VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.27.3 S3 Ch.7] [Tropecita Games]

[Trope95]

Another great update Trope95, thank you!

Spoiler: A couple of thoughts...

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About Norah's ass, the perfect moment to dive would be when the MC bites it, but that moment also was one of personal growth for Norah and I used it to deepen their relationship. Even the most perfect women need their moments to develop and Norah didn't enjoy one since her first scenes.

I love the dynamics between Eva and Amanda. They weren't conceived like that at the start, but it's a case of characters escaping the control of their writer. As we know more about Amanda and Eva, as they are fleshed out, a lot of scenes that were one way in my mind should be changed. In this case, Amanda's protective personality extends to her sister. Why ruin a moment of happiness with the truth? Even more so knowing how Eva was when the MC arrived at their base.

Yes, it should be "sensitive". My bad.

The surprise about Scarlett's reveal is not "what" but "how". The "what" was obvious since Edmund's last call (and his pictures of sign language. Literally "written in the wall", at least for the patched version). The "how" was the important thing, and this time Daphne and the community (thanks S1nsational ) came to the rescue with a better idea than I had initially. It forced me to shoehorn the scene with Martha during breakfast, but the result was better than what my scene could have dreamed to be.

It wasn't a complete Topless Tropeday. There were three ladies there who weren't topless, and each of them had a good reason not to be. But Debbie is more comfortable every day (regardless if she's in a relationship with the MC or not). About her skill to read people, she knows her sister, and she, the shy girl, has spent most of her social life watching other people interact while she was in a corner. It's a survival skill in her case. She will rival Betty after she learns to recognize the signals in the other girls.

Lisa got some changes for that scene. The most obvious is the hairstyle, but also the makeup (the same she used at the Jazz Corner) and the set of expressions I used for her in that room. I wanted to show her vulnerable/angry/surprised/out of balance during that conversation, and I reserved those expressions for that moment (like Daphne's pout is reserved for her).

About the teaser, in the last two updates it made sense to cut there because the next scenes (foursome and Norah's) were big (4,375 and 6,007 renders respectively). This time, I wanted a more wholesome end of the update to finish Edmund's story arc regarding his daughter (in the patched version).

Thanks for the heads up about the lack of translation! That was a last moment addition to the gallery and I checked it worked, but I guess I didn't notice the text was still in Spanish. It's Scarlett's pool scene for those who didn't pick up Dad's call.

 

[blkcrow20]

Yes, it should be "sensitive". My bad.

No, that's my bad. I'm the proofreader.

 

[Trope95]

No, that's my bad. I'm the proofreader.

Nope. You do an amazing job, but you are human, and we both know that when I send you the files it's always in a hurry. You got 120+ corrections done in a ~27,500-word script. If 1-3 per update went undetected you are doing a better job than most professional translators/proofreaders.

 

[TonyMurray]

Nope. You do an amazing job, but you are human, and we both know that when I send you the files it's always in a hurry. You got 120+ corrections done in a ~27,500-word script. If 1-3 per update went undetected you are doing a better job than most professional translators/proofreaders.

100% agree. There will always be something that gets missed no matter how good you are - and I am a professional proofreader, so I know what I'm talking about!

 

[Lord Volt]

My god that scene with Meemaw in the update.

Always want more milfs/gilfs. Still playing the update, but can't wait for Betty either.

EDIT: Finished the update. Excellent update as always Trope. Also I don't know how you did it but you elevated Lisa to goddess tier, well done!

 

[throwaway1488]

I should check it, I'm not at home today. I guess you aren't on Erika's path, so ignoring the message and going to the delivery guy is correct. You only lost a sentence said by both girls "See you later, [mc]"

I am on Erika's route, so decided to take a look with URM, the error happens cause i have pregnancy disabled in the preferences.
(not important for the error but also for some reason URM 2.3 works fine but if i update to 2.5 it causes the game to be non-responsive)
When I toggled pregnancy in preferences, no exception occurred.

 

[waldo404]

Hello hello! thanks for the nice update Trope! I particularly liked liza - both because she's such a cutie and having waited on liza/mc relationship to evolve since the airport
I follow the unpatched game, and was a bit disappointed when scarlet DNA's result came back negative.
I am not against incest storylines, but I'd rather play the game where the MC is not banging his whole family - and I love the plot you ended up with. But Scarlet's paternity was so tangled up in the story with the previous hints that I was very fine with it.
I'm gonna be a spoiled player asking that, but would a "soft incest" mode/patch (eg incests that do not fall under the umbrella of the clever cloning scheme to go around the initial incest question of building a harem at home) ever be on your mind, Trope95 ?

 

[FatGiant]

Hello hello! thanks for the nice update Trope! I particularly liked liza - both because she's such a cutie and having waited on liza/mc relationship to evolve since the airport
I follow the unpatched game, and was a bit disappointed when scarlet DNA's result came back negative.
I am not against incest storylines, but I'd rather play the game where the MC is not banging his whole family - and I love the plot you ended up with. But Scarlet's paternity was so tangled up in the story with the previous hints that I was very fine with it.
I'm gonna be a spoiled player asking that, but would a "soft incest" mode/patch (eg incests that do not fall under the umbrella of the clever cloning scheme to go around the initial incest question of building a harem at home) ever be on your mind, Trope95 ?

I can understand a matter of taste. I can understand moral objections. I can understand social based lunacy. I can understand a lack of scientific knowledge. I can understand religion based ignorance. This I can understand. Not forgive, but, understand.

What I can't understand is: Soft Incest. What even in the fuck is that? And if it is incest, what makes it soft? And if it is incest why is it preferable? And what in the fuck makes it less wrong?

Either it is incest or isn't. Bloody hell.

I can't. I simply can't understand this. It is too moronic, too stupid, too unnecessary, too unjustifiable.

It is obviously the result of a VERY shackled mind that can't understand that what it wants is to surrender to a kink, that they have been indoctrinated to dislike. Just embrace it. You want incest. Assume it. Be bold and free.

FUUUCK.

Peace

 

[blkcrow20]

Hello hello! thanks for the nice update Trope! I particularly liked liza - both because she's such a cutie and having waited on liza/mc relationship to evolve since the airport
I follow the unpatched game, and was a bit disappointed when scarlet DNA's result came back negative.
I am not against incest storylines, but I'd rather play the game where the MC is not banging his whole family - and I love the plot you ended up with. But Scarlet's paternity was so tangled up in the story with the previous hints that I was very fine with it.
I'm gonna be a spoiled player asking that, but would a "soft incest" mode/patch (eg incests that do not fall under the umbrella of the clever cloning scheme to go around the initial incest question of building a harem at home) ever be on your mind, Trope95 ?

Happy to hear you enjoyed it and not everyone is into incest, which is fine.

 

[FatGiant]

Happy to hear you enjoyed it and not everyone is into incest, which is fine.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL did you read it? He is INTO incest. He just wants it "soft".

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

 

[iamthejuggler]

* I don't know what a Chaixas is.

They're a developer who makes awful games with a focus on fat ugly women. Please don't!

 

[waldo404]

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I can understand a matter of taste. I can understand moral objections. I can understand social based lunacy. I can understand a lack of scientific knowledge. I can understand religion based ignorance. This I can understand. Not forgive, but, understand.

What I can't understand is: Soft Incest. What even in the fuck is that? And if it is incest, what makes it soft? And if it is incest why is it preferable? And what in the fuck makes it less wrong?

Either it is incest or isn't. Bloody hell.

I can't. I simply can't understand this. It is too moronic, too stupid, too unnecessary, too unjustifiable.

It is obviously the result of a VERY shackled mind that can't understand that what it wants is to surrender to a kink, that they have been indoctrinated to dislike. Just embrace it. You want incest. Assume it. Be bold and free.

FUUUCK.

Peace

As I said, it is a matter of preference for playing this game (and how I started to play the game, and unwilling to start over, being already into the unpatched plot when I went into the thread's messages and discovered the double game that My Dorm is). I play DMD, single again, and other such titles. I am not coyly covering my eyes, I simply like Trope's scheme around humping the whole family.

"soft incest" - maybe the name is badly chosen, it would rather be "partial uncensor", but I did explain what I meant: what isn't covered by the initial plot.

 

[Dark Silence]

Not touching this game for 6 months, I forgot who's who.

So I'm advice [Tropecita Games] to make a real dormitory with at least 200 female students, where each student came from each country in this world, and some even 2 or 3, because we need every skin color and skin condition included. Maybe coop with Chaixas for overweight female student too.

And then let see if people still can remember who's who.

Sounds like a "you" problem........

Personally, I've had no problem remembering who's who in this. And there is the character sheet if one needs to refresh their memory.

I know a few names in the game:
1. Daphne
2. Kim
3. Kate
4. Deb
5. Betty

Not sure what the problem is. "Hey, you" works great for the people you don't remember names of. If you end up having sex with someone that you can't remember the name of it's fine. "Gods damn you're tight!" See? You still works.

 

[FatGiant]

As I said, it is a matter of preference for playing this game (and how I started to play the game, and unwilling to start over, being already into the unpatched plot when I went into the thread's messages and discovered the double game that My Dorm is). I play DMD, single again, and other such titles. I am not coyly covering my eyes, I simply like Trope's scheme around humping the whole family.

"soft incest" - maybe the name is badly chosen, it would rather be "soft uncensor", but I did explain what I meant: what isn't covered by the initial plot.

That doesn't explain anything.

And let me tell you, it is VERY much worth it to replay the patched version.

I still can't figure out what you want or mean with your "soft" things. It makes zero sense to make a different patch, just for you, that you don't even know what you want, just because you can't be bothered to replay the game as it was meant to be played.

Instead of you making a small effort and play from the start, you want someone to make a mod/patch for your very specific (and unspecified) needs, so you don't have to be inconvenienced.

Is it just me or are you coming down with a fever of some sort? Maybe take your meds? Or try different ones?



Peace

 

[iamthejuggler]

I think it's time to back slowly away from that conversation FatGiant!

 

[Elhemeer]

For a moment, until I saw your second edit, I thought you were on the wrong thread. The first sentence could be meant for me

To be fair, that WAS my point (I think he's even from Brazil). I did edit the post to emphasize "another" ^_^

 

[johnpouljones]

Hello hello! thanks for the nice update Trope! I particularly liked liza - both because she's such a cutie and having waited on liza/mc relationship to evolve since the airport
I follow the unpatched game, and was a bit disappointed when scarlet DNA's result came back negative.
I am not against incest storylines, but I'd rather play the game where the MC is not banging his whole family - and I love the plot you ended up with. But Scarlet's paternity was so tangled up in the story with the previous hints that I was very fine with it.
I'm gonna be a spoiled player asking that, but would a "soft incest" mode/patch (eg incests that do not fall under the umbrella of the clever cloning scheme to go around the initial incest question of building a harem at home) ever be on your mind, Trope95 ?

The game is what it is. You may or may not like it. Someone invented it, wrote it, created it and we have a product. When you go to a butcher's shop and you don't like the ingredient in the sausage, do you expect them to take out the contents and replace what you don't like? But you still have a choice. You buy or you don't.

 

[waldo404]

That doesn't explain anything.

And let me tell you, it is VERY much worth it to replay the patched version.

I still can't figure out what you want or mean with your "soft" things. It makes zero sense to make a different patch, just for you, that you don't even know what you want, just because you can't be bothered to replay the game as it was meant to be played.

Instead of you making a small effort and play from the start, you want someone to make a mod/patch for your very specific (and unspecified) needs, so you don't have to be inconvenienced.

Is it just me or are you coming down with a fever of some sort? Maybe take your meds? Or try different ones?

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Peace

I could repeat over and over, it is my preference, my choice to play the game as it is *released*, but somehow I think it won't be of much use to get through to a surely person trying to police my opinion while pretending to "can understand" to all opinions (but mine).

I could agree with you that the "partial uncensor" I call upon is a 'me' problem... If the game wasn't *released* as the unpatched version. I hardly think I'm the only one playing it unpatched who has no issue with incest games/fictions.

"peace".

 

[waldo404]

The game is what it is. You may or may not like it. Someone invented it, wrote it, created it and we have a product. When you go to a butcher's shop and you don't like the ingredient in the sausage, do you expect them to take out the contents and replace what you don't like? But you still have a choice. You buy or you don't.

I've been very clear that I love the game.
To follow up on your analogy, I would ask the butcher if he has merguez sausages, and be very fine buying chipolatas if he didn't.
I'm not saying it's a must have or anything, I'm just asking if it is something Trope would consider.

 

[Deleted member 6503042]

I wonder what will be the reaction of Lisa&Debbie's parents.

Parents: We sent our daughters to your dorm, we are paying for them to stay there and you did what exactly?
MC: