the beginning of the new update is a bit weird for me: at first Mom is in my room and we are talking about meemaw arriving and suddenly the scene changes to mom being outside the door and talking about cake. Are there a few lines missing?
Perhaps I did it a bit abruptly. I changed the PoV to Debbie and there wasn't any possibility to do the scene with Martha opening the door without it looking weird and not seeing Debbie there.
TropecitaGames Hey buddy, can you please get those girls to take of their damn shoes when they sit in their bed. It irks me to no ends.
When did it happen? In the first chapter?
Only if it has cream cheese frosting (and on days that end in "y").
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Seriously though, there's a bakery a little over a half-mile (about a km) from my house that makes incredibly good red velvet cake doughnuts with cream cheese frosting, and I generally have a couple of those for breakfast about once a week.
There is no bad time for a red velvet cake
The animated blinking is really throwing me off
The blinking has been there since the initial release, but in this update I used it a lot more. Some people have said they find it to give more life to the characters. My wife between them. She is QC, so it will remain.
Not sure if just me, but the jump from to this felt weird.
I checked the script and it´s made like that. Just felt like a weird jump.
Perhaps I did it a bit abruptly. I changed the PoV to Debbie and there wasn't any possibility to do the scene with Martha opening the door without it looking weird and not seeing Debbie there.
The Interpretation, I gave to his post, is that the transiton, was to abrupt, as if a render inbetween were missing.
like: a picture were Martha steps back and MC, becomes aware that Debbie is about to see him, the
oops
efect then the facepalm because Martha got nervous and was so focused on them that she lost awareness of the situation
else I don't know,
And showing the MC old face??? And return to the complains about it???
Also, nice update. Not only did we get Meemaw but a random
Aunt Nun appered.
I struggled to keep the Lady in blue a secret. Especially when some people complained because Meemaw isn't impregnable. But I acomplished keeping my mouth shut.
urination, violence, titfuck... aaaand NO anal? hmmm.. do i smell personal damage in the past?
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As
Avaron1974 answered you, the urination is not sexual, the violence is between men, and... what titfuck has of weird? It's vanilla!
The relationships still aren't ripe enough for anal, although the MC has brought up the issue a couple of times.
If Betty is so intuitive about relationship sparks... It's going to funny when the MC brings her back to the dorm.
"Uh, your mom, aunt, cousin and sisters?? Dios mio"
Betty will have some wordless protagonism in the first family lunch. What is the first question a grandma would ask her grand-daughters? "Do you date anyone?"
No offence, Moon. I'm not as brave as you