I guess I meant the thing in between those two - how much of the update are scenes that go into the gallery. I guess unless every scene does.
Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding. Every scene goes into the gallery regardless of whether it's lewd or not.
Anyone know if this dev employs proofreaders that are native English speakers? If he does I sure hope he doesn't pay them, imagine getting payed and deliver on this level lol.
It's a good game but the English is just so unnatural and wrong/bad, kind of breaks the immersion.
I think the natural/unnatural thing for readers (and I'm not talking directly about you, so no offense intended) depends on those players' backgrounds and what they are used to. The naturalness of how something "sounds" would be different for a player in a slum in Nairobi (Kenya), a player raised in Knightsbridge (London, UK), a player in the Appalachian (US), or a player from Sydney (Australia). All of them are native speakers, by the way.
I guess someone with bad grammar, who doesn't know how to structure a question or how pronouns or prepositions work, could think the language used by people (mostly) speaking correctly is stiff or posh.
If software as simple as Grammarly (free version) can detect four mistakes in your first paragraph, I guess you aren't used to properly written English (I can detect a couple extra mistakes that Grammarly didn't):
So I suppose that's why you think the language in My Dorm, properly used and proofread by a native English speaker, is unnatural, wrong, or bad.
Is it? I have to be honest, I've only ever found a couple of issues with the writing in this game (which does have an English-language proofreader, btw). I'm a professional proofreader myself (I don't work on this game) and although I "turn off the switch" when I'm not working, I still can't avoid picking up issues when I'm reading – so having never really had a problem with this game, I guess it must be okay.
Thanks!
Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
My advice? A playthrough with one of them, another one with the other, and a third playthrough with both

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