the women turn bi out nowhere. Then game goes to a poly not harem game. There are not many pure "harem" games on the sight. It does get boring when most of them go the same way all the time.

i think that is absolute right and why so much people are fed up with mandatory lesbian scenes in VN´s its just so overused...
the same with incenst games and dead fathers...
but nothing beats the YOGA!!! i hope to see the day i play a game the mandatory yoga scene starts and the mc just starts to scream and run away

 

[Trope95]

Ive found an error in this update


```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While processing text tag {/i} in u"Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}.".:
File "game/script.rpy", line 63, in script call
call c05Llam from _call_c05Llam
File "game/script.rpy", line 86, in script call
call c05_EN from _call_c05_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 13, in script call
call c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN from _call_c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 2570, in script
eri "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}."
Exception: u'/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 63, in script call
call c05Llam from _call_c05Llam
File "game/script.rpy", line 86, in script call
call c05_EN from _call_c05_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 13, in script call
call c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN from _call_c05s011_TalkMarthaErika_EN
File "game/C05EN.rpy", line 2570, in script
eri "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}."
File "renpy/ast.py", line 721, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1419, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/character.py", line 1249, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 901, in do_display
**display_args)
File "renpy/character.py", line 647, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
renpy.config.screen_height,
File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 688, in render
child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1264, in render
st, at)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 2096, in render
virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 610, in __init__
self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
File "renpy/text/text.py", line 1039, in segment
raise Exception("%r closes a text tag that isn't open." % text)
Exception: u'/i' closes a text tag that isn't open.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
My Dorm v0.5.0
Tue Sep 20 23:16:38 2022
```

There is a slash that shouldn't be there in the first {/i} "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}.". It should be "Y-yes, he's older {i}(and my cousin){/i}."
You can edit line 2570 of C05EN.rpy to remove that / or overwrite it with the one attached.
Sorry about that

 

[Trope95]

Hi!

Can someone make a wt-mod, please!?

There's a walkthrough implemented in the game. You can activate it at the start of the playthrough and it kicks only if the choice has consequences. First instance on the first movie night with Martha

 

[Horny Toad]

Yes, it's 'Spanking the monkey', a movie that goes well with the motive of the game. Recommended by Norah to Martha... Norah has a weird taste for movies.
The second movie they watch is a generic romcom
The one Martha and Norah go to the cinema to watch is 'Tadpole'. Once again, Norah's taste shows
And the one on the last night is, obviously, "Hotel Transylvania"

Why invent a film when there are films that do the job?

I've watched that too, with "Ripley" and "Lilith" (and "Jack Tripper" apparently). Holy shit that movie is 20 years old.
Speaking of Spank the Monkey, I remember first hearing about it because the actor appeared on a talk show (either it was Conan or David) and the clip was him talking about shoes.

Though I'm playing this game without any patch, I have no interest in sex with blood relations, even if it's fictional. Guess I'm a clone lover.

 

[merlin7560]

There is a slash that shouldn't be there in the first {/i} "Y-yes, he's older {/i}(and my cousin){/i}.". It should be "Y-yes, he's older {i}(and my cousin){/i}."
You can edit line 2570 of C05EN.rpy to remove that / or overwrite it with the one attached.
Sorry about that

thank you for the fix, Ive save attached file and Im gonna head back into the game to see what I mist

 

[Trope95]

A lot of the problems is that a lot of "harem" games has the women turn bi out nowhere. Then game goes to a poly not harem game. There are not many pure "harem" games on the sight. It does get boring when most of them go the same way all the time.

i think that is absolute right and why so much people are fed up with mandatory lesbian scenes in VN´s its just so overused...
the same with incenst games and dead fathers...
but nothing beats the YOGA!!! i hope to see the day i play a game the mandatory yoga scene starts and the mc just starts to scream and run away

As said previously, My Dorm won't follow that route. It won't become a polyamorous relationship and there won't be any girl-on-girl action without the MC there. Some characters can be bi at the start of their story (NOT SCARLETT OR DAPHNE), or some characters can become bi-curious in some circumstances, but you won't see a Norah-Erika scene (for example) in Norah's room (as hot as it could be).
You could see, when the harem is established, a repeat of the 'Erika catches Norah with MC' scene with Erika joining (I'm not confirming or denying anything here). You won't see an 'MC catches Erika with Norah' scene and joining.

About yoga, I didn't know it was overused. I thought it as a way to turn the heat on for Norah and finally make her take a decision.

 

[EJW]

As said previously, My Dorm won't follow that route. It won't become a polyamorous relationship and there won't be any girl-on-girl action without the MC there. Some characters can be bi at the start of their story (NOT SCARLETT OR DAPHNE), or some characters can become bi-curious in some circumstances, but you won't see a Norah-Erika scene (for example) in Norah's room (as hot as it could be).
You could see, when the harem is established, a repeat of the 'Erika catches Norah with MC' scene with Erika joining (I'm not confirming or denying anything here). You won't see an 'MC catches Erika with Norah' scene and joining.

About yoga, I didn't know it was overused. I thought it as a way to turn the heat on for Norah and finally make her take a decision.

I hope I did not offend you. I was just saying that is how some people see it. Like I said I just started. There is a lot of fetishes I don't like on this sight. I get tired of the poly thing too, but you said before how you were doing things and that sounds good to me. Besides you should make the game you want. If you don't you will get mad or burnt out.

 

[Trope95]

I've watched that too, with "Ripley" and "Lilith" (and "Jack Tripper" apparently). Holy shit that movie is 20 years old.
Speaking of Spank the Monkey, I remember first hearing about it because the actor appeared on a talk show (either it was Conan or David) and the clip was him talking about shoes.

Though I'm playing this game without any patch, I have no interest in sex with blood relations, even if it's fictional. Guess I'm a clone lover.

I'm old as fuck, and I've seen very old movies!
I watched Tadpole and Spanking the Monkey an age ago on a weekend-long special about 'forbidden relationships' on a Spanish TV channel. There were some incestuous films like those two, and some about relationships that were 'taboo' in the timeframe of the movie (same-sex, interracial, cucking, etc.). A very informative weekend!

If you are playing the game without the patch, then you will be on the clone line, so no blood relations (I call this the Patreon-friendly version). There are differences in the dialogue between the two versions (not a lot right now). On 0.6 you'll read a conversation not available in the patched version (the players who play patched will read a shorter conversation) that will bring insight into one of the characters' personality.

 

[Trope95]

I hope I did not offend you. I was just saying that is how some people see it. Like I said I just started. There is a lot of fetishes I don't like on this sight. I get tired of the poly thing too, but you said before how you were doing things and that sounds good to me. Besides you should make the game you want. If you don't you will get mad or burnt out.

No offense taken, don't worry. I share your views on poly not being harem.
With every update there are new players, and I don't hope for them to read through the 48 pages, so I sometimes use an answer to a topic to remind the players (not necessarily the ones I'm replying to) about things already talked about in the thread.
The different fetishes are specific to each player and no one should have any say in them. It is for that reason that everything I don't consider vanilla will be optional. The problem is that what I consider vanilla may be different from what another player considers vanilla.

 

[Trope95]

On another site, someone asked me about the harem state at the end of this update, so I copy my answer here, in case anyone is thinking about it (this situation is with every girl unlocked at the first chance, obviously):

Right now:
Eileen accepts the MC is with other girls, but only knows about Erika
Erika hasn't accepted anything and only knows about Norah and Eileen
Norah has greenlighted the MC to be with other girls but doesn't know about any of them
Emma is in the same situation as Norah, but accepted reluctantly
Daphne knows about Scarlett, but not the other way around
Simone hasn't accepted anything and isn't in a relationship with the MC. Wednesday lunch will advance the situation.
Samantha and Scarlett don't know about any other girl

 

[Trope95]

Ah, the bitching about two girls kissing, again...tell me some more news.
Write and deliver the story YOU want to make.

Until now you've done pretty well damn good!

I answer you once again to this post because this has happened once again.
People bitch about anything. This time it's not in the thread but in the reviews section, so I can't reply there and I use your post answer as a place to vent my frustration with some reviews. I don't care if he downgrades his review after this answer.
Sorry in advance WICKEDp4th for using your post as an excuse for this rant.

Kond writes:
4- Daphne and Scarlett (pink bikini and blonde/blue bikini):
Cousin and her friend. At one point they practice kissing with each other in front of MC, im not fond of lesbian content and this made me lose interest in both of them, lesbian is a HUGE turn off for me. Later on dev gives the player the chance to turn off interactions between girls, but it was too late as they were already ruined for me. So NO and NO.

The concept of ruined girls ABOUT A PRACTICE KISS in this community is big.
I will repeat ad nauseam that Daphne and Scarlett ARE NOT LESBIANS.

Just as I will repeat that if for a player a girl is ruined because she fucked WHILE NOT IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH MC, I expect that player to be consistent and not initiate any routes with any of the mothers (SPOILER: the normal way to have a child is to fuck with your partner.)
Because Kond continues:
1- Eileen (purple one piece bikini on game's banner): MC's ex-girlfriend, while talking to him she suggests a "non-exclusive" relationship, if MC agrees she says that she dated and fucked several guys since they broke up, and that none of them "fulfilled" her like him. MC has a big dick, so...i think its easy to undertand what she meant, what she is and why she is a BIG NO.
As I say, I only hope he doesn't start a relationship with any of the game mothers, because all of them have fucked someone while not in a relationship with MC.

Well, Kond next point summarizes that it's not a problem with the game, but with his concept of ruined girls or his understanding of my English (coming from someone with some grammatical and spelling errors in his review).
2- Erika (Black bikini, far right): MC's sister (if I.Patch enabled). First problem: She has a boyfriend.
Second problem: She only ends their relationship after MC proves that he is cheating on her... this implies that if he was a good guy she would not and we can safely stretch and say MC is the second option. Third problem: For me, it was clear that she wanted to lose her virgnity with BF but was insecure. Her having a BF only works if she decided by herself end their relationship because she likes MC better and wants to pursue a relationship with him. But the way it is, a NO for me.
1.- Erika is MC's cousin, not his sister
2.- Erika has a boyfriend. She dates Jack BECAUSE he is the closest thing to MC. She says she has always compared her boyfriends to MC. That should give the idea that he IS the first choice, but he's an option 2,000 km away, in college, and he's also her cousin, making him an unavailable option.
3.- She's afraid to lose her virginity, for fuck's sake! What game are you playing? She's been dumped previously for NOT wanting to lose it.

And he continues with the hardest-to-understand sentence I've read in some time:
*This game has a weird characteristc, its slow burn and fast paced at the same time...hard to explain.
My Dorm should be like a Zulu with vitiligo, no offense intended against Zulu people or people with vitiligo. Black and white at the same time?

I know everyone is entitled to his opinions, and I can understand his other points, and even share some of them, but that review has frustrated me.

 

[hysepReC]

I think the incest patch isn't working for me in this update

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[Trope95]

I think the incest patch isn't working for me in this update

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Have you reapplied it after the update? No one has commented on it

 

[hysepReC]

Have you reapplied it after the update? No one has commented on it

Yes, mate. I've tried reapplying the patch multiple times and it still doesn't work. When i first loaded up my save in the new update it was without the patch because i forgot about it, could this have caused it? It was never an issue for me before now.