VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.27.3 S3 Ch.7] [Tropecita Games]

[motseer]

I don't know . . . but, I have an inexplicable urge to wolf down a raw porterhouse and then go defoliate a forest.

Spoiler: Oh yeah, Monster Truck time...

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[Trope95]

How many girls do the main character has at this moment? 16? I think, it' s more than enough for him and for us.

And don't forget - there is not Eva and Amanda in this picture. Plus few others girls, he met and have in his harem or will have.


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Define "has", "enough", and "us", please.
At the moment of that picture, he can be in a relationship with 11 (Martha, Norah, Samantha, Emma, Eileen, Simone, Daphne, Alexia, Scarlett, Erika, and Saira) of the 18 girls in the picture. Plus Maddie and Megan. So, in total, he was in a relationship with 13 of the 22 LIs. After that, he opened another path (Debbie) and pre-opened another one (Meemaw).
I'm fairly sure Samantha wouldn't think of the MC in terms of "having" her.
Girls not yet in the harem: Amanda, Eva, Kiara, Meemaw (kinda), Kim, Betty, Kate, and Lisa. And the 6 on the last batch of students.

 

[motseer]

Define "has", "enough", and "us", please.
At the moment of that picture, he can be in a relationship with 11 (Martha, Norah, Samantha, Emma, Eileen, Simone, Daphne, Alexia, Scarlett, Erika, and Saira) of the 18 girls in the picture. Plus Maddie and Megan. So, in total, he was in a relationship with 13 of the 22 LIs. After that, he opened another path (Debbie) and pre-opened another one (Meemaw).
I'm fairly sure Samantha wouldn't think of the MC in terms of "having" her.
Girls not yet in the harem: Amanda, Eva, Kiara, Meemaw (kinda), Kim, Betty, Kate, and Lisa. And the 6 on the last batch of students.

I'm trying hard to keep up here. So, by my calculation that would be... let's see... carry the 1... ummm... two hundred and thirty seven?

Edit: I forgot. I wanted to take a crack at this one too... Define "has", "enough" So... if MC "has" 6 inches that would be "enough". Unless that's around... then it would be "plenty". How'd I do?

 

[Deleted member 2572880]

How many girls do the main character has at this moment? 16? I think, it' s more than enough for him and for us.

And don't forget - there is not Eva and Amanda in this picture. Plus few others girls, he met and have in his harem or will have.


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As a game, more choices are better. With so many girls, you don't have to fall in love with all of them, or even with any one of them, but the issue of number is left to the developers to worry about. As a player, I hope the more the merrier.

 

[Elhemeer]

How many girls do the main character has at this moment? 16? I think, it' s more than enough for him and for us.

And don't forget - there is not Eva and Amanda in this picture. Plus few others girls, he met and have in his harem or will have.


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You know, the answer to your initial question is "As many or few as I want." -- This dev is generous. If you want 3, you can stay at 3. If you want one, go for it. If you want 10, you can have 10. The choice is yours. No need to complain.

 

[Trope95]

Special Render (XVII) - Scarlett

I'll start this Special Render during the subscriber cycle with Scarlett. Lacking previews (or not wanting to publish them to avoid spoilers until every tier has access to the update) gives me the chance to get more "artistic" with these individual renders.
I always loved Scarlett, but this render, playing with lights and shadows, gives her a mystery aura I like a lot.
My idea with this one was to have her thinking about the DNA test. And waiting for the MC to get back with the result.
Full HD/4K render exclusive for subscribers.

 

[Deleted member 2572880]

Special Render (XVII) - Scarlett

I'll start this Special Render during the subscriber cycle with Scarlett. Lacking previews (or not wanting to publish them to avoid spoilers until every tier has access to the update) gives me the chance to get more "artistic" with these individual renders.
I always loved Scarlett, but this render, playing with lights and shadows, gives her a mystery aura I like a lot.
My idea with this one was to have her thinking about the DNA test. And waiting for the MC to get back with the result.
Full HD/4K render exclusive for subscribers.
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I don't know where this place is, but the two Chinese characters on the wall seem to be mirror images, and the combination is a bit strange, not like a word.

 

[Trope95]

I don't know where this place is, but the two Chinese characters on the wall seem to be mirror images, and the combination is a bit strange, not like a word.

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.

I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

 

[HornyyPussy]

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.
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I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

Well, if it's Kanji the language is obvious

 

[divingmedic]

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.
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I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

It says " Wine me, dine me, 69 me"

 

[e6mill]

They are two plaques with two kanjis each. Only showing the lower part of each lower kanji.
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I don't know any Chinese or Japanese, so I don't know if it says "Trop is a Moron" or in which language it's written

google says the left-hand one says "art" and refuses to recognize the other as text.

 

[Reniere]

I want to ask who are the main focus of this update.
This has me like:

 

[Trope95]

Well, if it's Kanji the language is obvious

I wrote kanji because "Unknown Asian language character" was too long

I want to ask who are the main focus of this update.
This has me like:
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Ordered by the number of dialogue lines:
Maddie*+, Megan*+, Amanda*, Betty*, Eileen*, Kiara*, Daphne*, Meemaw*(+), Norah(*), Alexia*, Eva, Kim*, Erika, Lisa*, Martha, Debbie*, Scarlett*, Emma, Kate*, Saira

The ones with an * have some story progression. The ones with a + have lewd scenes. I won't spoil why Meemaw's + and Norah's * are between parenthesis.

 

[johnpouljones]

Special Render (XVII) - Scarlett

I'll start this Special Render during the subscriber cycle with Scarlett. Lacking previews (or not wanting to publish them to avoid spoilers until every tier has access to the update) gives me the chance to get more "artistic" with these individual renders.
I always loved Scarlett, but this render, playing with lights and shadows, gives her a mystery aura I like a lot.
My idea with this one was to have her thinking about the DNA test. And waiting for the MC to get back with the result.
Full HD/4K render exclusive for subscribers.
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I really like your special renders. Sometimes, however, something about them offends me. I am a graphic designer and the distorted anatomical proportions immediately catch my attention. Here they are the legs. From the proportions it looks like this:

My suggestion is to swap the legs. Right knee closer to the chest.

 

[Trope95]

I really like your special renders. Sometimes, however, something about them offends me. I am a graphic designer and the distorted anatomical proportions immediately catch my attention. Here they are the legs. From the proportions it looks like this:
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My suggestion is to swap the legs. Right knee closer to the chest.

I love this kind of constructive criticism! But in this case, I think it's a visual effect produced by the deep shadows.
A change of angle (not rendered because the softlight spotlight is just above her feet and obscured them) shows there isn't any distortion in the proportions. Her right foot isn't in the position your lines show

 

[johnpouljones]

I love this kind of constructive criticism! But in this case, I think it's a visual effect produced by the deep shadows.
A change of angle (not rendered because the softlight spotlight is just above her feet and obscured them) shows there isn't any distortion in the proportions. Her right foot isn't in the position your lines show
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From this perspective it appears that you are right. Unfortunately, it's usually the visual effect that counts. And this one is confusing. Shadows may come into play, but also the hidden curve of the chaise longue. It turns out that there is more space there than visible.
And many thanks for the additional render.

 

[divingmedic]

From this perspective it appears that you are right. Unfortunately, it's usually the visual effect that counts. And this one is confusing. Shadows may come into play, but also the hidden curve of the chaise longue. It turns out that there is more space there than visible.
And many thanks for the additional render.

My only critique of it is that Scarlett has way too much clothing on

 

[johnpouljones]

My only critique of it is that Scarlett has way too much clothing on

You're probably right. But you can never have enough of Scarlett. Especially in such a romantic approach.

 

[thundersamaz]

Meemaw in cow cosplay when

 

[txe320]

Meemaw in cow cosplay when

Looks like you don't want a Meemaw but a Moomaw.