VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.27.3 S3 Ch.7] [Tropecita Games]

[LGM]

This is some high-quality stuff. Great work.
And I say that not even having played the game "properly". As usual, my first playthrough consisted of rejecting everybody. Because that's how you find inconsistencies, by walking the path the dev least expects. So here's what I found:

The line: "Also, the rest of the city seems almost exclusively populated by women. The bartender at Twins, Eileen, Maddie, Sophie, Alexia, Simone, Samantha..." can be awkward, as it's possible to not have encountered Maddie and/or Alexia.
Similarly, unless I'm mistaken, MC only finds out Alexia's first name after the bathroom beating, so if you avoided that, MC shouldn't mention her first name to Jamaal when he tells him about going to the police station. (He mentions getting her card, but I don't think that happens after the fight in front of the café. The easiest fix would be to have her give him her card during that scene.)

Also, Simone's path, after you first reject her, prominently features the idea that there are other girls the MC wants to be with. Of course, if you rejected everyone up to that point, that feels really out of place.
When running into Alexia and Eileen at the lake, Alexia remarks something like, "He's with her, too?" implying she also knows about MC having multiple relationships.

Besides these, there is really only one thing that irks me. It seems that "Mom" is never capitalized (besides when it's the first word of a sentence), though most of the time it should be. The rule is, words like Mom, Dad, etc are capitalized when they replace the person's name. You'd write "This is my mom." but "Shut up, Dad."

Anyway, now to actually enjoy the game. I wish you much success, dev.
(v0.11a.1)

 

[submissive -Ben83]

Maddie and Megan (and Sophie) were going to be side girls to provide some action while the relationships evolved. I changed my mind because of some advice from the community and converted Maddie and Megan into full "haremable" girls, but that means they should share their screen time with other girls. The last time Maddie showed up was on Friday afternoon and this update covered Sunday morning. Not living in the house, I think she has been on screen as much as Samantha, Simone, or Megan (even has had more lewd scenes than them)

Sorry when i said more screentime i actually meant femdom scenes lol, I have Autism so i propbably said the wrong word.

I miss my Mistress dude

 

[Scotsman1989]

The android version isnae worth downloading, it doesnae have the incest patch installed even though it has the walkthrough/cheat mod built in.

 

[Scotsman1989]

Sorry when i said more screentime i actually meant femdom scenes lol, I have Autism so i propbably said the wrong word.

I miss my Mistress dude

I love femdom as well mate.

 

[submissive -Ben83]

I love femdom as well mate.

I know man i have seen you around on alot of threads

 

[Speppo82]

It's pretty incesty to me! Ya got Mom, Sisters, MeeMaw (grandma) and Aunt... and an actual Dad that is not dead!

What I mean,Martha isn’t your real mother even if you use the ipatch

 

[S1nsational]

Jamaal and Saira are the MVPs of this update. They make this is the best update in ages, so funny.

The only thing that sucks is that unless get a time skip, we probably won't be seeing Saira again for a good few updates, which means we won't see her for ages in real world time.

 

[xapican]

When running into Alexia and Eileen at the lake, Alexia remarks something like, "He's with her, too?" implying she also knows about MC having multiple relationships.

If not rejecting everybody, that means Erica in this case, the sentece would make sense since the Barfight (which shouldn't have happend if you rejected Erica or it happens but MC and Erica make clear they are cousins) Alexia learns that Erica is his girlfriend iirc, but she don't know about Eileen

 

[xapican]

What I mean,Martha isn’t your real mother even if you use the ipatch

Of course not your mother is dead like your uncle Duhh

 

[Speppo82]

Of course not your mother is dead like your uncle Duhh

So its not a true incest game, thats all lol

 

[Trope95]

Hmm, I believe Winnie Harlow, a fellow Canadian....actually now treats her condition around her eyes, in order to make her disorder less prominent (I guess she felt it would be more accepting / appealing...as this image shows. And included a before image as well).

Anyways I'm really loving this title...Though I'm not sure how all of the girls will accept MC's harem relationship...especially MC's family (one guy and 15+ woman).

As well I was just mentioning my disliked with how intense the condition was applied around Kim's eyes (I really didn't want to avoid her...she's pretty, but to me she isn't appealing with how intense the designer created the condition around her eyes and face.)

Anyways, thanks for for your time with your replies.

Winnie had a great publicity platform in America's Next Top Model. Kim doesn't have that, and she has accepted her condition. She does modeling/hostess to get the bills paid, and she for sure will do what her agent (when/if she gets one, now she's working for an agency) recommends her.

The MC family will be part of the harem in most of the playthroughs, so that won't be a problem per se. But making the first 22 LIs accept the harem will be tricky.

Oh he is already Amandas aiming "Mark"
Would be funny to see him in a future Update either his clothes ripped by the boar or sitting on a tree branch
TropecitaGames ; well she looked more like a "Zamba"(Sambu) from her skin color,

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to me anyway I think Mr Bennys sugestion isn't so bad, (if it is not a hell of a fuss in DAZ3D) to implement, of course I love her like she is

Good idea with the Zambo, but for me her face structure is Caucasian, so I see her more like 25% Caucasian ancestry, 75% African ancestry.
The problem is not in Daz, the problem is in render numbers.
Imagine Kate in Act III. For every render where she appears, I should do 4 renders (Slim Kate, Not-so-slim Kate, Slim Kate pregnant, Not-so-Slim Kate pregnant). Now she has a threesome (or they are in the pool) with Kim. Multiply it by 2 (Kim pregnant, Kim not pregnant). 8 renders for every render in that threesome.
If I give the option for (Current skin, less prominent vitiligo, perfect skin) multiply that by 3. 24 renders for every frame where they appear together. Development hell.

I loved them. Again you proved that she is has good looking has her sister. Her physic will change in a few years, sooner if she drops the sport. Swimming, Ballet, Running and other sports with intensive strength and anaerobic training cause the women that perform them at a high level to have almost no fat, without fat, there's no boobs and mostly no ass. If she drops the sport or reduces her performance, the changes will be drastic.

She's very sexy now, if you have my tastes.

Peace

She will keep doing sports until her second pregnancy (that means the epilogue). Sport is very important to her, and changing her body type now will provoke a bit of a riot among her fans

Nice update, but you had me screaming at the screen with the cliffhanger ending.
Like WTF is that about...

v.0.11B will have the answer. I have already written the continuation of the scene.

Na ... I think that kid is going to be integral somehow ... also unless he's proves to be a Dev-mole, I think he's going to be a good guy (and maybe more interested in the MC than Lisa, but that's just my personal take).

Anthony will have some protagonism down the road, and not only related to Lisa.

This is some high-quality stuff. Great work.
And I say that not even having played the game "properly". As usual, my first playthrough consisted of rejecting everybody. Because that's how you find inconsistencies, by walking the path the dev least expects. So here's what I found:

The line: "Also, the rest of the city seems almost exclusively populated by women. The bartender at Twins, Eileen, Maddie, Sophie, Alexia, Simone, Samantha..." can be awkward, as it's possible to not have encountered Maddie and/or Alexia.
Similarly, unless I'm mistaken, MC only finds out Alexia's first name after the bathroom beating, so if you avoided that, MC shouldn't mention her first name to Jamaal when he tells him about going to the police station. (He mentions getting her card, but I don't think that happens after the fight in front of the café. The easiest fix would be to have her give him her card during that scene.)

Also, Simone's path, after you first reject her, prominently features the idea that there are other girls the MC wants to be with. Of course, if you rejected everyone up to that point, that feels really out of place.
When running into Alexia and Eileen at the lake, Alexia remarks something like, "He's with her, too?" implying she also knows about MC having multiple relationships.

Besides these, there is really only one thing that irks me. It seems that "Mom" is never capitalized (besides when it's the first word of a sentence), though most of the time it should be. The rule is, words like Mom, Dad, etc are capitalized when they replace the person's name. You'd write "This is my mom." but "Shut up, Dad."

Anyway, now to actually enjoy the game. I wish you much success, dev.
(v0.11a.1)

Thanks for checking the "unplayed" path. I will revise and change those texts when I return home from my vacation.

The android version isnae worth downloading, it doesnae have the incest patch installed even though it has the walkthrough/cheat mod built in.

There are two Android versions. Regular and Pre-patched. The pre-patched one has the incest patch included.

What I mean,Martha isn’t your real mother even if you use the ipatch

Not in my game. It seems like you didn't install the patch correctly in one of the previous updates. Since I am not in Spain right now, I can't solve your problem, but when I return, I will write you to try to check one of your saves and fix it.

 

[HornyyPussy]

So its not a true incest game, thats all lol

God I hope you're trying to be sarcastic.......

 

[xapican]

So its not a true incest game, thats all lol

having a romantical relship with your sister and aunt and cousins all 1st deegree of Bloodline ins't real incest, ok I got ya !
Thank's for the lesson in Genealogy

 

[HornyyPussy]

having a romantical relship with your sister and aunt and cousins all 1st deegree of Bloodline ins't real incest, ok I got ya !
Thank's for the lesson in Genealogy

Not to mention that he's blatantly wrong about Martha not being the MC's real mom

I have the same problem though with the ipatch where she isn't his mom, i screwed up somewhere along the line.....

 

[Trope95]

Jamaal and Saira are the MVPs of this update. They make this is the best update in ages, so funny.

The only thing that sucks is that unless get a time skip, we probably won't be seeing Saira again for a good few updates, which means we won't see her for ages in real world time.

For me Jamaal is always the best wingman (with Eileen's permission), and Saira needed a big comeback that showed what is going on in that beautiful head.
Saira is scheduled to come to the US on Tuesday/Wednesday, so IF I am able to do whole-day updates, that will mean 0.13-0.14

If not rejecting everybody, that means Erica in this case, the sentece would make sense since the Barfight (which shouldn't have happend if you rejected Erica or it happens but MC and Erica make clear they are cousins) Alexia learns that Erica is his girlfriend iirc, but she don't know about Eileen

Alexia doesn't know about Erika being in a relationship with the MC. Only Norah and Eileen know (and Betty suspects)

Of course not your mother is dead like your uncle Duhh

Only in the unpatched version.

 

[OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney]

Of course not your mother is dead like your uncle Duhh

In the unpatched version.
If you use the ipatch, Martha is your real mother.

 

[xapican]

TropecitaGames ], i sugested only to tone down the Dark skin a few nuances so she mets more the "cafe con leche" skintone hence the contrast with her vitiligio will not be so prominent.
I never thought of giving an option to it, but you made a good point, there there are a lot of players who like her such as she is.
To the Zambo, I brought that up because her skintone matches their skintone such as it is, if for example the mother is mestize (like my mother) the caucasian heritage will be strong, If you see me you don't suspect that my Grandma is Maya , but it is only an example.
and I wanted to clear what I meant,

 

[xapican]

Yeah I have a chaos with the patched and Unpatched version, I currently play the Unpatched, last update 10A i installed the patch, because someone was notifing about inconsistence in the patched version, then you published the 2 Bugfixes, in which you fixed them, Now, eager to see how the story progess I don't f***ing know in which of the 2 ver I insatlled Bob's update patch
first degree Touwabouhu / quilombo de primera

 

[hysepReC]

Oh man, i can't wait until Saira comes to Newport. If she's already jealous over Eileen, it's gonna be so funny when she finds out that the MC is dating multiple women.

Really enjoyed this update despite the lack of sex. I wasn't sure about the new dorm girls at first but i'm quite interested in them now... well, except Kate. Her path will probably be the first one i decline since she's a lesbian and i don't want her touching my girls.

 

[OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney]

Oh man, i can't wait until Saira comes to Newport. If she's already jealous over Eileen, it's gonna be so funny when she finds out that the MC is dating multiple women.

Really enjoyed this update despite the lack of sex. I wasn't sure about the new dorm girls at first but i'm quite interested in them now... well, except Kate. Her path will probably be the first one i decline since she's a lesbian and i don't want her touching my girls.

I think Kate will be essential for introducing the girls to 3somes, other than that, I believe she will be the funny charachter that will be rejected every time she will try to hit on one of the girls (because they are already head over heels for the MC).