VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.27.3 S3 Ch.7] [Tropecita Games]

[Trope95]

Released for Meemaw and Martha's Tier on Patreon and Subscribestar today.
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[Dragon59]

Just finished the update.
I have to admit, I had to push myself to accept AtV, but I decided to move the plot forward. Every fiber of my being shouted "No! You're not supposed to do that! Major health risk! Do you want to kill her!?"

 

[xapican]

Just finished the update.
I have to admit, I had to push myself to accept AtV, but I decided to move the plot forward. Every fiber of my being shouted "No! You're not supposed to do that! Major health risk! Do you want to kill her!?"

We ...the comunity of My Dorm, wan't to thank you for your courageous ,brave and altruistic sacrifice.......

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[TigerWolfe]

Just finished the update.
I have to admit, I had to push myself to accept AtV, but I decided to move the plot forward. Every fiber of my being shouted "No! You're not supposed to do that! Major health risk! Do you want to kill her!?"

I do the same in every game that has that. I guess AVN women have sterile bums.

 

[Trope95]

Just finished the update.
I have to admit, I had to push myself to accept AtV, but I decided to move the plot forward. Every fiber of my being shouted "No! You're not supposed to do that! Major health risk! Do you want to kill her!?"

AtV? I haven't found anything related to the game that can fit those three letters. I'm bad at acronyms.

 

[Uthuriel]

AtV? I haven't found anything related to the game that can fit those three letters. I'm bad at acronyms.

Anal to Vaginal. It's a serious health risk IRL. Something you should never do. High risk of bacterial infection.

 

[ramvivat]

I do the same in every game that has that. I guess AVN women have sterile bums.

Dude, "this is just a game" with his conventions.
Isn't the whole football team of inbreed children (with unknown genetic illness or disorders), which will be born after about 9 months, One of which will be your new sister and the other is your new cousin, is upsets you? Okay is not a football team but just a volleyball girl team. (horseradish is not sweeter than Raphanus)
In the game, you can invent a magical remedy for anal passage that makes the ass cleaner than teeth in the mouth =)
By the way, ordinary laundry soap is 72% - also capable of something. This is a good antiseptic for extreme cases, if not at hand of alcohol. True, alcohol in the ass is painful. But soap - no.

Or is "Games - it's serious!"? =)
// Conductive soap, having a dark color, made only from natural components. The basis is fatty acids (has 72 % fat) and alkali. It does not cause allergies and fights with pathogenic bacteria that are on the treated surface. It found its application not only in everyday life, but also in medicine. Conductive soap with hemorrhoids can relieve inflammation, and stop the growth of bacteria. Read more here: (sorry russian article)

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mylo //

learn student! =)

 

[El Pene Del Diablo]

Dude, "this is just a game" with his conventions.
Isn't the whole football team of inbreed children (with unknown genetic illness or disorders), which will be born after about 9 months, One of which will be your new sister and the other is your new cousin, is upsets you? Okay is not a football team but just a volleyball girl team. (horseradish is not sweeter than Raphanus)
In the game, you can invent a magical remedy for anal passage that makes the ass cleaner than teeth in the mouth =)
By the way, ordinary laundry soap is 72% - also capable of something. This is a good antiseptic for extreme cases, if not at hand of alcohol. True, alcohol in the ass is painful. But soap - no.

Or is "Games - it's serious!"? =)
// Conductive soap, having a dark color, made only from natural components. The basis is fatty acids (has 72 % fat) and alkali. It does not cause allergies and fights with pathogenic bacteria that are on the treated surface. It found its application not only in everyday life, but also in medicine. Conductive soap with hemorrhoids can relieve inflammation, and stop the growth of bacteria. Read more here: (sorry russian article)

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mylo //

learn student! =)

umm, ok.

but have you considered that orange + sideways = flashlight?

 

[S1nsational]

AtV? I haven't found anything related to the game that can fit those three letters. I'm bad at acronyms.

Ass/Anal to Vagina/Vaginal. Removing ones cock from fucking the ass and then immediately fucking the vagina without doing any cleaning etc

 

[Deleted member 2572880]

I misexplained.
The translation to English is already done and I won't redo it or go with machine translation (the "translator" that collaborated in the development in the first release used Google translator (instead of what we agreed about manual translation) and we all remember what a mess it was).

Right now I have two separate scripts, one for English and one for Spanish (0.11BEN and 0.11BES, for example).
Using Ren'py translation features means that I can write a single script (0.11B in Spanish, f.e.) and extract the text, translate the text manually as I do now, send it to the proofreaders, and put the translated text in a single independent file (English_TL). That way, if there is a bug, I only should modify one script file (0.11B) instead of two (0.11BEN and 0.11BES).
It's also easier to add new languages. For example, if Domy does the French translation, s/he only needs to take the English_TL file, rename it to French_TL, and translate it there directly, without code in the way. I can add it to the game by changing a couple of parameters.

Regarding translation, simply extracting text can make the translation work more convenient and reduce the file size. However, sometimes some dialogues will not be translated well without understanding the plot scenes. If you want to translate them well, you have to go through the game plot first.
Polysemy is really a headache.

 

[MarsUltor]

I have a question, at what point did the brain get hard boiled?

Probably at the point where you switch from verbs that require conjugation to verbs that don't . . .

 

[Trope95]

Regarding translation, simply extracting text can make the translation work more convenient and reduce the file size. However, sometimes some dialogues will not be translated well without understanding the plot scenes. If you want to translate them well, you have to go through the game plot first.
Polysemy is really a headache.

Since the main translation (to English) is done by me, with the code on my second screen, it shouldn't be a bigger problem than it is now (me being an amateur translator).
I know what I want the characters to say. I only need the translation to mean exactly that. Sometimes it's impossible and I should rewrite a small series of sentences.
Sometimes, the proofreaders change some sentences with meanings that are totally different from what I wanted. Fortunately, we have fluid communication (or as fluid as it can be due to me being in Europe and they in North and Central America)

 

[Deleted member 2572880]

Since the main translation (to English) is done by me, with the code on my second screen, it shouldn't be a bigger problem than it is now (me being an amateur translator).
I know what I want the characters to say. I only need the translation to mean exactly that. Sometimes it's impossible and I should rewrite a small series of sentences.
Sometimes, the proofreaders change some sentences with meanings that are totally different from what I wanted. Fortunately, we have fluid communication (or as fluid as it can be due to me being in Europe and they in North and Central America)

Yes, translation work is quite difficult, especially when some of the content needs to be released as soon as possible. I have also played some other multi-lingual games, and some translation problems even have the opposite meaning from the original work.
I can't read Spanish, I use the English version. I think the text in the game is of high quality and the dialogue is lively and interesting. Thank you for all your hard work. At the same time, I would like to express my respect to colleagues who voluntarily request translations into other languages.

 

[Dragon59]

Or he could go the Sisterly Lust route

I was thinking of SL myself.

As a German, I'll say how some Germans feel about weddings. For some of us, it's just pure prehistoricity. Or better said, just a piece of paper.And as mouch as i can see from some artikels incest weeding is not allowed in some regions of the usa and in some it is allowed not sure if that map is true, europe its komplett illegal that is why all vn games not allowed in germany(stream).Anway back to the topic i dint found the blinking in the game bad I liked it as it is.I hope that after some update i found out what with the second erika is

That makes me think that one option is to make an LLC for the household. After all, all marriage is is a contract that imparts certain rights and protections to the signatories. By incorporating, they could contractually get some of the legal protections.

 

[Elhemeer]

I was thinking of SL myself.

That makes me think that one option is to make an LLC for the household. After all, all marriage is is a contract that imparts certain rights and protections to the signatories. By incorporating, they could contractually get some of the legal protections.

They could give shares to everyone, and have stock splits each year when a new class fills the dorm...

 

[Trope95]

I was thinking of SL myself.

That makes me think that one option is to make an LLC for the household. After all, all marriage is is a contract that imparts certain rights and protections to the signatories. By incorporating, they could contractually get some of the legal protections.

They could give shares to everyone, and have stock splits each year when a new class fills the dorm...

You guys are the most romantic people in the world!
Let's substitute the "Will you marry me?" by "Will you be my business partner?"

Spoiler: Substitute Cass by whomever

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Other than that, the idea looks good. There is already a company that is the family base. It's easier to get a 29-sided partnership (28 LIs + MC) than the MC marrying 28 ladies... or not.

 

[rustle911]

You guys are the most romantic people in the world!
Let's substitute the "Will you marry me?" by "Will you be my business partner?"

Spoiler: Substitute Cass by whomever

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Other than that, the idea looks good. There is already a company that is the family base. It's easier to get a 29-sided partnership (28 LIs + MC) than the MC marrying 28 ladies... or not.

The uniqueness of the idea is actually pretty cool. Not something I've seen in any VN's, but it reminds me a bit of the "palimony" idea from Birdcage (Robin Williams/Nathan Lane). Prominent among same sex couples before marriage started becoming legal for them. Not that they couldn't live the married life, but that they could be partners legally from a business perspective.

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

You guys are the most romantic people in the world!
Let's substitute the "Will you marry me?" by "Will you be my business partner?"

Spoiler: Substitute Cass by whomever

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Other than that, the idea looks good. There is already a company that is the family base. It's easier to get a 29-sided partnership (28 LIs + MC) than the MC marrying 28 ladies... or not.

WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!!

 

[MrSancini]

You guys are the most romantic people in the world!
Let's substitute the "Will you marry me?" by "Will you be my business partner?"

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Other than that, the idea looks good. There is already a company that is the family base. It's easier to get a 29-sided partnership (28 LIs + MC) than the MC marrying 28 ladies... or not.

Just imagine the scene:
Miss Elizabeth, do you wanna be my business partner?

 

[S1nsational]

If we were to be going down the business partner route, which i hope we're not, but if we were, wouldn't that mean we're already married to our mom and aunt? Given we're their partner in the whole Dorm thing