- Nov 2, 2017
- 1,227
- 1,644
I do find them ... very expressive.I love the use of facial expressions for the girls in this vn. It adds so much to the conversations.
Too much at times, it is like watching a pantomime performance occasionally.
- Thread starter 7767
- Start date
-
- Tags
- 3dcg ahegao anal sex animated big ass big tits corruption creampie dating sim exhibitionism female domination graphic violence groping group sex handjob harem humor interracial lesbian male domination male protagonist masturbation milf mobile game multiple endings oral sex pregnancy romance sex toys teasing titfuck urination vaginal sex virgin voiced voyeurism
Too much at times, it is like watching a pantomime performance occasionally.
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
I love the use of facial expressions for the girls in this vn. It adds so much to the conversations.
I only can say that this is an example of different tastes over the same issue.
- Apr 19, 2020
- 420
- 497
So uhh its my first time playing and umm I
confusion intensefies
PS. No need to clarify just yeah didn't see that coming
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
PS. No need to clarify just yeah didn't see that coming
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
As Brannon says, there are factions moving in the dark with their own agenda, unbeknownst to the characters.
That was my intention when I started writing the story: it would seem like just the story of a lucky guy creating his harem, but there would be more going on in the world without him knowing about it.
Considering he's not the smartest guy and he has less data than you guys, it has to be even more of a surprise to him than it will be to the players when it all comes out. At least you guys know there's more to it.
- Nov 2, 2017
- 1,227
- 1,644
To be fair it is .. unlikely a plot twist in a story can fully surprise me.
Unless it completely comes out of left park and has had not the slightest indication previously. Surprising but .. not good writing style. Like old Agatha Christie books where the murderer is first mentioned, introduced and convicted on the last 3 pages.
Sadly a few beginning writers fall into that trap.
Or more to the point jump in head first ..
No indication of that happening here, though.
Keeping secrets but hinting towards the reader/player that there are secrets is good writing style.
Unless it completely comes out of left park and has had not the slightest indication previously. Surprising but .. not good writing style. Like old Agatha Christie books where the murderer is first mentioned, introduced and convicted on the last 3 pages.
Sadly a few beginning writers fall into that trap.
Or more to the point jump in head first ..
No indication of that happening here, though.
Keeping secrets but hinting towards the reader/player that there are secrets is good writing style.
Not sure if this was mentioned before, but for some reason it's really annoying. Cuckolding does not equal cheating (talking about the situation with Jack and Erika), the whole point of being cucked is a man who enjoys and is sexually aroused by seeing his partner having sex with someone else, usually while the man is being verbally abused as a lesser lover.
So maybe go back and change cuckolding to cheating when talking about Jack cheating on Erika?
So maybe go back and change cuckolding to cheating when talking about Jack cheating on Erika?
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
Thanks for the clarification keimag. In Spanish, we have also the word "cuco" which means being cheated on, aside from the sense you've told, and by etymology, I thought in English was applicable too. I'll correct it on 0.7B
- Nov 13, 2021
- 1,201
- 3,280
It's not as simple as that user makes it, either. The term is absolutely used in English in a pejorative sense to refer to a man who has been cheated on, whether willing or unwilling, and whether knowing or unknowing. The concept of "being cuckolded" has always been about being cheated on, and only the more recent voluntary cuckolding kink matches that person's description.
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
You are at one-third of the (publicly released) game approximately. The characters live a (seemingly) happy life, so there are a lot of (bad) jokes in their conversations. Also, the situations in which the poor MC gets, most of them unwillingly, are somewhat bizarre, and sometimes based on my own experiences as the Twins situation with the two guys, in my case, they were three (And no, I don't have a harem. QC Department doesn't allow me to have one)
Have you renamed Mom(Martha) to Samantha or is it a typo? If you did, you will have some weird conversations as there is another character called Samantha. Imagine (original) Samantha talking about (renamed) Samantha. Add my poor English to the mix and you are destined for a brain implosion.
I just woke up and looked it up in the Cambridge dictionary, and you (we) are right. It can be used both ways just as I initially thought.
Since it is only used twice in the whole text, and to avoid confusion (enough confusion my poor English creates) I will change the expression in those two instances.
Thanks Tiur and keimag for helping me improve My Dorm
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
Updated OP with links for 0.7A, a "short" update covering the first half of Day 9, that have a Halloweenesque flavor
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
Last edited:
- Nov 18, 2021
- 345
- 299
Ya ...español de la vieja escuela .Me gusta tu sentido del humor
.But Spanish is not my mother tongue although you also learn something and I would bet something that you are the age of my uncles about 50 years for their jokes. I hope I am not wrong and continue with this excellent game
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
Just made 50 this week (there's a post about it and a non-canon image of Martha in the spoiler section), so you guessed right!Ya ...español de la vieja escuela .Me gusta tu sentido del humor
But Spanish is not my mother tongue although you also learn something and I would bet something that you are the age of my uncles about 50 years for their jokes. I hope I am not wrong and continue with this excellent game
The idea for this game is for it to have a long run, as there are a lot of stories to tell. I have outlined up to 0.12 and a sketch up to 0.15. And that's about half of the story I currently have in mind.
- Nov 18, 2021
- 345
- 299
I recently saw that comment, and it is excellent that you have already thought about a medium-long term, with updates every two months, this game is going to gain a good reputation. As long as you don't go to the dark side (NTR) I hate it.
And don't make spoilers of your own game either, I haven't played version 0.6 yet and 0.7 is almost here
And feliz cumpleaños con retraso
Estamos en fiestas coño vete a descansar un día
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
ThanksI recently saw that comment, and it is excellent that you have already thought about a medium-long term, with updates every two months, this game is going to gain a good reputation. As long as you don't go to the dark side (NTR) I hate it.
And don't make spoilers of your own game either, I haven't played version 0.6 yet and 0.7 is almost here
And feliz cumpleaños con retraso
Just published 0.7A here (0.7B will be published on Patreon and Subscribestar this week if all goes well).
The updates are monthly, not every two months, and even some months have a couple of updates (August and October had them, and I also plan it for December and February), so 16 updates in the first 12 months if all goes as it should.
NTR in My Dorm world only means New Teacher Room for Daphne; you know she's so innocent... (or not)
There won't be NTR or Sharing (with another male) in My Dorm. I promised it on Release day and I am bound by my own word.
Last edited:
- Feb 12, 2018
- 1,230
- 1,556
Is it just me or is the patch not loading properly? Why am I getting these references to clones and Maria and Norah talking about "practically" being mom and aunt?
- Feb 12, 2018
- 1,230
- 1,556
Yeah, the patch here looks like it is only activating the incest, that is already written in the game. Or at least it should, but somehow it doesn't seem to work in this 0.7a update.
- Apr 11, 2022
- 2,628
- 16,136
Yes, the patch is universal, you can download it only once, but has to be applied before loading the previous version save, as in every update the game checks for it.