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Anyone know if this dev employs proofreaders that are native English speakers? If he does I sure hope he doesn't pay them, imagine getting payed and deliver on this level lol.

It's a good game but the English is just so unnatural and wrong/bad, kind of breaks the immersion.
 

TonyMurray

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Anyone know if this dev employs proofreaders that are native English speakers? If he does I sure hope he doesn't pay them, imagine getting payed and deliver on this level lol.

It's a good game but the English is just so unnatural and wrong/bad, kind of breaks the immersion.
Is it? I have to be honest, I've only ever found a couple of issues with the writing in this game (which does have an English-language proofreader, btw). I'm a professional proofreader myself (I don't work on this game) and although I "turn off the switch" when I'm not working, I still can't avoid picking up issues when I'm reading – so having never really had a problem with this game, I guess it must be okay.
 

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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
 
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I guess I meant the thing in between those two - how much of the update are scenes that go into the gallery. I guess unless every scene does.
Oh, sorry for the misunderstanding. Every scene goes into the gallery regardless of whether it's lewd or not.

Anyone know if this dev employs proofreaders that are native English speakers? If he does I sure hope he doesn't pay them, imagine getting payed and deliver on this level lol.

It's a good game but the English is just so unnatural and wrong/bad, kind of breaks the immersion.
I think the natural/unnatural thing for readers (and I'm not talking directly about you, so no offense intended) depends on those players' backgrounds and what they are used to. The naturalness of how something "sounds" would be different for a player in a slum in Nairobi (Kenya), a player raised in Knightsbridge (London, UK), a player in the Appalachian (US), or a player from Sydney (Australia). All of them are native speakers, by the way.

I guess someone with bad grammar, who doesn't know how to structure a question or how pronouns or prepositions work, could think the language used by people (mostly) speaking correctly is stiff or posh.

If software as simple as Grammarly (free version) can detect four mistakes in your first paragraph, I guess you aren't used to properly written English (I can detect a couple extra mistakes that Grammarly didn't):
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So I suppose that's why you think the language in My Dorm, properly used and proofread by a native English speaker, is unnatural, wrong, or bad.

Is it? I have to be honest, I've only ever found a couple of issues with the writing in this game (which does have an English-language proofreader, btw). I'm a professional proofreader myself (I don't work on this game) and although I "turn off the switch" when I'm not working, I still can't avoid picking up issues when I'm reading – so having never really had a problem with this game, I guess it must be okay.
Thanks!

Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
My advice? A playthrough with one of them, another one with the other, and a third playthrough with both :sneaky: .
 

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You're suppose to be on my side Trop lol.
I am! As you said, replayability is a thing, and that means multiple playthroughs. I can't choose between Eva and Amanda (or between Saira and Megan or between...) so I propose having every possible combination. ;)
 

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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
Amanda for the long term companion with how her character has developed, Eva for the short term wild sex cause she seems kinkier somehow
 

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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
Confucius say "when in doubt, chase the redhead."
 

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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
I guess I can only say:

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And while it may seem sarcasm, it isn't. I truly would like to know the reasoning behind it. Sorry, it's just so alien to me that I can't simply understand it.

1- It's a single player game.
2- It IS the point of the game.
3- Everyone's OK with it.
4- It has ZERO consequences.

I've seen several attempts at explaining this, so far, it all boils down to: Personal Choice. That, doesn't explain anything. It's just the excuse people use to stop the questioning. For once I would like to read a REAL answer.

Don't feel like I am judging you, I am simply trying to understand.

Peace :(
 
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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
You wish for:

the cute, lethal blonde vice-director capable of manage a bilionare company and be your perfect girlfriend with two hunkers that could break watermelons
or
the firecracker, redhead assassin who will train you relentless (both in training grounds and bed) and have the perfect assets to send you in heaven no matter what part of the body she decide to use

Hard choice sir, honestly I don't envy you o_O
 

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Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
No, question at all: Eva.

Because she looks exactly like Daphne. :love:
 

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Daphne with abs and a ponytail instead of the braid ;)
If I can have Daphne and almost-Daphne in bed at the same time, that's a win.

Plus Eva can knock off with the training, eat a few slices of cake and have Daphne braid her hair for her. Easy-peasy.
 
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WerewolfSinX

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I guess I can only say:

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And while it may seem sarcasm, it isn't. I truly would like to know the reasoning behind it. Sorry, it's just so alien to me that I can't simply understand it.

1- It's a single player game.
2- It IS the point of the game.
3- Everyone's OK with it.
4- It has ZERO consequences.

I've seen several attempts at explaining this, so far, it all boils down to: Personal Choice. That, doesn't explain anything. It's just the excuse people use to stop the questioning. For once I would like to read a REAL answer.

Don't feel like I am judging you, I am simply trying to understand.

Peace :(
You're right, a lot of players always say its personal choice. Which granted it is, but I'm hoping I can give a legit answer here. For me it comes down to replay ability. I love a lot of these visual novels that I don't want to beat it in a single playthrough. I want a reason to come back to these games to be honest. For me its not like Dragon Age, Mass Effect, Baldur's Gate, ect ect. Where you can go in make different choices and move your character around and find hidden secrets within the game. Once you do a full harem route on a VN and the game (and this is a big if) is completed than thats it, its over, your done time to move on to the next harem game. I hope that is a good reason for why I don't like doing full harems if I can avoid it. One thing I can say for sure is no matter if your a Full Harem player, Mini Harem player, or just one romance at a time player, we are all Vanilla players and we stick together no matter what against NTR haha.
 

WerewolfSinX

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You wish for:

the cute, lethal blonde vice-director capable of manage a bilionare company and be your perfect girlfriend with two hunkers that could break watermelons
or
the firecracker, redhead assassin who will train you relentless (both in training grounds and bed) and have the perfect assets to send you in heaven no matter what part of the body she decide to use

Hard choice sir, honestly I don't envy you o_O
Believe it or not you just made me choose Eva....
 

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If software as simple as Grammarly (free version) can detect four mistakes in your first paragraph, I guess you aren't used to properly written English (I can detect a couple extra mistakes that Grammarly didn't):
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So I suppose that's why you think the language in My Dorm, properly used and proofread by a native English speaker, is unnatural, wrong, or bad.
Dammit you beat me to it. Always funny pathetic when some delusionally superior poster opens his mouth and proves the wisdom of the old adage (better to keep your moth closed...).

Apologies from this side of the Pond to everyone. At this moment in history a lot of loudmouthed-yet-embarassingly-ignorant clowns have grabbed the proverbial megaphone and are shouting into it like 8-year olds. :sick:
Hey everyone, need everyone's opinion on this. Out of Eva or Amanda who should join my harem. I know, I know everyone is going to say "choose both, why limit yourself" lol. Everyone on here who knows me knows I can't do full harem. Hell it was Trope who got me into have "mini harems" haha. But figured I would add either Eva or Amanda, so just wanted some opinions.
Let me make this simple: you can't have a HAREM without both Amanda and Eva (HAmandaREvaM.) Spelling 101. The tricky part is making sure that you remember HRM stands for Her Royal Majesty, which of course means Daphne. (y)
 
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WerewolfSinX

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Damn, you know what guys this sucks. I am going to have to start over from season 2 to put Eva in the mini harem. I can hear everyone now yelling at their screens "See this is why you do full harem." Well this is what I have to say to all of you...:WeSmart:
 
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