VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.20.1 S2 Ch.8] [Tropecita Games]

[johnpouljones]

Special Render (XVII) - Scarlett

I'll start this Special Render during the subscriber cycle with Scarlett. Lacking previews (or not wanting to publish them to avoid spoilers until every tier has access to the update) gives me the chance to get more "artistic" with these individual renders.
I always loved Scarlett, but this render, playing with lights and shadows, gives her a mystery aura I like a lot.
My idea with this one was to have her thinking about the DNA test. And waiting for the MC to get back with the result.
Full HD/4K render exclusive for subscribers.
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I really like your special renders. Sometimes, however, something about them offends me. I am a graphic designer and the distorted anatomical proportions immediately catch my attention. Here they are the legs. From the proportions it looks like this:

My suggestion is to swap the legs. Right knee closer to the chest.

 

[Trope95]

I really like your special renders. Sometimes, however, something about them offends me. I am a graphic designer and the distorted anatomical proportions immediately catch my attention. Here they are the legs. From the proportions it looks like this:
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My suggestion is to swap the legs. Right knee closer to the chest.

I love this kind of constructive criticism! But in this case, I think it's a visual effect produced by the deep shadows.
A change of angle (not rendered because the softlight spotlight is just above her feet and obscured them) shows there isn't any distortion in the proportions. Her right foot isn't in the position your lines show

 

[johnpouljones]

I love this kind of constructive criticism! But in this case, I think it's a visual effect produced by the deep shadows.
A change of angle (not rendered because the softlight spotlight is just above her feet and obscured them) shows there isn't any distortion in the proportions. Her right foot isn't in the position your lines show
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From this perspective it appears that you are right. Unfortunately, it's usually the visual effect that counts. And this one is confusing. Shadows may come into play, but also the hidden curve of the chaise longue. It turns out that there is more space there than visible.
And many thanks for the additional render.

 

[divingmedic]

From this perspective it appears that you are right. Unfortunately, it's usually the visual effect that counts. And this one is confusing. Shadows may come into play, but also the hidden curve of the chaise longue. It turns out that there is more space there than visible.
And many thanks for the additional render.

My only critique of it is that Scarlett has way too much clothing on

 

[johnpouljones]

My only critique of it is that Scarlett has way too much clothing on

You're probably right. But you can never have enough of Scarlett. Especially in such a romantic approach.

 

[thundersamaz]

Meemaw in cow cosplay when

 

[txe320]

Meemaw in cow cosplay when

Looks like you don't want a Meemaw but a Moomaw.

 

[Uthuriel]

Looks like you don't want a Meemaw but a Moomaw.

 

[SlowGoesSlow]

Looks like you don't want a Meemaw but a Moomaw.

 

[snakeplisskin]

I wrote kanji because "Unknown Asian language character" was too long


Ordered by the number of dialogue lines:
Maddie*+, Megan*+, Amanda*, Betty*, Eileen*, Kiara*, Daphne*, Meemaw*(+), Norah(*), Alexia*, Eva, Kim*, Erika, Lisa*, Martha, Debbie*, Scarlett*, Emma, Kate*, Saira

The ones with an * have some story progression. The ones with a + have lewd scenes. I won't spoil why Meemaw's + and Norah's * are between parenthesis.

Oh goodness didnt know we were getting aome progress with Lisa. Extra excited now.

 

[sagerock820]

They all do eventually. It's just Trop has quite a few women to work into the story. Everyone will get their day in the sun.

 

[JayDub47]

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.
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I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

Both plagues plaques happen to be mirrored unfortunately, did a translate with my app, using the handwriting feature, and they translate to "art" and "sculpture", so they're pretty apt for Scarlett, if not any all of the ladies

 

[Trope95]

 

[Elhemeer]

Both plagues happen to be mirrored unfortunately, did a translate with my app, using the handwriting feature, and they translate to "art" and "sculpture", so they're pretty apt for Scarlett, if not any all of the ladies

Please explain to me what you mean by mirrored. Do you mean they are flipped? Horizontally like a flipped manga? Vertically? 'Cause it sounds like you're saying they're mirrors of each other, to which I see four distinct groupings of artistic lines (yea, I can't read a lick of kanji).

 

[HornyyPussy]

Please explain to me what you mean by mirrored. Do you mean they are flipped? Horizontally like a flipped manga? Vertically? 'Cause it sounds like you're saying they're mirrors of each other, to which I see four distinct groupings of artistic lines (yea, I can't read a lick of kanji).

Think he means that you see them through a mirror so they are flipped horizontally.

 

[JayDub47]

Please explain to me what you mean by mirrored. Do you mean they are flipped? Horizontally like a flipped manga? Vertically? 'Cause it sounds like you're saying they're mirrors of each other, to which I see four distinct groupings of artistic lines (yea, I can't read a lick of kanji).

What I mean that is that each plaque is backwards, with which is probably why the second (right) one couldn't be translated easily

 

[Deleted member 2572880]

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.
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I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

I'm definitely being sincere, as I've seen some games cobbled together with kanji but with no real meaning.
As I said at the beginning, I don't know where this is. These two words are still mirror images. For example, if they are attached to the outside of a glass door or window, they will look like this when you look inside.
彫刻 means engraving ,美術 means Art.
I don’t know if these two words are suitable for this venue. It would be a bit strange if it wasn't a craft workshop. If it is used as a decoration, there should be other options.

 

[MrSancini]

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FINALLY...

I can wait for the public release

 

[Trope95]

I'm definitely being sincere, as I've seen some games cobbled together with kanji but with no real meaning.
As I said at the beginning, I don't know where this is. These two words are still mirror images. For example, if they are attached to the outside of a glass door or window, they will look like this when you look inside.
彫刻 means engraving ,美術 means Art.
I don’t know if these two words are suitable for this venue. It would be a bit strange if it wasn't a craft workshop. If it is used as a decoration, there should be other options.

They are just used as decoration. I use assets I bought, and will never use in the game, for those special renders. In this case, the asset is an apartment called

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which has a lot of Asian-inspired decorations. Since I don't know anything besides "good morning", "thank you", and some loose words in any language which uses pictograms, I used the plaques as decorations for that shot, without knowing they were mirrored.

 

[ThorinKing]

彫刻 means engraving ,美術 means Art.
I don’t know if these two words are suitable for this venue. It would be a bit strange if it wasn't a craft workshop. If it is used as a decoration, there should be other options.

That would probably be the joke by the creator of the asset: "What's that hanging on your wall? Oh - just artful engravings."

Would be kind of like going to a tatoo artist and telling him "give me a really kool Kanji tattoo" and he tatoos the Kanji for "tatoo". Unless, of course, you're a real dick about it, and he tatoo's the Kanji for "asshole".